damn i feel like a stupid dork responding after every chapter i read. yet it can't be helped. i love it too much not to respond. i swear your grammar is almost exactly like mine. to be honest it kind of scares me but in a good way. and it's the simple similarities that get me.. such as the usage of the terms ape shit, panty dropper, and so forth. my guy friends would love a fellow witty chic like you to hang with. yet they'll just have to settle for me. haha.

oh and kokomo!?! that had me take a trip down memory lane. being that i'm from hawaii, so my father holds the beach boys dear to his heart. haha you're epic.

Author's Response:

hahah please dont feel like a dork responding to every chapter -- it makes my day!  seriously :)  and, where are you from--l'd be more than happy to impose my ridiculous and inappropriate sense of humor on anyone, haha.

also, true story: i sang kokomo with my older sister on video when i was 2 years old. the video is still around and was shown at my sister's engagement party...gooood times, hahah.

shit that was soo hilarious! i started giggling. actually giggling and my fricken mother was looking at me weird and asked wth i was doing. i had to close my laptop and give a lame arse excuse of that i was just reading a funny email. cuz heaven forbid if my mom saw her 19 year old innocent daughter reading lemony fan-fics.

Author's Response:

haha, you have NO idea how often that happens to me...i'll be writing and giggling in my bed, and my roommate will be like--what are you writing?  and i'll have to lie and say "a new screenplay" ...because i refuse to admit i'm writing slutty fan fic, hahah.  glad you're enjoying it, though :)

Edward is too funny.  I can't believe the things he thinks!  Hilarious!!

Author's Response:

haha, thank you! --is it bad that i think them, too?

cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response:

it's coming soon!

I love the set up on this. Cannot wait to see what kind of torture/rule breaking your going to bring with the next chapter. 

Guess that means I have to ask..."More please?"

Author's Response:

haha, yes, more is on the way!  there is definitely some more torture before rule breaking, but hopefully it'll be worth it!

This is such a cool story!

Author's Response:

thanks! i'm glad you're enjoying it :)

hahaha i LOVE the fact that you had a tyler hilton song in here!! Ive never heard any of his music but I went to high school with him and saw a lot of his plays!! haha i always find it hilarious when people are tyler hilton fans!

 

anyways i love the story and cant wait to keep reading!

 

<3 emma

Author's Response:

um, i just screamed out loud -- literally.  i cannot believe that you went to high school with tyler hilton...i saw him at the apple store at the grove like three years ago, and when i approached him, he was so excited that i recognized him--he was such a sweetheart.

thanks so much for reading--i hope you continue to enjoy it :)

Haha, secret girl drama. This could be very very fun. Since I didn't review the last chapter: I loved the song list thing! It was really clever, and a great way to get through the storyline of the gig. Can't wait to hear what Bella thinks about spending the night with Edward. Bow chica wow wow!

damn it i just wanted press NEXT, uugghhh.  Update Soon Please!

This is pretty funny! Keep it up!!1

Oh way to walk in on Alice & Jasper.  Yikes!  I can't wait to read how it will turn out at Edwards house.  ;)

haha!  I love Edward's thoughts and the fact that he talks to himself alot.  I love that he knows he talks to himself alot.  =)

Yes!!  Maybe a secret year-long relationship is just what they need.  hehe.

Any good action once Bella is over?