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Reviewer: cacata (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 12
Love! Love!Love!
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you!
Reviewer: Dazzled2Xtreme (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 11
OMG OMG OMG i love this story i cannot get enough. . . the tension is killing me ! SY
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 11
Yay! Jake's an idiot. Rules schmules! Go Bella. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 11
OOOOOOOOOOOH NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
I"M OUT OF CHAPPIES!!!!!!!!!!!
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! (begins praying for SPEEDY, LENGTHY updates)
Man, I've been there with the "best friend you're in love with" drama....it is BRUTAL!!! I hope that their baby make-out session is the start of acknowledging each other's feelings.
For those of you out there in love with your best friend....go for broke. I didn't, and still have regrets 14 years later!!!!!
Lexie, I am SOOO adding this story to my faves!!! xoxoxo
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 9
"Poor little Nemo" HAHA! Peeing of pants began at exactly that moment. :)))))
"my bed misses you" is so sweet I just got a freakin' cavity! I expect Dr. Cullen to pay for my dental work. :)
I am very sad. I just found this story and have been reading stright through, and have only 2 chapters left. Two is not enough! Remember, Lexie, that chapters = LOVE :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 8
This is my FAVORITE chapter so far!! I am LOVING this Edward-in-love!! It is very telling that he has Bella in bed and doesn't try to seduce her. (although, if only he knew it, his failure to jump her bones while having the chance is the most seductive thing of all!!)
Have NO more worried about this being your first fanfic. I am a fussy reader, and I am LOVING this story, truly. :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 5
Friends, schmends!! they need to get BUSY!!! Are they gonna sneak around? have perpetual blue balls and...hmm...what's the girlie equivalent of blue balls? Blue...labia?? eww!
FYI, it's "intra-band hookups", not INTER-band. Intra means "within", as in within the band. (yes, I am anal retentive about such things.)
LOVE the story! you rock, Lexie!! :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 3
OH MY GAWD!! Alice felt a sibling BONER!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Poor ALice! poor Edward!! Shithead had it comin' >:>
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
Girl, you got it goin' on. This chapter was hysterical!! Toolward is out in force, being his usual, human, wanker self.
On to the next chapter!!
(hope he disinfected the bathroom sink -ewwwww!)
Reviewer: Pixie_gurl (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 11
Just read all 11 chapters! This story is GREAT! Can't wait for the lemons ;)
Reviewer: purplemilk27 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 11
Another epic update! The relationship between Bella and Edward is so complex and entertaining! I think you've done a really good job of painting the picture of their budding relationship. It feels very real, like something that would really happen. I also like the juxtaposition with Jake and Bella's awkward relationship. Well done!
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 11
aw that was so adorable at the end. they are finally coming around!!! oo i'm getting excited.
i guess i kind of feel bad for jake but i will always be team edward. i love edward and your version of him as well. he's saucy.
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 10
oh nelly. that is SO how boys act. they always size each other up. it's ridiculous. guys size up my brother all the time. the only thing is that my brother is 6'7" so they fail most the time.
oh and its even more urkie when they try to size me up. it's like yes i'm a six foot "amazon", but i'm still very feminine. psh... men and their egos.
btw i loved the chapter a lot as well. you're a genius and congrats with graduation soon.
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 9
that was "Jesus titty fucking Christ" good. haha i love that line. may i use it on my guy friends?
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 11
great chapter! i wonder if jake is going to come back and apologize? thanks for updating the second part so soon! keep up the great work!
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 11
yay, for two chapters. Loved this one and especially the kissing at the end. Who does Edward think he's fooling? Not Rosalie or Alice - hopefully he can man up soon.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 11
It's about time they both let go and just feel.
Reviewer: lizzy_koh (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 11
SWEET!!!!!!! keep it coming, enjoying this story very much!!! it;s up there with my favs.
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 11
definite yay!!!! its sad about bella and jake... actually not really!!!! thats a double yay!!!!! plz plz plz update soon!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: redk9 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ah, crap. I always hit the end of the chapters just when it's getting good. Update soon, please!
Reviewer: treeclimber (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 11
Yay, for sure! I LOVE the quick updates. I hate to get into a great story and it loses its momentum for me when updates are slow. Thanks again! Enjoying it!
Reviewer: bellobella (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 11
Honestly, this story is soooo good!! Thank you for the quick updates!!
Reviewer: twltr12 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 11
Drama drama drama haha...and go Alice for talking some sense into Edward! Loved the chapter and you rock for the amazingly fast update! I can't wait to see how the "love you" thing works out!
Eek I can't believe she said it! Yay! ;)
Reviewer: jliane (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 11
Lots of things to say!!
First of all, I'm a huge Gavin DeGraw fan, so having him in this story makes it that much better. I'm hopefully going to see him in concert in a few weeks!
Second, I LOVE HSM...even if I'm a recent college grad, I still blare "What I've Been Looking For" every time it comes on my ipod. I throw my own musical in my car every time I hear it.
Third, CONGRATULATIONS on graduating!
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Silly Jake--i thought we could actually like him for a change, but that just wasn't in the cards. Really enjoying this!
Reviewer: CaitlinWWA (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 11
that was great! I hope they work it all out, and don't regret it in the morning!
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