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Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 4
Trust me when I say I CAN'T wait for the next chapter! I can't wait for the gig, either. Looking forward to it!
Reviewer: miniego (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 4
Well you surely did not disappoint. The bathroom scene has to be the best for me so far in this fic. I saw it playing in my head, as if I was watching a certain scene in a movie.
The beat in this story does not miss a note. I love the vulnerability you show between Edward and Bella. Then you have me on the verge of peeing in my pants right when Edward does that last bit. I had no idea Edward was going to do that. It completely shocked me. This is a good thing, because it keeps me coming back for more.
Please update soon. :)
Author's Response: wow, thank you so much. sincerely, i see everything in my head like a movie (i'm actually an aspiring screenwriter), so i'm glad that came across!
haha, and i'm glad edward could surprise you. he surprised me, too, but...i just kinda went with it.
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
holy fuck, emmett and Jasper are gunna kill him!! God the performance is gunna be awkward!! cant wait for more!! :D wonder whats gunna happen between them if you get what i mean hehe!
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 4
Gah! Edward is already breaking the rule! Thats funny. I kind of wished Edward would have suffered a little bit more. Its quite funny. Please post the next chapter!
Author's Response: oh, don't you worry...there will definitely be some more edward suffering (evil laugh!).
Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
Whoa, interesting place to end it. Good chapter, love the way Edward argues with himself ;) Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 4
I love this story, I hope you keep the chapters coming!
Reviewer: alicedances (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 4
Really enjoying this so far. There are quite a few Edward-and-Bella-in-a-band stories out there, but this one's got just a different enough spin that I'm really liking it. :)
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 4
THAT was one of the HOTTEST things I've EVER read, OMFG! I was honestly holding my breath there at the end. I love the way these characters speak to you and they way you share their experiences. Thanks so much for your quick update. I couldn't believe it, but I sincerely appreciate it. WE'RE NOT WORTHY, lol! But we really enjoy it when you show us the love. YOU ROCK!
Author's Response: hahah, your review made me blush so bad that my roommate asked me what i was reading. thank you a million times. actually, i wasn't planning on updating so quickly, but my beta is the fastest validator in all of the land, apparently.
i'm definitely spoiling you guys with the fast updates, so i may just keep y'all waiting for the next chapter. haha, not too long, i promise (because as a reader, i know how frustrating it is to wait for updates), but...maybe another day or two :)
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 4
as Angela said before school one day "OH.MY.GOD."
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 4
Oh my gosh! I was not expecting that! This story is really intriguing! Please put up the next chapter quick. You have me spoiled now with your quick updates.
Author's Response: i really have spoiled you guys :-P ...but, i'm just having so much fun writing this story, and i can't wait to share with everyone.
Reviewer: lady jane (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 4
ugh!!!!!!! i hate waiting!!! love the story though!!!!
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 4
wow! That was a fast update, not that I'm complaining! hah! Maybe there is a secret man-slut side of you because Edward's POV is great. Who wouldn't want to go around swearing and talking about Nana Cullen + blue balls? =) I'm sure there's a man-slut in all of us. Can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter!
Author's Response: haha, yeah...i wasn't anticipating that fast of an update either, but...i really wanted to put up that chapter, haha--i'm going to have to hold out for longer (CLEARLY there's some man-slut in me, hehe). thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
I have the stupidest grin on my face right now! WOO-HOO!!!!
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 4
Ah Edward ... always thinking with your ...
anyways ... Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 4
Ahhhhhhh! Go Edward! Although that's kind of an ... erm... unconventional way of complimenting a woman. Jasper and Emmett are gonna be sooooo mad! Hehehe.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
I have to say that I'm having a blast reading this. I absolutely love this Edward. Every word out of his mouth cracks me up. I truly can't wait to read more! WOO-HOO!
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you! i've always been pretty good at angst and drama, but i had never really attempted writing comedy before. i'm glad that you're enjoying my extremely inappropriate sense of humor (yes, this edward and i are pretty similar...).
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 3
I don't like the fact that Edward is a man-slut. But, I do like the fact that they are both so different, yet so drawn to each other. I love hearing Edward's thoughts. They are extremely raw, vulger, and funny!
Update soon!
Author's Response: you know what's terrible? --i have such an easier time writing edward's pov than bellas....i guess i'm a horny guy at heart? haha. and on another note, i like to think of edward as a reformed man-slut now that bella's in the picture...you'll see :)
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 3
Well there is a kinky side to Bella after all!!! Who would have thought that could be possilbe.
About Edward, rumors are one thing but for it to be confirmed like it was, ouch. All but Bella knew almost everything before the game, now all is out in the open. Of one thing Bella seems to be sure right now, she has to stay away from Edward, will both of them be able to?
Author's Response: i didn't get a slutty senior spring break, so i'm living vicariously through bella, haha. and i do like that everything's laid out on the table for both of them---they're getting to know one another really fast and really well, which makes it even harder to live up to one another's expectations...
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 3
this is a fun one!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 3
my guess is bella will break that promise. but thets just me. i love it. update soon
Author's Response: i know if i were bella, i'd break it ;)
Reviewer: miniego (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 3
The dialogue is absolutely hilarious. I'm a giggling fool. Great read.
Please update soon. :)
Author's Response: my heart just expanded 100x over. i write scripts, usually, so dialogue is what i've spent the most time on before this. your comment seriously just made my day :) and another update is definitely coming soon!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
Awesome................More Plese........maybe a bella and Edward kiss????????
Author's Response: maybe....hahaha.
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 3
That last line sounded like some famous last words to me :-). Loved the game and the confessions and can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Kate17 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 3
That was a really good chapter!! I was cracking up regarding the reason Alice jumped out of Edward's lap so quickly.
Author's Response: thank you! nothing like feeling your brother's boner to get you off his lap, right? hahah. maybe it makes me a little bit of a perv, but i thought that would be hilarious.
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter!
I'm really looking forward to them getting into the music. There's so much passion in music anyway and when you add people who are already physically attracted to each other it's just fuel to the flame. At their first performance they're going to need the fire department to put out the flames that will be dancing around on the stage.
PLEASE, don't make us wait too long, update SOON!
Author's Response: thank you! in fact, the whole reason i started this story is that i would listen to my favorite music and imagine how you could put them together to tell a story. you'll see as the story develops, songs are added and removed from the set list for a reason :) i'm glad you're enjoying this as muc has i enjoy writing it!
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