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Reviewer: JanCullen86 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter! I like how we see here that Rosalie and Emmett are supposed to be together. It will be interesting when he moves to Forks.
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 7
I think that the whole sex thing will have to be addressed, even if not too graphically. In SM Twilighht saga the relationship between E&B is defined by their virginity, particularly Edward's. Frustration, pruderie, denial, passion and the big unknown are an essential part of the novels. Now we have him sexually experienced and adjusted, if not really in love with Rosalie. When he will discover that Bella's is his soulmate, albeit human, I think that his physical desire for her will have to be different in quality, much more compelling, on different plane, really. And when, if, they manage to express themselves physically (with denial, guilt and whatever you willl create to slow the process of them eventually getting to it ) the different plane will have to be expressed.
Good luck, it will be a difficult task. I am looking forward to it.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I've actually written most of this already, and Bella and Edward's sexual relationship is VERY different from the books, because this is not your typical sexually repressed Edward, and Bella is not his singer, so he has no problems getting close to her. That, and insecure Bella has to deal with the fact that Edward has been having sex with the most gorgeous woman on the planet for the past 70 years and she's totally inexperienced.
Anyway, I hope you like how I portray it once it gets to that point.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 7
I can't wait for your Emmett.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 7
A very interesting twist on a wonderful story. Can'twait to read more!!
Reviewer: Hiraedd (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 7
omg! don't leave me hanging for long, lol. Love it!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 7
awesome! can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 7
NICE............
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm so excited for the next chapter. Can't wait to find out how this all plays out!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 7
You definately got to finish this story, because just the thought of E/R is going to ruin my dreams. Please update soon. Very interesting.
Reviewer: Sydney (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 7
Finish it i want to understand it and the part with edward and roseile as gross but still :)
Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 7
ooohhh I like that you are bringing Emmett into it already. I was thinking we would really end up waiting til spring!
can't wait for more. this is not an interesting twist and despite the whole E/R yuckiness I think I can hold out for the goods ;)
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 7
Yay! I'm really intrigued by your story and am not a E/R fan. Can't wait for Emmett!
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 7
Yeah!! I'm glad tht Emmett will be arriving soon! He is always one of my favorites!! Another great chapter...I can't wait to read the next one.
Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 7
OooooooooO I cant wait to meet Emmet - I'm intregued to see if he'll be portrayed similar to the way he is in the books and other fictions =]
Twas a great add hun, can't wait for the next update! x
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ewww to the sex :D LOL....Edward and Rose just SO shouldn't be doing that...bad, bad, bad!! Oh! I hate to ask because I'm afraid of the answer...but are they married?! I'm seriously hoping not. I don't get that impression, but I have to know.
I love that Edward has grown attached to Bella...addicted is good :D lol. His brooding is so adorable and one of the things I enjoy the most about him. Well done! :)
I love that Alice is supporting Edward. Not that I'm surprised, of course. I love Alice.
I'm SO excited about Emmett! I can't wait to meet him...I can't wait for more because this should SO be interesting, just as Edward said :D lol.
Update soon. Oh, and yes...Long chapters are awesome. But I have to say that your short chapters are very well written, so no worries :)
Author's Response: Thank you! And no, I think it was chapter 4 that I mentioned they weren't married in 1935, and they never got married after that. Bella will ask him about this later. Edward basically thinks Rose doesn't want to get married cause she was raped by her fiance, thus ruining the idea of marriage for her. And he doesn't press the issue, because what Rosalie wants, Rosalie gets - except for Emmett, of course :(
Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 4
agh all this rosalie love stuff makes me sick!
I'm having a hard time cope but I'll deal :)
Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 7
Yay! Can't wait to meet Em.
Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG ROSALIE!!!!
/dies
Reviewer: angelvamp (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 7
I really like this story, it's different. Can't wait for Emmett!
Reviewer: Sydney (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 6
I don't get it but i want to. Finish it :)
Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
OK, soooo, I started reading this story on here and then found it on ff.net yesterday and WOWOWOWOWOW!!!!! I loooove it!!! It is absolutely awesome, such a super fun and easy read, I flew through it in a few hours! I tried to leave a review there, but ff was giving me a bunch of error messages booo on them =[ ANYWAY, just wanted to say that you ROCK, and the story is just full of awesome awesomeness lol!!!! And Holy CRAP, talk about a cliffy in CH 36!!!!!!!! Need more NOOOOWWWW please!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! I just figured out how everything is going to end, and I'm very excited for the next set of chapters. I hope you like them!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 6
(sing it with me!) "Emmett...Emmett Crocket! King of the wild frontier!!"
Bummer. Edward's screwed now - he's stuck with Rosalie! I would have taken my chances with solitude and no sex to shake her off!!
More chappies, please. :)
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 5
intriguing twist!
Reviewer: ellie__ox (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 6
omggggg, this is so good.
whens emmett coming into the story? :)
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 6
i really like the way this story is moving along. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Definitely adding this to my favorites list.
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