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Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 11
I am glad she went to Edward. I hope Jake stays away now....
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 11
So sweet! But don't stop now..........
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 11
OH! Make Bella ok please?????
Reviewer: lovesbcmc (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 11
Yay? I hope so!
You sre so awesome...love it!
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 11
oh i loved it! jake is a asshat!! and i love that edward knows that he loves her! very well written, can't wait till the next chapter
Reviewer: LozFairy (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 11
Congratulations. This is the first story I have read twice. In one day. I love your Edward more than many of the other incarnations around!
Reviewer: MissAmi (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 11
Awwww... I think my heart just exploded.
Reviewer: Shelly2 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 11
I'm just catching up with this story! I love it! Thank goodness that Jacob's out of the picture. I'm so happy that Bella and Edward seem to be headed in the right direction!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 11
GOD, JAKE IS SUCH AN ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!!CALLING HER A WHORE??????
AND EEEWWWWWW....ANYONE WHO GIVES "SLOPPY" WET KISSES IS BAD IN BED - JUST INEPT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!REALLY.........IF THE KISS IS NO GOOD.....THE REST SUCKS TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CANNOT WAIT FOR EDWARD AND BELLA TO HAVE SEX!!!
Reviewer: Regetta (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 11
Aww, such a sweet ending. Love it!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 11
omg, this chapter is sooo freakin sweet...they're not just in lust anymore --- I can really feel that they are in love. And the lemon will be so much more rewarding, LOL!
Edward throwing a tantrum and the song that he chose....gahh, I'm not surprised that Bella just melted, LOL!
Jake is an a_s, but let's cut him a little bit of slack. Maybe he really does love Bella and not just aiming for a lay with her......I'm sure he could have gotten that easily being a foot ball player and all. He doesn't need Bella for that. So, he's angry bec he realized that he had lost her. I would be pissed too, at myself. But I wouldn't take it on Bella....hence, he's still an ass, LOL!
Luvin the whipped/lovesick/cheesy Edward, haha! Lemons next? But what about the rule? Are they gonna be hiding the effin and the luvin in the closet too like Alice and Jasper?
Update soon! I'm in lust/luv with your fic :D
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 10
ohhh, seriously? Manwhore/slut to the core Edward is done with his whoring ways?
Oh no...hope Bella wouldn't sleep with Jake..and Edward doesn't go whoring again :(
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 11
Timing has been excelent and terrible at the same time. Terrible in Jake coming to town when Bella and Edward are still clueless. Also terrible the timing of Jake's arrival. Excelent Alice realizing what is going on. Excelent both Bella and Edward figuring out they will do it at almost the same time. Excelent in Edward being alone at the apartment.
So Emmett and Jake were having a good time, but Bella wasn't. Was Bella never aware that Jake might have been trying to get back to her? Yes, it was Edward in her mind, but why did it take her so long to figure she had to change things with Jake?
Did Alice noticed what happened? Jacob leaving and then Bella? Have Emmett and Jasper got a clue of all this.
Too many questions, but good stories bring lots of questions.
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awww..slutty Edward turning all girly with that sleepover thingy! It's so funny!
Ahhh, the magic of falling in love :D
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 11
Best line of the chapter:
"Fuck. My. Life."
:)
That was a great chapter and I'm excited about things finally coming together for them but I hopehopehope Jake will get a happy ending too!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 10
So Jake came for a visit, arrived early making things kind of uncomfortable. Alice is planning something, not good. Edward is pissed, and was caught in the shower (although he doesn't know this). Bella wants to drastically change her relationship with Jake. And she asked if things could get worse? Something tells me they just might.
One thing, I don't know how good, Bella knows she doesnt' want anyone but Edward.
Reviewer: jenteal88 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 11
I <3 the quick updates!
they make my day.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 9
Emmett went all big brother with Bella and hit his real brother for her, that was really sweet. And Emmett was and is very proud of his new role.
Alice's comment leads to a lot of thinking, what does she mean with "I'm glad he has you"?
And then the text message and asking Emmett to let Bella come over. And he really just wanted to sleep. Who will do the talking now=?
Reviewer: Teddy (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 11
Yes, now we're getting somewhere! I'm waiting for declarations next chapter!
Please update soon.
Reviewer: laura6189 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 11
I just found this story and read all 11 chapters as qucikly as I could. I love this! Update soon!!!!!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 11
Awwww...this i so GREAT!!!!Please updaye very soon...And please let it be a long chapter...You're amazing..My heart is beating out of my chest. ;D
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 11
aweeeee! I soooo wanna take off jakes balls with a fork right now. and i love jake. but hes such an ass sometimes. anyways, i loooove it. aweaweaweaweee. update soon please
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 11
I'm so happy! But I have an uneasy feeling that it's going to be awkward. Maybe I'm just paranoid haha.
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 11
Absolutely Yay!!!! Hope she still wants to kiss him in the morning, and not start sending mix signals. Jake's such an ASS, Grrrr!
Reviewer: Calricjes82 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 11
I love this story! You've had me giggling like a little girl. Can't wait for the next update! Thank you!
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