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Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 31

WTF????!!!  Okay, seriously, you end it there?  AGH!!!  And please tell me we'll get Bella's fantasy, too!  I'm really going to miss this story.  Once it's all complete, I'm rereading yet again!  This couple has been so much fun to get to know.  Thank you for sharing them with us!

Kat

Reviewer: twihards_unite (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 31

omg that is so hilarious!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!

nice way to end the chapter, it's a cliffie, but a hilarious one...let me guess, emmett? lol, update soon!

Reviewer: Nannonv (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 31

Awesome ending!  Can't wait to see what that is all about!

Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 31

Somebody or everybody must have gotten to Lauren. Love it.

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 31

wtf? how did they end up in jail?

I love this story and am sad to see it come to an end. I love the fact that their relationship did have that circular note to it--with the bathroom floor being the scene of the crime.

My favorite part was when Carlisle was really excited about his hot new daughter in law.

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 31

Wow! That's probably the best thing to cockblock the couple with. As always, I love Edward's POV. Very funny and honest. Great chapter! Love the wedding plans so far

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 31

Well, I love the sex scene and that the family knows about the engagement...The family is in jaiL????  I have a guess...could it be related to revenge against Lauren for giving Edward the roofie and trying to seduce him?????? I hope so, because I am still seriously pissed off about that! 

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 31

oh that would suck. excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 31

OMG! I am so on the edge of my seat, I need to know what happened to land them all in Jail!! Can't wait for the next update!

And I do think it was sweet and very Bella and Edward that they got Engaged on the bathroom floor.

Loving it so far!

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 31

I'm glad they told the truth about their proposal.  And jail?  Seriously?

Reviewer: GoEdwardGo (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 31

I have truly enjoyed Off Limits. I know it’s almost over and wanted to tell you that for me, it’s been a great story, full of love & life, growing & learning, lemons & laughter. Thank you for sharing it with us.



I love this Edward & Bella.  I especially love this Carlisle.  This chapter was a great combination of sweetness and humor.  I laughed so hard and ohmigod, you're killing me!



My favorite moments of brilliance:


 


Alice: ”Jesus titty fucking Christ, Bella!” and “Wait, what about a roofie?” Alice just kills me.


 


Carlisle: “Holy fucking shit, Edward, did you nab me that super hot daughter-in-law?”  If you ever do an outtake of Off Limits, it would be really interesting to write it from Carlisle’s POV. Just imagine, how much lemony fun he and Esme must experience in this world.  


 


Edward: “That’s a FUCK YES to improvisation.” and “My best friend was getting shot in the face in the VERY near future.”  I love naughty Edward and it doesn’t hurt that he is so frickin’ hot!


 


And the BEST line of all:


Bella: “Yeah, we have to go bail your family out of jail.”

Reviewer: 2SHOTS2BEERS82 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 31

aother great chapter!! i cant wait to see what happens next!!!! i am sooo sad to see the story ending but thats life :) you are awesome!!!

 

 

 

-b

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 31

That was an unexpected ending to the chapter!  Great job.

Reviewer: rere90 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 31

You mean the whole family? Incluing Carlise and Esme? How the hell did they end up in jail? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 31

I would love to hear the end story. The sex was super hot!!!! Loved it!!!

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 31

ROFTLMAO!

OMG!

 

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 31

Hahaha, what did they do? So funny! I luv Edward and Bella's unconventional ways. Can't wait for the end, though a bit sad to say goodbye to this fic. Everyone's so adorable. Looking forward to more from you.

Reviewer: strawberryfruitsnaxs (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 31

HOW DARE YOU LEAVE US WITH A CLIFFHANGER!!!! OMIGOSH!!! I can't wait for the next one. This story is awesome, sad it's almost over.

Reviewer: Princess (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 31

Come on, it wouldn't have taken them that long to finish up!  I'm sure that the others would not have mind waiting!

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 31

WTF!?

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 30

I loved the proposal, why should they do anything conventionally? :) Edward and Bella are one of a kind!

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 30

NOOOOOOO!   Is it really ending so soon?  I'm going to cry! 

Kat



Author's Response:

no, don't cry! but, yes, it is ending soon....i do have another story in the works, though...i know it's not the same thing, but...i'm sorry!

Reviewer: smileyirish14 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 30

Freaking fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: sweetpea1118 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 30

LOL, ok I was also proposed to in the bathroom but my hubby wasn't recovering from a roofie. I was in the shower geting ready to go to his family's for a Christmas party and I heard him come (I thought to shave). When I peeked around the shower curtain the wierd man I married was on one knee on the bathroom floor with an engagement ring in one hand and while he didn't list the reasons he loves me, it was the sweetest and funniest things I've ever seen. How could I possibly say no?

Great story so far. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

okay, that's adorably hilarious.  thanks so much for sharing :)

Reviewer: a_rainy_day (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 30

You might think you're trying to fool us. Give us a calamity-filled New Year's Eve where everything poor Edward doesn't want to happen happens. Roofies, the ring falling to the floor, Bella discovering his plans before he has the pleasure to ask in his own way, vomiting.

Bella stayed up with him all night, stayed right there as he was sick and waking up moaning, an interrupted and uncomfortable rest, but through it all, she stayed. That is love. Real love. And it couldn't have been more endearing, beautiful, and more romantic if you had written it any other way.

Love you.



Author's Response:

haha, right?  that's what i'm talking about...you know it's love if you're willing to spend the night on the bathroom floor with a vomiting, roofied edward.  i'm really glad you enjoyed it, though :)

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