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Reviewer: Emmy415 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 13

holy hell I love this story! Seriously the best! Was so excited to see that you finally updated, and you did not disappoint!! YAY!



Author's Response:

thank you!  i'm glad you're still enjoying it -- i'm kind of addicted to writing it.  hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint either :)

Reviewer: PCullen1974 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 13

I love it!  Naughty Bella and Edward!  Totally hot!  I wonder what they will do at the gig later in the night and I hope that Jake didn't say anything to nasty to Bella on the voicemail.  It is probably him asking for forgiveness though.  That would be typical Jake!  Loved it and can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

thank you!  haha, and yes, you've pretty much guessed right....jake has the tendency to flip out and then regret it...but, no worries -- bella will be a bit too distracted by edward to even care that much...

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 13

Haha!! Edward is a panty swiper!! LOVED it so much!! Love how they are just so into eachother and Bella's little fantasy about their future was sweet. Cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

i don't know why i think panty swiping is hot....but, apparently i do, haha.  thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JESSABELLA (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 13

The chapter was great, as always.  Update soon please.



Author's Response:

"as always" -- SQUEAL!  thank you so much :)  you know how to make a girl feel loved.  updates are coming soon!

Reviewer: Alissa (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 13

cant wait cant wait cant wait!

Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 13

So how fast are you going to be posting now???



Author's Response:

haha, hopefully tomorrow? --i'm catching up on the like 9 hours of tivo-ed tv i missed during finals, etc...but, then after that, i'm going to be writing non stop!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 13

Can't wait for the next chapter Bravo!



Author's Response:

yay, thank you!

Reviewer: skr0075 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 13

I am so excited for the sneaking around! And a few updates this week?!? You are my favorite author ever! :)



Author's Response:

i'm excited for it too!  and "favorite author ever!" -- umm....you're my favorite reader ever for saying that.  seriously :)

Reviewer: anabella (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 13

This is a cute story.  I really love these two together.

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oooh Bella challenged him!  Wonder what Eddie is going to bring to the table?  They should probably talk about their feelings soon though, or Bella's insanely low self esteem is going to get in the way.



Author's Response:

edward has some stuff to bring to the table, for sure.  and oh yes, they're going to talk about everything -- they're both jumping into somethign head first without talking at all, really...which is going to have some unseen consequences.

Reviewer: Angie_Kay (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh mayunn. (:  This was really good.  I was so worried that Em was going to catch them, but thank god for reflexes. :D I cant wait to see what they are going to do, at the show. :D

 



Author's Response:

thank you!  haha, yeah--right?  they're going to have quite the challenge keeping their relationship a secret...i hope you enjoy how it all plays out :)

Reviewer: lynncullen (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 13

Another fabulous chapter! My fav fanfic right now!



Author's Response:

"fav fanfic" --- AHHHH, really?  i think i just peed my pants a little bit in excitement.  you have no idea how much that means to me.  i hope you continue to enjoy the story as it plays out :)

Reviewer: christykq (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh geez, Emmett is a putz. LOL. Hot hot hot smut. These two have been holding in all the mojo for a month and now they can't keep their hands off each other. I can't wait to see what Edward is going to do. I'm thinking he's going to be super naughty and get Bella all hot and bothered when she can't relieve the tension. Bad Edward. THat's not nice. I hope he makes it up to her later when they're "sleeping". I love that they are sneaking around. "Secrets can be hot too." Logan Echolls would say from Veronica Mars when he was feeling up Veronica on his parent's sofa. I love that Bella found her underwear and Edward didn't really even try to lie about the reason they were in his drawer. I think he should wear his Clash shirt on stage later that night even though Bella wore it first, it would smell like her and remind him of her all night. That's kind of hot, plus she's not wearing for that long, it's not like it's going to be sweating and gross. Maybe a little stretched out in the chest. LOL! He should still wear it on stage. Great chapter. Great story. B+E are wicked hot together. UPdate quickly.



Author's Response:

first of all--i love that you just referenced veronica mars (one of my absolute favorite shows)...and yes, secrets are HELLA hot.  it just figures that after weeks of being able to not touch each other that they'd want to keep it to just themselves...and, i already wrote the next chapter, and i think you'll be pleased to see how it pans out :)  update possibly tomorrow?

