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Reviewer: twltr12 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
Eek! He asked her to come over! That's so adorable! I love it! Can't wait til the next chapter ;D
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awwwwwwwwww!!!
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 9
Oh how I loved this chapter! It was just so sweet! And let me tell ya...you got me with that dream! I thought it was a bit of a fast move, but totally believable! I just love how Edward's mood is improving because he has Bella in his life. And his brother and sister seem to agree!
Kathy M.
Author's Response: haha, glad to hear i somewhat tricked you with the dream. i just really needed them to hook up, and, like you said, it was too soon for the real thing, haha.
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awww, I wish I had a Cuddleward! It's just NOT fair damnit! Can't wait for Epov on Bella's dream, hehe.
Author's Response: me too, me too!!!! thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Peanutracer (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 9
This story is great more soon pleeaaase
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 9
Huh, I really can't wait the real lemon ;)
Dream lemon was already so hot...
This was really good chapter, loved the way they are talking to each other and learning to know each other.
And Emmett and used condom...gag!
Author's Response: thank you! hopefully the real lemon will live up to your expectations :)
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 9
Aw this chapter was so great :)
i loved it!
cant wait to see where this goes.
cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 9
Omg faker! Ur killin me!!!! Write more now!
Author's Response: sorrrry (hands up in apology)! i meant no harm...the next update is coming soon :)
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 9
This was such a cute chapter! I can just picture Edward sitting in his bed at the end and it's totally adorable. I love it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: my best friend used to sit on his bed cross legged waiting for me, and i always thought he looked like a little boy every time he did it. i thought it was cute then, and i'd bet it's probably cuter with edward ;)
thanks for reviewing!!!
Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 9
mmmmmmmmmmmmm bed with edward..............
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 9
Yea!!!
You've got me laughing out loud and squealing and practically screaming!!! I LOVE this chapter!
KEEP GOING!!!!
Author's Response: i'm glad you're enjoying it :) it is my life goal to make people laugh through my writing, so....you make me happy, indeed!!!
Reviewer: lady jane (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 9
Im leaving lots of love!!! great chapter!! i cant wait for more
Reviewer: lady jane (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 9
Im leaving lots of love!!! great chapter!! i cant wait for more
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 9
Lmao about the dream. Oh to be able to read what Edward was thinking when he heard her dreaming or when she confessed that if she thought of him as a brother her dream would have been ileagle. LOL I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. :)
Author's Response: oh...i think i may give a little bit of insight into edward's mind during that time in the very near future ;) updates coming your way soon!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 9
I like the way that you are setting this up. Yeah, Edward can say/think that he's changing his ways and that he has true feelings for Bella, but actions speak louder than words. It means more that he's not only actually taking the time to become Bella's friend and get to know her, but that he really wants to and is enjoying it. But the sexy lemony dream was very nice too...lol. Very good chapter. :)
Author's Response: thanks so much! i completely agree that actions speak louder than words, btw...and i'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 9
EXCELLENT! Even without the "real thing" it was a truely satisfying chapter. I adore that Edward and Bella are becoming such close friends. That's absolutely the best way to fall in love.
Author's Response: i completely agree! and thank you so much for consistently reviewing--it makes me sooo happy :)
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 9
OK, these two need to sit Jasper and Emmett down and tell them to take a chill pill. E&B belong together and to hell with the band.
Author's Response: mm, i totally agree. too bad jasper and emmett are too wound up to even notice. thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 9
Yes, want more thank you very much!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 9
OMG!!! That is all i have to say. I am speechless at how good that was!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 9
OK, seriously... Bedward is too cute. And asking Emmett's permission = priceless. I loved this chapter! Thank you for updating!!!
Author's Response: mmm bedward. i like that. thank you more for reviewing :)
Reviewer: lonewolfskid (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 9
gooooooooood lemon. I'm a'hopin for an E point of view about that dream. Whew! How likely is it that they'll be able to keep their hands off of one another much longer. Hopefully not long.
Author's Response: ask, and you shall receive :) the hands aren't staying put for much longer...i promise.
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 9
Awww, how sweet. Please don't let her say anything too embarassing! That always bothers me, I guess because she always says or does something humiliating.
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 9
This is funny!! Keep it up!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 9
OH MY GOD!! I SERIOUSLY LOVED IT!!! THAT DREAM WAS YUMMY!! CANNOT WAIT FOR BELLA AND EDWARD TO CAVE INTO THEIR DESIRE TO BE WITH ONE ANOTHER. SO CUTE HOW HE ASKED HER OVER!!!! CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!!
Reviewer: Feelybox (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 9
Okay, I admit it. I'm completely in love with this story. I can't wait until you post the next chapter!!
Author's Response: would you be creeped out if i admit that i'm completely in love with you for being into my story? because...i totally am.
thanks so much!!
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