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Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 10

Slut.
~ B

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 29

That was wonderful!  I LOVED the part where Edward surprised himself by saying he'd propose on New Year's!  Funny stuff!

Reviewer: strawberryfruitsnaxs (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 30

I loved the proposal. How Edward had the ring in his jacket and he didn't want Bella to get his jacket. Stupid Lauren that BITCH!! Emmett's not holding me back so I get to punch her. God I just want to kick her scrawny ass and pull out her bleached roots. Great story! I'm sad it's almost over.



Author's Response:

hahah--maybe i'll sic YOU on lauren--you seem to have some very strong feelings on the subject, haha.  i'm glad you enjoyed the proposal, though.  thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 30

That BITCH!!! How dare she drug Edward! Well at least Emmett and Bella were there to stop her from getting her hands any further on his person!

And I had no doubt that these two would not have a conventional proposal, but it was perfect, even on the bathroom floor, post puking! LOL

LOVED IT!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

right?  god, i hate lauren.  i'm glad you liked the proposal, though.  they are who they are, haha.  thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 30

Ha, I honestly didn't think Edward would go through with the proposal after all! But it's good he did, it was just right for them. I'm sad the story is wrapping up soon but all good things must come to an end, right?



Author's Response:

thank you!  and, sadly, yes, all good things have to come to an end.  i'm glady you've been here for the ride, though :)

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 30

Oh what a proposal.  LOL  Mine?  My husband took me to Jackson Hold, WY for a day trip where we went to get old time photos taken (you know the sepia ones where your dressed in cowboy clothes) when they positioned us to take the pics they told us to get ready on the count of three they would take the pic, when they started counting my husband started shaking his head and said "No, no, no I am not ready yet."  Then he got down on one knee and asked me to be his wife as they took the picture then with the ring box in his hand, him on his knee and me crying saying yes.  They took another actual photo after he put the ring on my finger and then proceeded to give us the two photos and the negatives so we could use them for our invitations, all for free.  No one had ever been proposed to in their shop before.  They thought it was pretty neat.  ;)



Author's Response:

wow, that is an AWESOME proposal story.  i can honestly say that i've never heard one like it before :)  too cute for words.  and i'm glad you enjoyed the proposal...thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 30

I loved it. It was definately their style.



Author's Response:

haha, thank you -- i'm glad you approve :)

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 30

This was a great proposal for them because nothing ever goes as planned with these two. i can't wait to see what comes next.



Author's Response:

no, it doesn't...i'm glad you felt good about it, though :)  and thanks for reviewing, per usual!

Reviewer: vashbak (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 30

Ever since we started dating six years ago every holiday my husband and I watch the Charlie Brown Peanut's specials on TV.

In August 2007 we had just moved into our first apartment together.  Two months later we had planned to spend our first Halloween living together watching It's the Great Pumpkin Charlie Brown and passing out candy to the neighborhood kids.

He came home from work on Halloween that day carrying a pumpkin.  He gave me the pumpkin and I opened the top and inside was a rock with a paper wrapped around it saying "Will you marry me?" and when I looked up he was on one knee with a ring box.  So we joke now that "I got a rock" just like Charlie Brown when he went trick-or-treating.

So, one year later we were married on Halloween.  We used the seeds from my engagement pumpkin to grow pumpkins to carve as jack-o-lanterns for our centerpieces and gave out those seeds as favors to our family and friends.  So every year we can grow our own pumpkins to carve while we watch Charlie Brown.

If it wasn't my own life I would laugh at how cheesy we probably sound to people...but I have to admit, cheesy or not...I love it.



Author's Response:

okay, that maybe cheesy, but i'm ALL about it :)  seriously, it's too cute for words.

Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 30

It was the sweetest chapter. I was not expecting that though. But it worked for them. I really really think you put a small part in the next chapter about Rose, Alice, and Bella getting revenge on Lauren. That would hilarious.

I hate that this is almost over. Will there be a sequel like maybe a child, her being pregnant and entertaining.

Update fast please.



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  i'm glad i could surprise you in a good way :)  alas, no--there will be no sequel, but..i am writing another story?  i know it's not really the same, seeing as they're going to be different characters...but...well, it'll be me?  yeah...no, i've got nothing for you.

Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 30

Aww! I dunno what I love more-Edwards proposal, how you broaden my taste in music w/ each chapter or this story in general :) Great Job! Sad to see it end, but look forward to what else you may decide to write.



Author's Response:

wow, thank you so much!  and...good/exciting news...i have another story in the works already.  so, put me on author alert or keep an eye out for it.  your encouragement means a lot :)

Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 30

You so had me worried there, but Em saved the day.  Of course, I do believe Lauren should be prosecuted under the full extent of the law; oh well.  Maybe her being trapped in a crap marriage during the epi will do?

The bathroom proposal was completely Edward and Bella!

Kate

 

 



Author's Response:

hahah--we'll see about lauren.  i like the idea about being trapped in a crap marriage, though, haha.  a lot. ;)  thanks for the review!

Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 30

very sweet

my husband proposed while we were watching Laurence Olivier and Joan Fontaine in "Rebecca"



Author's Response:

aw, that's one of my favorite movies :)

Reviewer: jessnab (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 30

I miss Carlisle. I was a little scared at the Lauren part , but the porposal was funny



Author's Response:

is it bad that i missed carlisle, too?  as i was writing this chapter, i was like...how can i possibly involve carlisle?  alas, it didn't work out.  i think he's reappearing in the next chapter, though...so, that's exciting, haha.  glad you enjoyed the proposal, though -- thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 30

the best proposal ever....can't wait for more



Author's Response:

aw, thank you!

Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 30

Lauren was such a slut! Seriously drug a gye to hook up ???

But the proposal was like bella and edward... great for them XD

I'm a bit sad to read about the chapter left but the story mus end one day.

And btw i've no dream proposal, i'm the type of girl who love going withe the flow, all hapen in good time ^^

 



Author's Response:

hmm, yes - lauren IS a slut.  and can i just say that (like edward) i, too, have been roofied by a girl.  sooo a bunch of the stuff was from RL experience (yes, i drank a glass of listerine).  :)

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 30

awsome!But I REALLY think Lauren should get some sort of payback!

Author's Response:

thank you!  and...agreed :)

Reviewer: Colena (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 30

So beautiful this chapter!! I loved it=) I have to confess that I didn't think that Edward was going to propose on the bathroom floor but...it's romantic in a different way lol

Oh no, only 2 chapters? I'm gonna miss this story! I look forward to read the next chapter;)

 



Author's Response:

haha, thank you!  i'm glad you enjoyed it :)  and...there may only be 2 chapters left, but i'm already working on a new story...so, that's good, right?

Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 30

Love, love, love! Great chapter! I love this story!



Author's Response:

thank you!  i love YOU!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 30

Hello :)  I am somewhat comatose (long and UGLY day!) but I wanted to give you a quick, heartfelt AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! :)))  Of course their affiance-ing was a cluster**** - that's how they roll. 8)  I was actually worried that Tanya might get a hold of the ring!!  and for the record:

I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT NEITHER ROSALIE NOR BELLA PUNCHED THAT HO IN THE MOUTH!!  C'mon now! Drugging Proposeward??? ruining his big evening?  That was SOO deserving of having a fist introduce your incisors to your uvula!!! kerPOW!!!!!!!!  I'm not pro-violence, but that ho got it comin'!!!  Seriously. Punch right in the face, bloody the mouth, cut the lip, break the nose...BAMBAMBAM!  One shot, lemme at her!!! >:>

Whew. I got a bit worked up there!! :) 

Thank you for not letting Tanya get her hooks into him - Edward would need to be de-loused by the CDC. *shudder*  I don't want drama for these kids, not when so many good things are rockin' the house!

Must go sleepy now. zzzzzzz ;)



Author's Response:

aw, thank you!  you may have been comatose, but your review was absolutely delightful :)  haha.  now get some sleep! 

Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 30

That was great... Very memorable.

Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: Myffieberry (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 30

Please let there be a sequel! Puhlease!!



Author's Response:

alas, there will be no sequel...but if you enjoy my writing, i've already started another story...i know it's not the same, but...it's something?

Reviewer: LisaV (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 30

My husband proposed to me in the shower! It was classic. Love how the proposal went in this chapter!

Author's Response:

hahah that IS classic.  that almost tops e/b ;)

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 30

My proposal was a complete surprise.

He took me to our neighborhood park, where we had played as children. We were both 21 at the time. He pushed me on the swings and held me while going down the slide. It was really an adorable date, and I told him so. We have a small lake there, so he took me over to it. We sat on one of the benches, and watched the sunset. He asked me if I remembered our first date. Which I did, it had been 6 years before and we were still in high school. We went to a movie and ended up at the very same park on the very same bench, star gazing. When I turned to face him he hand the box open in the hand that wasn't wrapped around me, and he told me that he knew he would marry me since he was six years old. Even though I was a brat and constantly told him that I hated him, even though the first time he asked me out in high school, I told him no because I already had plan with someone, even though I threw up on him after a roller coaster ride, even though I cut off all my long hair that he LOVED (I had recently got my hair cut in a sling bob after having it LONG, like down to my ass long for years) and that even though we didn't have the perfect relationship he couldn't ever be with anyone else.

Let's just say after sobbing through it all, when he finally asked if I would marry him, I knocked him off the bench when I hugged him and screamed yes.

I loved this chapter. Skanky Lauren, I knew she was up to no good, as soon as she came back into the story. I'm so glad that you wrote it this way, it could been sooo angsty and I would've cried, all my fics are in heartfail mode right now. ::sighs::

They really are perfect for each other.



Author's Response:

that's absolutely adorable, first of all.  tell your husband REALLY good job from me, haha.

also--i totally know what you mean about all of the fics being in heartfail mode right now.  it's like i'm afraid to read updates for fear that everything is going to fall even more to shit.   so, i'm glad that i could contain the drama for you, haha.

thanks so much for all the love :)

Reviewer: il-bel-mondo (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 30

YAY Can I say how frikken awesome you are...AGAIN???  You rock...can;t wait to see Alice's reaction..



Author's Response:

thanks, darlin'!  glad you enjoyed it :)

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