:D  this is absolutely amazing.  I love the plot line.  Very humorous, sexy, and fun. (:

good job.  10 from me.

:)

So I'm gonna leave some love :D. Don't expect too often ;). I love reading but when it comes to reviews I suck :(. Anyway, Eddie getting close to being cought, pricless. I mean it would be even more hilarious if he did LOL. And that jelous side, so sweet. About time he grew up, isn't it? Loved it and can't wait for update. By the way my mind is soooo much in the gutter, you won't even believe :D.

Author's Response:

i appreciate the love, honestly. --the more the better, but i completely understand about being bad about leaving reviews...i'm right there with you, haha.

 

i actually contemplated him getting caught, but...i figured that i'd leave that for a bit later (wink, wink).  and yeah, my mind's obviously in the gutter, too.  i'm so glad you appreciate it!

I'm enjoying this story so far! Bella's little fantasy cracked me up.

All caught up. Seriously, the way your write Edward is brilliant. Perfect amounts of humor and candor... and it's almost 2 a.m. and I'm sitting here laughing my ass off and trying not to wake up the house! I have to say thank you for not letting Alice be 'over' done. I hate when she starts taking over the fic and being mental. A lot of the time she gets over written, ya know... so thank you for not letting her run the show. I hate that shit. LOL. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

yay, i'm glad you're finally caught up!  thank you sooooo much for reading and reviewing :)  i have extra special love for edward, so, it makes me truly happy that you're enjoying him!  i hope you continue to enjoy the following chapters!!

Yeah, I just have to say it again... I totally love your EPOV. Fucking hilarious!

Author's Response:

thank you so much!  i like him, too :)

Okay, I guess I'll prove that my mind is in the gutter by admitting that my favorite part of the chapter was Bella almost catching Edward jacking off in his bed. I can't wait until some of that sexual tension brewing between them two is released, lol. I'm also excited to see how much Bella suspects about what he was doing before she walked in. As much as I will miss Edward's unique perspective, I can't wait to see where our girl's mind is at about everything.

I also loved Edward's jealously (I concur about Jake=asshole, but that's just my opinion), and them getting to know each other better and how Edward was totally honest with Bella even about the not-so-good stuff about him. I loved that she was the first girl (other than Alice) to even sit on his bed and that she said his name in her sleep and he heard. I think our poor lovesick boy needed that little bit of hope for the future with Bella. It was too sweet (if that's possible) that he wanted to stay awake all night just to enjoy being near her.

And it may just be my immature teenager boy emerging again here, but Bella finding a used condom in Emmett's bed would be fucking hilarious. My friend actually had that happen to her once....except it was her bed after she let another friend stay there for a weekend while she was gone. Yep I laughed then too. I'm still absolutely loving this story and you definitely keep me excited for more of it!

Author's Response:

that was a fabulous and detailed review--thank you so much for your high praise!  ...my mind is for sure in the gutter, so, i'm glad you're enjoying that aspect of the story.  yes, the sexual tension is escalating....let me tell you, the release will be explosive (pun intended).

bella's pov is going to be interesting--she has a LOT to say, haha.  yes, jake is an asshole -- i'm totally not into jake, so, that will definitely show through my writing, haha.

and yes, the used condom story is real.  it happened.  and it was gross.  ....i laughed then, too...too.

thanks for reviewing again :)

I just can't tell you how much I am enjoying this story!!! The way the relationship between Bella and Edward is developing...well, just everything! 

Keep it going...feel free to write as much as you can for each chapter (HINT, HINT).

Post again soon please

Author's Response:

haha, thanks for the hint.  the next chapter is significantly longer.  apparently bella had a lot to say.

Dude, Eddie has it bad. I am really enjoying this story. It's funny, sweet, romantic-hot.

Very good. (: very interesting.

I think you should keep with the edward pov, until its finished then go for the bella pov.  I think everyone has read a Bella pov ton's of times.

 

Other than that, I really liked it.  Very interesting.

Awh!  That was so cute and sweet.  I loved it.

HAHAHA

Jazz is so funny

and YAY!!! THEY MADE OUT!!!