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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Such a Waste

Hope you update soon!!!

Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 09:35 AM · On: The Past

Update soon please :)



Author's Response:

Soon, promise!

Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 01:52 PM · On: The Past

I wonder how Bella will react to James. Edward really does need to stop treating her like a child though, I agree with her on that. It's really good so far, I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind review! Next chapter is awaiting queue... please keep an eye for it! Thanks!

Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 08:45 PM · On: The Past

I just finished reading everything posted and I really like where this is going.  I'm relieved that Edward and Bella stopped being idiots and admitted their feelings.  I can only handle so much of that angst (since SM did so much of it), I like to see things progress.  Thank you for that. :)

I'm sorry life has been a bit difficult for you lately and it's causing a bit of writers block.  I do hope you are able to get through things and provide more of this story soon.  Thanks for posting!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I can't handle writing angst for too long...! Thank you for the support and understanding... I have some of the new chapter written, I'm hoping to have it completed by this coming weeked... so, look out for it! Thanks again for reviewing on most of my stories... it's nice to have loyal readers!

B

Reviewer: robsgirl (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Such a Waste

I like the story, however your rating is deceiving.  This is very PG, not NC-17.  Where's the smut?  Where's the hot vampire sex?  I surely hope we're building up to it, otherwise, I like it so far!  I'll just patiently wait for the NC-17 to kick in!



Author's Response:

It is for later chapters... I promise, it is to come! :D

Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 02:16 PM · On: Such a Waste


Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 10:49 AM · On: The Past

Jake and James on the same day.  I'm dying to know how she will respond to the news about James.  Now that Jake is close to so many vamps will he turn into a wolf (he could always tear James apart.  )?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your wonderful reviews!! Anyways, Jake is AH in this story... I really didn't want to go into the whole Wolf/Vamp issue. :) New chapter soon... the story takes a different turn.

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 10:01 AM · On: Alaska and a Branch

I love the way you turned the tables with 
Bella having the confidence and Edward being the insecure one.   

Author's Response:

Thank you. I like being different and difficult!! :D

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 09:33 AM · On: Scared, Acceptance & Hope

It"s really sweet how they can read each others minds through touch.  I assume there is no wolf pack yet. 

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 06:53 AM · On: The Attacker Bites

You are really good and you are not making this easy.  The more I read the more questions I have. 

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 05:49 AM · On: Bitter Decision

My curiosity is even more piqued, if possible. 

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 05:18 AM · On: Such a Waste

This reminds me of a new TV show where they give you just enough information to have a bunch of questions.  When is this taking place?  Who is this stranger?  Where is Edward?  etc.....  I better get to the next chapter if I want answers.  I'm glad I don't have to wait for updates - yet. Oh yeah, good start. 

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 01:00 PM · On: The Past

Glad to see that you have continued your story. This chapter was good. I didn't expect the Jacob part at all. Nice twist having James come back.

Author's Response: Thank you for review, it really helps. :) Hopefully the next chapter won't be too far off.

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 08:39 AM · On: The Past

So she ran into Jake and James in the same day, talk about her past!

Author's Response: Haha, yes... Bella's not going to have a good day, is she? Thanks sooo much for reveiwing!

Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 11:57 PM · On: The Past

dude!! you know how much I loved bella standing up for herself! chick needs to grow some and step up!! :P

....

awww dude... we keep each other sane... if you would call "sane" the conversations we have about a certain sex hair individual...

..... oh sorry got distracted for a moment LOL

anyways.. great chapter babe!



Author's Response: Why thank you, yes a certain someone always happens to distract us, doesn't he? Damn him and his pretty hair.

Reviewer: xx_bella_xx_cullen_xx (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 08:56 AM · On: A Ruined Surprise

I loved it ^^
<3 Bella Bebe

Author's Response: Thank you! New chapter to be out soon!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 10:32 AM · On: A Ruined Surprise

Wow, so her power is getting stronger, very cool!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 03:01 PM · On: A Ruined Surprise

I love the story I hope you continue!   Do a diff.  wedding and bring back Ja,es.  Let her remember how she was changed abandoned for dead I loved the story and hope to read more from you!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! James & Jacob will both make an apperance and very, very soon - promise! New chapters and new stories are on the way... I just need time to write them all! LOL.

Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 06:18 AM · On: A Ruined Surprise

Nice to see another post of this story - I've missed it! The fluff was cute and I'm looking forward to Bella's first day of college.

Thanks for sharing :-)



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review - I'm glad you enjoyed the fluff. The first day will be interesting to say the least. :)

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 02:54 AM · On: Edward's Insecurities and Bella's Goodbye

lol i love the line:

"your average one hundred year old sulking vampire"

average...vampire?



Author's Response: A little odd, isn't it? Lol, thank so much for reviewing!! I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story.

Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 05:45 PM · On: A Ruined Surprise

I like the fluff.  It is necessary from time to time.  It's nice to see where Bella and Edward are in their relationship now.  I'm just waiting for the big bad to happen, cause I know something is coming.

Author's Response: Why thank you! The big bad is going to be a dbl whammy and it's going to be awesome, promise. Thank you so much for being a loyal R&R-er. Lol.

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 01:37 PM · On: A Ruined Surprise

Awesome chapter. Love it that they are together! Alice is such a Alice! More please!

Author's Response: Soon! I'm glad your enjoying the story so far... :)

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 12:05 PM · On: A Ruined Surprise

Fluffy chapters are good too....thanks for updating.

Author's Response: Your welcome. Thanks for taking time to R&R.

Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 11:16 AM · On: A Ruined Surprise

Thanks for continuing this, I was afraid it was going to stay incomplete forever.

Author's Response: I plan on finishing it - life just happens to get in my way at times. Many more chapters to come, I promise. Thanks for R&Ring.

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 10:51 AM · On: A Ruined Surprise

Fluffy!  But fluff is good in certain doses.  And necessary, I mean it can't be all gloom and doom right?  :-) 

Author's Response: Exactly! I'm glad this chapter was a break from all the gloom and doom. Thank you so much for reviewing! Makes me smile.

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