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Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
Ah what a tangled web they weave, as Bella and Edward figure out ways to feed their taboo... I can't wait for the next chapter! More YUMMY sexual tension from my fav fanfic writer! Thanks lexie! YOU RULE!
Author's Response: um YOU rule, haha. i'm going to tell you the delicious sexual tension does NOT disappate any time soon ;) thanks for reviewing and for continuing to read!
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 5
I like EPOV. I think you write him well. Quite funny. So basically, Edward will be tortured for a while longer?
Author's Response: haha, thanks -- i think i like writing epov better because he gets to be way dirtier, and my sordid mind has fun with that :) and yes, edward's going to be tortured for a while longer, but his tortured thoughts are hopefully still going to be enjoyable!
Reviewer: JustVampiric (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 4
Write more pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
Please write more. I love it. Congratz!!! :D
Author's Response: more is on the way! im just waiting for my beta to validate the next chapter :) thanks for reading! i'm soo glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 4
Okay, so at least now Jasper and Emmett will have to kill Bella first ;).
I assume Alice had her reasons for calling Edward, but didn't she think this could happpen? apparently not. It was still nice of him to go over there to try and help out. Yes crying girls usually scare guys, but he was brave and not only got her to open the door. He went in and when she began with the water works again he didn't run away. That says something about him.
If what Edward did doesn't help Bella feel better about herself, I think she is a lost cause :)
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 4
awww no! why would we hate you...that was amazing!
cannottt wait til you update this!
soon..please :D
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 4
Emmett is going to BEAT HIS ASS!!!
How cute will Edward be after he is mushed to a pulp?!!
Ack!! Plus, I kind of like this Edward having to suffer. It's good for his soul (right?)
Author's Response: i think a beat up edward would still be a hot edward. black eyes or not, he still owns my heart, haha.
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
aw! how amazingggg!
i wish i would have found this later so i would have more to read :[
i already love it..cannottttt wait to see what happends.
Author's Response: Thank you :) look for another update soon!
Reviewer: Irritable_Grizzzly (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 4
Oh Lordy. If he goes back to acting like an ass to her again, I will throttle you.
If he starts manwhoring it up in front of her to "get over her" and convince his bandmates she means nothing, I'll throttle you.
We clear? Good. 'Cause you seem really nice and I'm loving this story and I'm not in the mood to throttle.
That was hella sexy!
Author's Response: Hahaha, oh no...don't throttle me! The next chapter should be up shortly and hopefully that should calm at least some of your fears ;)
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 4
Ho-ly COW! Now that they're both admitting there's a large, polka-dotted elephant in the room, are they both going to try to hide that fact from the others or just pretend (or TRY to) it isn't real???
Reviewer: scullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 4
i think its cool.
Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 4
Fabulous - incredible writing and details - love your storyline!! Will anxiously await your next update!!
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: Kate17 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 4
Love it!!
Reviewer: spiderbitten (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh god! Don't you just love it when your own insecurities get you a little humpin'?
I bet Bella does. ^_^
You're awesome! I love the story!
Reviewer: freshonlybakery (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
Love this! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 4
This is great. So much fun. I can't wait to see where you take it next.
Love the grab my crotch explanation Edward gives her.
Author's Response: right? who isn't up for some good crotch grabbing...
Reviewer: Blood donor (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 4
Ok, now it's getting more interesting...
Oh and I love it.
Reviewer: coco1984 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 4
Really like this story, just wanted to let you know :)
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 4
oh oh! Who's gonna kill Edward? Jasper or Emmett? Or will they tag team? This is gonna be ugly whatever comes along. I love it! Please keep writing.
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
OH HELL YES. It was definitely a hilarious yet hot (come on, it's Edward we're talking about here) beginning. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 4
Damn this story is hot! I can really feel the tension between them, your way of writing is really good, really captivating. I have to add this story to my favorites ;)
Can't wait the next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you!
Reviewer: mnabbott (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh my god. You bastard. please post soon.
Author's Response: haha, i'm not going to take the comment personally :-P i've spoiled you guys with my fast updates! come on, you had 2 in one day...but i promise i won't make you wait too long :)
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 4
ooh, i so do not hate you right now. maybe a little, for leaving right there, but how could i hate you for writting this ? i looove it. please update
Reviewer: jewelryjunkie (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow, I love this story! The plot is strong, and the characters are well-defined. I can't wait to see what happens after Bella & Edward's impromptu touch and kiss session!
Great job!
Reviewer: Fallingstar (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 4
Love it! Continue please!
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