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Reviewer: cece (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 25
WHEW. That chapter is amazing, but that teaser is SO mean lol I just read everything today and I really like your story. It flows really well and I cant wait to see how you add to it. Not to mention the teaser of lemons in near future!!! :)
Reviewer: isastar (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 25
I feel so sorry for Charlie!! I can`t imagine going through something like this. And what about the wolves? The Cullens technically broke the treaty, but are the wolves aware of it ? I´m so curious how your story will develop further
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 25
Wow, that was an amazing chapter! Cn't wait for more :)
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 25
Oh the wolves are coming to play! And it looks like Eddie is gonna play too. hehe
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 25
omg! i love the teaser :]
and is jacob circling the house?! please update :]
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 21
I'm loving this confident in the bedroom Edward :) Yum, yum, yum!!!
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 20
Loved it! I had to laugh when Bella had bought an Anne Rice book though, lol. Edward playing piano was so romantic, and the kiss at the end, that was so lovely. Just a shame Charlie had to come along to spoil it.
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 25
hmm.. werewolf complications.... should be interesting... i'm reading when i should be packing for vacation.. hehe
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 25
Love the teaser......Since Edward isn't a virgin, I'm hoping he'll make love to Bella........She sure needs some love and comfort :)
Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 25
this is so sad. i feel bad for charlie, everything he is feeling, losing his only son at the hands of his only daughter. very sad for both of them...hope renee is going to comfort bella when she gets there..
and i cant wait for the next chapter... nice little teaser!!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 25
Bella did a great job with her part in the accident, but I feel really bad for her because of the way Charlie is acting toward her. I realize that everyone grieves in their own way, but it still makes me sad.
Werewolves, huh? Uh oh! And it sounds like Bella and Edward get hot and heavy in the next chapter...bring on the smut! *grins wickedly*
p.s. love the Anchorman reference!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 25
Once again, Bella will be the one to suffer. Charlie will unwittingly blame her for causing this accident even though it's just that. Sad!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 25
Uh oh! Forgot about the wolves. Love the teaser! ;-)
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 24
oh how sad for bella. I've always heard of the deep connection twins have-I can only imagine what she must be going through. And then to add that she was about to lose her soulmate as well. Wow.
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 23
Well they could have just hit black ice or a slick part of the road that caused their hydroplaning, but it was evident thar Em would have to cross to the other side sooner or later. How is this gonna play out with Charlie? How are they gonna play his death?
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 21
Poor Bella, how can she not be intimidated by the knowledge that Edward had been physically intimate with the epitomy of what males perceive as female perfection incarnate in Rosalie.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 25
Great story. Please update soon
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 25
Poor Charlie, my heart breaks for him!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 25
I feel so sorry for Bella. Charlie is not being very loving to her but I also understand where he is coming from. Great chapter. Your story is getting better and better every time I read it.
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 20
That was too funny. Charlie finally makes an appearance and oh what a debut it was. This is a great story.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 25
Another great chapter.
Love the "tease" for the next chapter - so looking forward to it!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 25
wow intense chapter. hopefully everything will be ok. can't wait for more
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 25
Poor Charlie!!!!
Can't wait for more.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 19
I guess Jessica is necessary she provides comic relief. I'm still reeling from the anorexic line.
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 16
At last!
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