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Reviewer: Miss Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 12
loveeedd it, as usual.
congrats on graduating and all.. but i want some more, asap!! haha =)
Author's Response: thank you! and as soon as my grad celebrations are over, a new chapter will be posted...no worries ;)
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 12
Edward's dirty/funny thoughts + good bj in shower = great chapter! lol. I'm glad that they are keeping it a secret. That Edward wants to be in a committed relationship. Thumbs up to Jacob for bring them together!! Good luck on finals and have fun at your graduation!!
Author's Response: hahah glad to know that all you need for a good chapter is dirty thoughts and a shower blowjob, hahah. thanks on your congrats! only two more days :) then...back to writing! can't wait.
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 12
FINALLY!! They took forever to finally get together, but I'm glad they got there. Now for a real lemon! Bring on the citrus!
Author's Response: haha--it didn't take THAT long for them to get together....did it? and, the lemons are really coming (haha, pun intended!) ;)
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 12
Ung...soo...gooood!!! Hehe! ;)
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 12
YESSSS! Excellent update... thank you for leaving us with that (if you gotta go away from updating - way to do it! *squishes you*). Secret relationship? This is going to get really hot and sticky isn't it? LOL
Author's Response: thank you! i figured if i had to take a break from writing, i may as well leave you with a good taste in your mouth (haha, pun intended?). and, it's absolutely going to get hot and sticky. bella and edward wouldn't have it any other way ;)
Reviewer: redk9 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 2
And I LOVE it when Edward talks to his dick. Some of the best dialogue in fanfic!
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 12
Dang, they didn't do it. Oh, well, maybe next chapter.
Reviewer: redk9 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 12
Aaaahhhhhh! Finally! A little release! Although I won't be happy until we have some full-on smut. That was great, though. I can't wait to see how their secret relationship unfolds. Hot!
Author's Response: the full on smut is on its way :) secret relationships just make all the action hotter, don't you think?
thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: pseudocullen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 12
Loving the bella edward love
Reviewer: lynncullen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 12
I've got to give you credit. There are so many good fanfics out there that you have to wait an eternity to get an update. Not this one. Thanks for your quick updating! I love the story and how you portray the characters.
Author's Response: i read enough fanfic to know how frustrating waiting for an update is...plus, this story just keeps writing itself in my head! thank you so much for reading and enjoying :)
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 12
I feel like I should roll over and sigh in after orgasm bliss after reading this!
So...how long can they keep their feelings for each other a secret from the rest of the gang? Who do they think they are kidding?!?!
Author's Response: i pretty much did that after writing, hahah.
the secret MAY be easier to keep than you guys all think :) i look forward to posting the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 12
Your story is incredible and I am in love with it. But I'd just like you to know for future reference if my reviews are kind of anti-Bella it's not because I hate your Bella a lot it's just that I'm possibly the most obnoxious person when it comes to fanfic Bellas (I'm picky). ANYWAY Your updates have been awesome, you're very quick. Okay well I really hope you keep this up because it's a really great story.
Author's Response: haha, i will keep that in mind. sometimes i'm anti-bella, too....in fact, sometimes i'm anti-my own bella, so -- i completely understand. just, as long as you keep enjoying the story, and keep letting me know :) i really appreciate it!
Reviewer: Vullen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 12
gah! you cocktease!
you flaunt the cake but you only offer me a slice!
hahahaha, dear lord i'll be waiting for next week, don't you worry
Author's Response: i guess a have a little more bella in me than i thought? hahah. hope next week's update continues to be enjoyabe :)
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 12
Next week? No..... Please sooner...
I can't wait to read how well they will be able to hid it from everyone especially Emmett living with Edward. ;)
Author's Response: i'm sorry! every time i study for finals i feel guilty that i'm not writing, but...i just have to graduate, hahah. next will be worth it, i promise!!
Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 12
Another awesome chapter. Thanks for the frequent updates :)
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Happy graduation! It's bogles the mind that you've been writing this while finishing up college! You are an AMAZING WOMAN! This chapter was hot in all the right places! We'll miss you nice week, but party hardy, you deserve it!
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 12
So Edwards internal monologue in this chapter might possibly be one of the funnies things I've read lately. Seriously, you had me laughing out loud. I loved it. See you next week.
Author's Response: thank you! i aim to please :) i love making people laugh, so i'm glad you're enjoying it!!!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 12
Mmmmm....Wetward!
Glad they're moving forward. Sheesh...face it. NOBODY is keeping to the "rule". Emmett and Rose are going at it like rabbits, Jasper and Alice are trying to set new decibel records. So go for it, E&B!!
Author's Response: wetward is my achille's heel. seriously, i just can not get enough of him. expect at least 3 more shower scenes by the end of this story, hahah. oo, or maybe a pool scene? i haven't decided yet....but, they're definitely going to be going at it in the near future ;)
Reviewer: Dazzled2Xtreme (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
it breaks my heart to have to wait a week, but thanx for the double update. I will be waiting to see whats next sy
Author's Response: it breaks my heart, too--i feel guilty keeping the story waiting, but...finals have to take precedence, i suppose, haha. see you next week, though!!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 12
THAT WAS JUST AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AND SEXY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SO GREAT THAT THEY HAVE FINALLY HOOKED UP!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: hahaha, i know! i just couldn't keep their sexual tension going without SOME sort of release....especially if i was leaving for a week. glad you enjoyed it :)
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 12
That was really hot. Where is the cold shower!
Good luck with exams and congrats on your graduation!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 12
"My best friend, who subsequently ran away and left me when I wouldn’t sleep with him, had basically admitted that he thought of me as his whore. Twenty years of friendship down the drain. I never wanted to speak to Jake again." Noo.... that isn't really what Jake thought, right? He was just angry, right? I adore Jake and hopehopehope you can find him a happy ending too!
"Why do girls always take words and twist them in ways I never thought even remotely possible? Who knows…their minds work in STRANGE ways." HAHA! It's funny cause it's true! :)
"(did my cock actually just reply to me?...I think it did)." AWESOME. I LOVE when they argue with their own inner monologues but his cock talking to him is even better!
"Was she trying to get me to come all over her face?
Oh, no…my head liked that idea far too much.
She’s a lady, respect her God damn it. There will be no coming on her face, Cullen.
Yeah, but what if she—" LMAO! What a guy!
All in all, FANTASTIC chapter! Can't wait for more! We'll all miss you on your time away! :)
Author's Response: wow -- thank you for that AMAZING review! you have no idea how much it means to me that you're enjoying the story, and that you're picking out specific lines! gah! my heart just melted :)
and, stay tuned for jake. i'm not the hugest fan of his, but we definitely haven't seen the last of him. jake's younger and immature and impulsive and tends to explode when he doesn't really mean it.
thanks again for reading and writing such an insightful review!!! see you next week.
Reviewer: jessnab (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 12
You are leaving poor Bella hanging with no satisfaction , how is she supposed to make it a week with out an orgasm ? I know we all want to leave Edward happy but... good luck see you in a week ;0
Author's Response: hahaha--i like that everyone is so concerned about bella getting some! please remember that this chapter is literally only about an hour of their morning after. bella's going to get hers SOON! i promise.
thanks for the luck, btw! --see you next week :)
Reviewer: cacata (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 12
Love! Love!Love!
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you!
Reviewer: Dazzled2Xtreme (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 11
OMG OMG OMG i love this story i cannot get enough. . . the tension is killing me ! SY
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