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Reviewer: Vullen (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 10
GAAAH! I *HEARTFAIL* JEALOUS EDWARD.
hehehe Edward got caught in the shower, well i mean honestly what does she expect. She gets to have amazing dreams about doing him, and he gets to listen. It could drive anyone insane.
It gives me comfort that Edward is bigger than Jake in one way.
Can't wait for part 2!!
Author's Response: hahah, yesss. i completely agree. i mean, i think about if i had to listen to edward moan in his sleep, i'd probably touch myself in the shower, too. TMI? probably.
hope you enjoy part 2!!!!
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh this is going to end badly.....or could it end with Edward and Bella finally having sex (i sure hope so). i smell serious payback on edward's part coming. i wonder how bella would deal with edward eyeing the groupies....and maybe looking for a hook up? Seriously what is that girl thinking that things will be the same with jake?
Author's Response: girlfriend is denying herself, i know. she's just too caught up in trying to please everyone that she stopped pleasing herself. no worries, things will be resolved soon :)
thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jenteal88 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 10
I absolutely <3 it!!!
I can't wait for the other half of this chapter.
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 10
God, I hope that she and Edward don't get all stupid. I can picture a battle of the sexes coming into play. I don't know why the two don't just fess up. Dumbasses!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 10
GREAT CHAPTER!!! i wonder how the rest of her day will be! i think its great that jake is visiting! it brings so much more drama into the story! and the awkwardness that come with him makes this story so much funner to read! thanks for the great chapter! i hope you update soon with the second part!
Author's Response: thank you! i agree, the drama makes the pay off that much sweeter :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 10
OH COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE--NO JAKE AND BELLA ONE ON ONE TIME!!!!!!!PLEASE NO SEX FOR THEM-I FUCKING HATE JAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE --NO EDWARD KISSING, OR MAKING OUT WITH, OR HAVING SEX WITH ANYONE.........EXCEPT FOR BELLA, OF COURSE!!!!!!
Author's Response: no worries, i fucking hate jake, too.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 10
Can we just shoot the dog already? I'm totally disgusted. Shame on Bella. Please don't let Edward go out and do something stupid. Put a backbone on Bella, have her tell the dog to go home and get her back to Edward.
Author's Response: bella has a backbone, but she's also conflicted. how would you deal with your best friend/fuck buddy of the past however many years coming to visit with a new month long best friend? i think it'd be more difficult than you're imagining.
thanks for reviewing, i love the feedback :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 10
OK.......I've got to tell you--if you let Bella and Jake even get close to kissing or intimacy of any kind....OR......... If you have Edward in any capacity with any other girl, I'm going to have to stop reading...........It would be heartbreaking for both and I don't think either of them could trust each other after that...And please, may Bella stop sugeestign he bring a Girl home...................How STUPID is that????
PLEASE..................Get Edward and Bella together-----Sex, everything-SOON.
If Alice and Jasper can do the nasty, why can't these two???
Author's Response: it's coming. ...literally. ;)
Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 10
I don't want to berate you but i will if i have to.... I mean said you already have the other part DONE... Just go ahead and post it! Then my bad day willl get better!
Author's Response: aw, i'm sorry about your bad day :( but...i did update hours later if that makes you feel better!
Reviewer: TwilightAtDawn (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 10
Love it!
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
Poor Bella! I hope this spurs Edward into action. It's not like Jasper would be surprised, I'm sure Alice has been scheming over Bella and Edward all month.
Author's Response: haha, yes, alice IS a schemer :)
Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
This is one time I'm not looking forward to an update...I don't want anything really horrible to happen. Bella needs to grow a spine and tell Jake NO preferably in front of Edward ;) Congrats on your graduation, I work at a college and some of "my kids" graduate and get commissioned in the US Air Force next Friday. I'm happy for them but I'll miss them a great deal.
Author's Response: i'm sorry you're not looking forward to the update :( but, if it makes you feel better, i'm usually nice to all of my characters....
thanks for the congrats, and the review!
Reviewer: soph323 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 10
haha! I can feel the sexual tension through my computer! bang already. hehe. I'm glad you're having such a good day! I graduate graduate school in a couple of days. I'm excited but I'm trying to slum my way through my last final. This makes a very good and bad distraction! Hope to see the second part up soon! Back to work..
Author's Response: congratulations! i'm trying to make it through finals, too...unfortunately i totally agree about the distraction of fanfic -- writing it is even more of a distraction than keeping up with my reading!
thanks for reviewing, and good luck with finals!!
Reviewer: dylansmommy06 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 9
UMMM OKAY SO JUST SO YOU I THINK I FUCKIN LOVE YOU RIGHT NOW :) !!! GREAT STORy :)
Author's Response: haha, i love you too?
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 9
AWEEE... cuddleward and yawningward are so cute. this chapter was so cute. i love it. update
Author's Response: thank you! there's something so endearing about sleepy boys, right? it's like the they turn into 5 year olds all over again. you just want to tuck them in and read them a bedtime story.
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 9
awesome!!! as usual!! PLZ UPDATE SOON! I NEED MORE BELLA AND EDWARD... and looking forward 2 that lemon!
Author's Response: haha, don't we all need more bella and edward? i don't think i'll ever get my fill...that's why instead of writing spec scripts like i told myself i was going to do this weekend, i'm sitting and writing more chapters for all you folks out in cyber land...
thanks for reading and reviewing! it means a lot that you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: Akalei88 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 9
Aww, that was so cute!!! I love how this is going!!!
Author's Response: thank you! and thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 9
yes i want more!!! holy crap ... how could you ask such a silly thing hehe ... ok i love the whole rockstar crap!! lol and the whole E&B sleepover thing ... that made me laugh ... it seems so childish! haha love it !
PLease update soon :)
Author's Response: haha, well, thanks for calling me silly ;) ps, true story, my best friend freshman year of college used to text me to come sleepover by saying that his bed missed me. i thought it was super cute then, too.
updates are coming!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 9
awe so sweet. poor edward didn't even see it coming.....
can't wait for more
Reviewer: Angie_Kay (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 9
AHH another great chapter!! When I found out that there was a new chapter I literally danced in my chair cause I was so excited. First thanks for responding, you're a doll. haha, Everyone's mind is the gutter especially mine, when I get the courage to write a story up here, you will see how bad I am >.< haha. I have to say that I am looking for the ultimate sexyyy naughty scene. I love the "Jesus titty fucking Christ" line priceless. (: I can't wait for the next one but you already know that. I know it takes time (: haha but I seriously can't wait.
so to sum it all up 10 star rating hon!!
Patiently Waiting,
Angie (:
ps keep up the good work.
Author's Response: i think that if i'm going to ask people to review, i should at least read what they have to say and respond to it! ...so, no thanks necessary! thanks agin to you for consistently reviewing....it makes my heart happy :)
and no worries, the sexy naughty scene that everyone has so patiently been waiting for is currently in the works!
hope you enjoy the chapters to come!!!
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 9
song suggestion: bryan adams - everything i do i do it for you
my bf's favorite song =)
Author's Response: i love me some bryan adams...i was thinking that i might use we're in heaven in the near future ;) tell your bf that i approve.
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 9
That was so sweet! I like how their relationship is developing!
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 9
That was so sweet! I like how their relationship is developing!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Colena (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 9
Of course I want more!! I love your story and the relationship between Bella and Edward is just so sweet!!
I hope you're giving us the next chapter soon=)
Author's Response: i just put it up for validation! hopefully it should be up by this weekend :) thanks so much for reviewing!
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