Evil! Evil! Evil! So, can we make-out? I think I love!

Hokai. So.

I absolutely LOVE this story. Srsly. LOOOVE it. I really love your version of Emmett. He's not so... rough, I guess you could say, like all the other Emmett characters are in all the other fanfics.

I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response:

um, thank you!  i love you :)  seriously.  and, yes, my emmett is a little different...i have a special place for him in my heart...thanks for reviewing, i really appreciate it!

ahhh, this is awesome! Bring the game on, LOL!

Both of them have emotional issues to deal with! Is Edward really a changed man? I don't know...he is taking his time before he actually does the deed...but I don't really know. He seems to be really emotionally involved with Bella. And Bella does love Edward but they are both so insecured and i don't think they have a lot of trust for each other yet.

Well, where's the rest of your updates? Pls..pls..pls..and what's up with the baby fantasy? too soon for baby drools, LOL!

 

Author's Response:

haha, thank you!  i really appreciat you saying that :)

and, yes, the two of them have a few "issues" to work out.  they are so emotionally insecure, it's pretty ridiculous.  trust is taking a second seat to lust right now, but...all will be addressed in good time!

and, sorry for the baby fantasy--that's my own esme-esque desires to have children coming through into my writing....but, i mean...domestic edward--it's a fantasy.  albeit, a very inappropriate one, but...yeah, ok, i'm going to stop justifying myself now.

thanks for reading and reviewing, as always!

fuckin a char....what is it with you and babies, drives me nuts!!! see you at d-land later?

Author's Response:

sorry, boo -- it's the rosalie in me, i guess.  i want a baby, and i want it now ;)  looove you, kitten.  thanks for reading and reviewing.  kisses!

wow your reviews must REALLY BE FUCKING AWESOME  & HOT  AND.....................  great chapther i love big brother em so much and what will jake have to say for him self ?

Author's Response:

umm...they are?  thank you :)

 

emmett = the best big brother ever, and....let's just say that jake is getting the smack down...

Oh , great chapter. I can't wait to find out what Jake said. And will we get to see their 80's night? Because that would be awesome!  Thanks for the update!!

Author's Response:

we will DEFINITELY get their 80s night.  it'll be pretty awesome, so look out for that update in the near future :)  thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

I can't wait to see what Edward tries to pull that night either!

Yet another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

thank you so much!  ...let me tell you, edward has some plans for bella, hahah.  like he said, "game on!"

Bella's fears are understandable but somehow less important than even her could have consider. Somehow Edward has proved himself during the last month. He has shown how much he cares for her, that is huge. There are still many things to consider, I don't know if I agree 100% with Bella in leaving all the emotional stuff up to Edward. She has lots to deal and work on too.

Emmett going all big brother wanting to go after Jake was really sweet and of course he placed Edward in the same place. Not exactly where he is but it's the thougth that counts ;).

So let the games begin... It will be something to witness both of them trying to "behave" while they tease each other and at the same time be carefull in not letting anyone see what's going on.

Who will suspect first? My money is with Alice, and if so what will she do? Help them cover it up?

Author's Response:

you are completely right on so many levels--edward HAS proved himself, but...as edward was saying before, bella needs a lot of encouragement constantly.  i think on some level he realizes that he has to be the one to tell her it's okay for them to be together first and validate her feelings.  however, it's going to be something they're going to have to work on if they want to be a real couple.

and, yes, the teasing/behaving dynamic was fun to write, so i'm hoping its fun to read as well!

thanks for reading and reviewing, as always!  it always makes me smile :)

I looove this chapter! :) Edward and Bella together is so cute and Emmett getting ready to kick ass for Bella is freaking adorable. Update soon!

Author's Response:

thank you!  it was one of my favorites, too :)

Ah, yes, it will be good! Love the naughtiness! This one is currently one of my favorite stories. Update soon!

Author's Response:

thank you so much!  updates are coming soon, and i hope it continues to stay one of your favorite stories!!!

Oh my gosh, the tension!!!  I can feel it.  This is a great story.  Thank you!

Author's Response:

thank YOU!  seriously--i'm so glad you're enjoying it :)

Great Chapter! Well Done! :) Emmett is so adorable and Edward is just gorgeous! Keep up the good work! I cant wait for the next one! :)

-Erin

Author's Response:

thank you so much!  i hope you continue to enjoy it ;)