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Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh way to walk in on Alice & Jasper. Yikes! I can't wait to read how it will turn out at Edwards house. ;)
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
I do like where this is going so far. While there is plenty of room for girl (and boy) drama, the players seem equally matched for once. It is good to see a Bella with a bit more confidence and an Edward with a bit less. Also, his inner monologue may annoy him, but it entertains us!
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
haha! I love Edward's thoughts and the fact that he talks to himself alot. I love that he knows he talks to himself alot. =)
Yes!! Maybe a secret year-long relationship is just what they need. hehe.
Any good action once Bella is over?
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 7
*falls to the ground laughing my ass off*
*tries getting up but hits head on desk* Ouch!
LOL! Looks like I pulled a Bella... anywho, great job. Loved the songs you picked by the way. Though I have a few suggestions....
The Chain by Fleetwood Mack
White Rabbit by Jefferson Airplane/Starship
I Shot the Sherriff by Eric Clapton (you already have Born Under a Bad Sign might as well LOL)
Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 6
Ooooo!
Cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 6
I just read all the story so far it is fantastic and great writing skills. Great Job!!!!!!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 6
Score like 5 for Bella!! I love squirmy, uncomfortable Edward!
Such, such fun.
Ready for more (I know, I am such a greedy thing!)
Author's Response: thanks! i love squirmy, uncomfortable edward, too...bella's definitely keeping him on his toes, haha. hopefully more will be up soon (it's ok, i'm a greedy thing, too--i loooove getting reviews!)
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow...just...wow! Loved this chapter with the playlist and Edward's POV. Yep, he's screwed. And I'm guessing Bella's got similar feelings. Can't wait to see how this plays out (pardon the pun...).
Author's Response: thank you! hahha, and i super enjoyed that pun.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
LOVE IT!!!!
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 6
WOW U LOST ME WITH THE SHE WELL BE THE DEATH OF ME PICK A DRAMATIC PART BUT GOOD WRITE MORE WHY IN ALL THESE FAN MADE STORY EDWARD IS THE BAD BOY WITH ALL THE G"S HAHAH GOOD STORY WRITE MORE
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
I'm actually really, really, really glad that you posted this. It was fantastic seeing Edward's explanations behind the songs and new impressions about the songs and reactions to the songs and Bella singing them. It will also be extremely interesting to watch how the play list evolves over time. Plus we still got a lot of pervy Edward and some really good stuff that goes with the more traditional chapter types. Like Jasper noticing some different Edward behavior....I'm smiling just imagining all their faces when Edward doesn't take home a girl from the audience after the gig. He doesnt, right? Please say he doesn't do something that stupid, lol. I also enjoyed Edward's being pussy-whipped and in love and Bella being a flirty, kickass, cocktease, hehe. Great chapter again! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: haha, no--edward's FAR too pussy-whipped now to even think about bringing another girl home...no worries. and, well, the response from EVERYONE is pretty interesting ;) glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 6
Lmao on some of those songs and what Edward was thinking during them. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: thanks! i love me my edward and his dirty dirty thoughts, haha.
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 6
YAY!!PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE!!!Write more!!This was awsome!!
Author's Response: already on it ;)
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 6
haha. Edward's thoughts during the set are great. I don't know all the songs on the set, but the ones I do know are great. How come there aren't more female bands covered? Or at least bands with female leads? No Doubt? Paramore? Does Edward not approve? hehe
Author's Response: in response to the female lead bands, they only had 3 days to get bella ready for their first gig, so they only gave her 3 songs to sing for her first gig. ...over time, you will see the expansion into female bands, i promise :) and edward TOTALLY approves. i know, cause...well...i wrote it ike that, haha.
Reviewer: Blood donor (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 6
=] Love it.
Author's Response: thanks.
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 6
AWESOME SHOW! AB-SO-FREAKIN-LUTELY AWESOME! I felt like applauding and cheering! Edward is SOOOOO gonna lose it and it's going to be such a beautiful thing to watch! Thanks for that "set" it was perfect. Updates make us do a "happy dance"!
