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Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 2
LOL! They're both hurting from the band rule!
It's gonna be interesting how they will try and deflect soaked panties and hard ons, LOL!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Edward's such an a_s, haha, a funny a_s :D
Reviewer: Evilangel6714 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 11
Yay! I'm glad my banner made your day lol and hey in return i got to read two new chapters in one day! thats the best!
yours truly,
evilangel6714
Reviewer: evisme217 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 5
*reviews for a metaphorical hand on Edward's boner*
Gawd, I must be sick in the head too because that was utterly hot. Haha.
I love your humor. It's ridiculously awesome! You do have a mind of a man-whore. Gotta love em though, makes like more interesting.
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 11
YAY! Is correct! And like I said before... queen of updates! LOL.
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 11
L*O*V*E this!!!!! ...and TY for kicking jake to the curb! Your story is like heroin - can't wait for the next fix
Reviewer: Kryptoinuyasha (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 11
I'm all smiles with this one!! Love it! You need to listen to 'Something to Believe In' by Aqualung. It seem to be Rockward's anthem till he gets his girl. *grinning like a fool* Which from the looks of it, won't be too much longer. Keep it coming!! Love the music refs, totally rocking!!
Reviewer: redk9 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow, great story so far. And I just went and downloaded all the songs in this chapter that I didn't already have, so thanks for that, too!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 11
Yay!!!!
Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 11
awww! Edward is such a girl sometimes!
I'm so upset with Jacob. he is a douche for what he did/said to bella.
He can suck it.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 11
THANK YOU, THANK YOU< THANK YOU FOR NOT HAVING BELLA SLEEP WITH DICKWAD FUCKING ASSHOLE JAKE!!!!!!!!!!DO WE NEED ANY MORE EXPLETIVES??
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 11
YAH!!!!!
Quick update made this reader sooo happy! The morning conversation is going to be tricky...I know you will fill in the blanks...
Right now, I am basking in the glow of my laptop feeling ever so much more satisfied than I did this morning. You're the best!
Again, Yah!!!!
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 11
Most definitely YAY!!!!
And I'm now DYING for the next update. I could've waiting a day or so for this second half of the chapter. I was anxious to see what Jake and Bella's day would be like, but I could've been content to wait a day or so. But NOW, I am chomping at the bit to hear "the talk" the next day!
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update SOON!!!! Like NOW?!?!?!
*on my knees... begging... hands clasped in front of me... with puppy dog eyes* ha ha
Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
Thank you! I loved the end of this chapter ;) She did grow a backbone too.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 11
Well, just because you neutered the dog doesn't make all of this right. Bella blew it big time. What a whimp. She should have taken care of Jake before band practice. But she was too busy trying to have her cake and eat it too, If she hadn't started crying would she have slept with Jake? She never should have gone into the bedroom with him in the first place. I lost a lot of respect for Bella. Bad move. I think Edward should have sent her back to Jake. Would have served her right. And her comment to Alice "like I love them both." Give me a break.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 10
THAT WAS FANTASTIC!! WOW! JAKE HAS TO COME AND SERIOUSLY FUCK THINGS UP! OMG! WHEN SHE WALKED IN ON EDWARD JACKING OFF..FUUUCK.........DYING!! SEXY WETWARD! I WONDER HOW EDWARD IS GOING TO HANDLE JAKE. I HOPE HE DOESN'T TRY TO MAKE BELLA JEALOUS BY TAKING HER ADVICE AND HOOKING UP WITH A GIRL. PlEASE NO!! LET HIM CONFESS HIS TRUE FEELINGS TO BELLA INSTEAD. OR LET HIM OVERHEAR BELLA TELL JAKE THAT SHE HAS FEELINGS FOR SOMEONE ELSE!!!! CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE
Author's Response: thank you! i'm NOT a jake fan, so...i think that came through in the second half of the chapter, hahah. and, yeah...i don't know why but wetward is the HOTTEST thing to me. hope part 2 continues to live up to your expectations :)
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
You are amazing!!! Two updates within hours of each other, thank you thank you! Hehehe. Congrats on the graduation by the way. Hurrah!
OK, so Jacob was a leetle bit scary there... and I think Bella didn't quite get what he was saying... but I love the resolution, I love emo Edward, and I'm glad that Alice did, indeed, have a clue :) Excellent part 2!
Reviewer: irishluck (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 11
omg that was amazing love this story cant wait for the next update
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 11
You are too good to us! Wonderful chapter. Hot too believe it or not. Can Edward and Emmett kick Jake's ass...please I beg of you!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 11
You are too good to us! Wonderful chapter. Hot too believe it or not. Can Edward and Emmett kick Jake's ass...please I beg of you!
Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Today is a great day! I wasn't planning on posting this early, but...let's talk about why I'm having the best day ever.
1. I'm graduating from college in a week :)
Congrats! I graduate with my Master's on Saturday, too. Doesn't it feel fantastic to have it finally finished?!
2. My older sister just got engaged and asked me to be her maid of honor!
That is so exciting! I loved being in both of my sister's weddings!
5. I have the best reviewers, who always keep me smiling and wanting to post more (esp. TeamJasper13 who left me an essay of a review, thanks, hun!)
Oh, we definitely want you to post more! This was a fun chapter; poor Bella. She's got a lot to deal with. Way to stay true to the overzealous, clueless Jake character! I can't wait to see how she gets out of this mess!!!
Reviewer: sarak (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 10
love this story!!!!!
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 10
Thank you for being the queen of updating!!! ExB together so much is cute. They're all BFF'ing each other - damn band rules! I just HOPE AND BEG YOU that Edward doesn't get all spiteful and go hook up with some girl, cuz I see fucking Jake being a catalyst to an excuse for Edward in his own mind to relieve some "tension". *crosses fingers* PLEASE PLEASE let Bella say something - anything - in front of Edward to let him know she has no intention of getting with Jake again. UGH... you have no idea how many bad scenarios are running thru my head!!! I'm so so over dramatic. LMAO. It's all your fault for getting me pulled in so deeply. H AH A HA. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing! it makes me incredibly happy :) and to answer your question, honestly, i feel like edward has made a complete 180 character-wise, and it would now be ooc for him to hook up with a random, despite the fact that he's jealous of jake/bella.
i'm over dramatic too, and hey, what's the fun of writing if you can't add a little drama, right?
hope you enjoy what's to come!
Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 10
ironic isnt?
You posted this chapter on one of the best days of your life, and Bella is about to have a bad one!
Funny stuff:)
Author's Response: true story. but, i gave you guys double updates because it was the best day...so i was able to resolve bella's bad day...coincidence? i think not ;)
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 10
SHIT WWAITING ................WANTING.....................N-NNEEDING A UP DATE PLEASE HURRY YOUR STORY IS AWESOME
Author's Response: barely hours later, your wish is my command :)
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