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Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 28
i lik ehis deal...but the teaser makes me sad.
can't wait for more
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 28
Oh no! What will they do now? This was a great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 28
Ah the Bella wants to be changed conversation! I'm curoius what will happen and what bella will do since it seems like Charlie doesn't want her to live with him anymore!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 28
Charlie is being a jerk!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 28
"I'll go stick my hands in monkey crap"?? HAHAHAHAHA!!! that is PRICELESS!!!
I see by the teaser that Charlie is being a poopyhead :( Poor Bella! She's gonna have to crash at the Cullens' house and have lots of lots of bootay. Hooray!
Glad Emmett's doing so well. I know this is a B/E story, but....are we gonna get a chappie on Rose and Emm gettin' busy??? pleeeze??
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 28
Another good chapter.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 28
wow that teaser! it makes me sad! but great chapter! im glad edward isnt totally against changing bella! update soon!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 28
That teaser...can't wait to see the circumstance that has Charlie saying that!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 28
They're making the best out of a sad situation, but I have to admit in being slightly disappointed in Charlie.
Edward came up with an excellent compromise, I must say.
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 28
Sad chapter but good conversation on future changes.
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 28
NO! CHARLIE! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO .......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
as u can c im very upset
~ B
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 28
What a twist with Charlie? Thanks for letting Edward compromise with Bella about being turned. Hopefully Bella will runaway instead of going to her mother's house.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 28
I'm glad your Edward is more open to discussion about Bella's change. But I'm worried because of your teaser...I hope Edward or Bella can either convince Charlie to let Bella stay, or that the Cullens can take her in. Can't wait for the next update!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 28
Oh no! Poor Bella. The teaser for the next chapter is heartbreaking. I love your story. The compromise between Bella and Edward was a good one. I am anxious to read what happens next.
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 28
It's good Bella had a day away from everything. I hate that Charlie is drawing back from her. I've been thinking how awful for Charlie and Renee to lose both their children, but now I'm not so sure.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 28
Poor Bella. Good chapter.
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 28
Thanks so much! It was wonderful! Loved the teaser btw! Charlie needs to talk to Emmy! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 28
They have their date... :-)
Reviewer: aerialla (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 27
I am incredibly enjoying this story so far. It has some unique twists that I have not read before. I will be keeping an eye out for all updates.
Aerialla
Reviewer: Kristinwd40 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 27
I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 27
edward is in trouble... he's gonna have a bella who won't take no for an answer on his hands...
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 27
Great Story!! I can't wait for the upcoming chapters!!
Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 17
Awww that was sweet!! Edwards probably smiled more in this chapter that the others...I love how happy and smiley he was at the beginning, and Alice too...adorable!!
So Bella obv found out from Jacob, and pieced everything together about Edward...im intrigued as to how Rosalie will act on Emmett...
But before that....MORE E/B pleeeeeeeeeeeease
Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 27
LOL that was soo Emmett good work..
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 27
Awesome chapter. You gotta love Emmett; he keeps it simple. Unlike Edward... :-/
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