Author's Response: haha, edward's gonna lose it? ...i think he's already lost it a little bit...ok, a lotta bit! and, yes, he's always beautiful to watch no matter what...
glad you enjoyed the set!
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 6
You're brilliant, that was amazing!
Author's Response: haha, thank you! it's not every day that i'm told i'm brilliant...seriously, i think that's the first time it's ever happened (my older sister is in med school, so usually she's the one in the family referred to as "brilliant"). you're a keeper, for sure :) thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Lanemyer (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 6
Loved all the songs. I have come to think you are Genius and your where my iTunes information goes. I may have seen the Arctic Monkeys 3 times now... and counting def you of my fav live acts. Each time I see them I die. And then because Alex Turner is a God he brings me back to life with whichever cover they are doing that tour. My fav so far (second last time I saw them) is The Bad Seeds - Red Right Hand. (Though I do believe no one around me knew the words, oh well. I'm in my own little world when the Arctic Monkeys are on stage)
Eddies sexy thoughts made me have to get a drink and I'll tell you this Bloody Mary is lacking it tabasco.
Author's Response: yes! not enough people know the brilliance that is the arctic monkeys. ive never seen them live, but oh my god i think i would die happy if i could. glad you enjoyed their set list--it's definitely going to change and grow with the story, so...hopefully i'll continue to channel your itunes genius, hahah.
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow, just wow.
Loved those songs, so many new ones, which I haven't heard before.
I <3 this story!
Author's Response: i'm so glad i could help with your music education! hopefully your repertiore continues to grow with each chapter :) and thank you!!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 6
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.........DON'T LET EDWARD HAVE SEX WITH ANYONE BUT BELLA FROM NOW ON.............IT WOULD BE HEARTBREAKING AND JUST WRONG..............I DON'T THINK I COULD KEEP READING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HE IS IN LOVE WITH HER, FOR GOD SAKES!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: i'm going to say point blank: I whole-heartedly agree with you.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 6
Did anyone notice Edward's conflicting emotions and body during the show? Someone must have, it seems he was about to go crazy. Maybe Bella saw something and decided to have some fun, or she is just relaxed and at ease on the stage. One thing is for sure she fits perfectly with the group and seems to really enjoy being in it. What are Emmett and Jasper thinking of the "gig"? Edward's thoughts came through loud and clear. He was about to loose it. One good/bad thing for the new "friends" if Edward is thinking about some changes in the sets, they are going to need some more rehersal time. Will Bella and Edward be able to handle it?
Great chapter, you really gave the songs a lot of thought so they would fit to what is going on at this moment. Congratulations!!!
Author's Response: i'm glad you noticed edward's conflict! --you're the first person to mention it, but it's kind of important to the story...as the chapters progress and their friend status remains, it's good to remember that he's constantly in a state of conflict (both emotionally and physically). and, yes, there will definitely be more rehersal time and time spent together in general (you'll see, hehe)...
and, on another note--i'm glad you enjoyed the music! i came up with the idea for this story because of one of the songs on that current playlist and how fitting it felt for bella and edward. thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 6
That was great! It's good to know what type of music you envision them playing. I love most of the songs you chose and you introduced me to a few I had never heard, so thanks for that!
Author's Response: thanks! i am kind of a music junkie (hence the premise for the story), and i'm glad to introduce my readers to new music! hopefully that'll happen more as the story progresses, too!
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 6
I just read this story the whole way through. It is officially on my list of favorites. Fantastic job!!!!!!!
Author's Response: wow, thank you so much!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
great chapter!
cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: thanks! hopefully it'll be up by the end of this week :) -- it's one of my fav chapters, so i'm excited to share it with y'all!
Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
Thank you for including all the songs they played, I admit I was curious. I recognize some but will have to check out the others. Good Chapter.
Author's Response: i know, i found myself wanting to know what songs they played, too...it took me some time to come up with their playlist, but i'm glad you enjoyed it!
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