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 13

i agree...this is going to be good....can't wait for more



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 13

hmmm no I think I'd prefer the naughty Edward dream go reality. hehe

But to each there own. I'm happy to know that my writing a 3 sentnce long review is the equivalent of a Mega Sex God...well almost

 

<3



Author's Response:

haha, me too.  and yes, your review is almost as good as that mega sex god.  seriously.  thank you so much :)

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hi there! New reader here... *waves* This is SO good, it's not even funny! There really is some talented writing here and the smut - oh gosh the smut! And they haven't even done the deed yet.

As for Jake, I'll get in line behind Emmett and Edward to give him a nice shiner. Ugh... that boy really needs a swift kick in his butt.

Really can't wait to see what you have written next, so please update soon. :)

Author's Response:

hey new reader!  welcome!  i'm so glad that people are still stumbling across my story...it makes me super happy.  thank you so much for reviewing--it makes me so happy to hear that you've been enoying it :)  updates soon, i promise ;)

Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh my!  I love your Edward and Bella!  Write more!  Write more!



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

YES!!!This just keeps getting better...please update again soon..Can't wait to read about the whole sneaking around thing. ;D



Author's Response:

it's going to be hot ;) ...and that's all i'm giving you, haha.  thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 13

Yes!

Reviewer: Jesse Mason (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 13

please write the rest.....PLEASE, WITH A CHERRY ON TOP



Author's Response:

oh, i'm definitely writing the rest...i promise!  keep reviewing, though -- i love knowing what you guys think :)

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 13

I have decided that guilt is a wonderful emotion, hehe. Updates and loving from Edward.....two of my favorite things, lol. And I must be honest I have adored Sweetward in the past chapters, but I'm absolutely thrilled to see Pervward returning...."and if that makes me a perv, then so be it." :D  I really love how you write the lemons.....all sexy and loving, but yet kinda snarky at the same time. Your chapters always make me smile so much.

Loved the whole "we should put clothes on"......."two hours later" thing. And Edward being a panty thief and Bella liking it is totally win. Pervs rule, lol.

Edward making French toast in his t-shirt and boxers is enough to send anyone into a happyplace lala land state. I can completely understand Bella's future fantasies starring Edward after seeing him in that pretty little domestic setting.

"Although the plowing was DEFINITELY going to have to happen soon"  hehe....can't wait for that. I might be as excited for the plowing as B and E! lol.

Loved that Em almost caught them making out. I definitely agree with Bella that this sneaking around is going to be quite difficult for them. I'm wondering who will be the first out of the group to catch them. Imagining it will probably be Alice...since Alice knows everything, lol....but that won't be too bad cause I'd think Alice probably would just help them along with their scheme.

Brunch was definitely interesting. It was so sweet that Em was ready to kick Jake's ass for Bella as well, even though he really liked Jacob. And the phone ringing like a bad sitcom was too funny.

That hot kiss was even hotter with Em just in the other room. Why, oh why, does sneaking around have to be so damn sexy? Lol.  "Game on" and I can't wait! Absolutely LOVED it as always!!!!!



Author's Response:

no, seriously--every time i looked at my computer this past week, i'd have pangs of guilt.  so...yeah, updates galore soon, hopefully :)  and definitely pervward--he's just my favorite...i've missed him, too...hence, panty stealing (why i think that's hot, i don't know...i just do).

hence, sneaking around will be difficult, but not completely impossible (apparently emmett is the most oblivious character in my story)...and secrets are hot, right? hahah.

thanks for reviewing, as always.  they make me smile, too :)

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 12

=D I sincerely love this line "Just as we had slipped into an easy friendship, we slipped into an easier relationship."  Perfect.

I love it.

Reviewer: HisAngel8 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 13

This is good. You know Em will find out though and it may not be pretty. Oh, and Jasper is going to freak since Bella is his friend. I cant wait. YAY! I bet they get caught in a compromising position. LOL!!



Author's Response:

thank you!  i'm glad you're enjoying it...and, yes, the e/b relationship will have some VERY interesting repercussions ;)

Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 13

Great story, can´t wait for the next chaper! Love the sneeking part, now the feeling and it is hot :-)



Author's Response:

thank you!  it's definitely getting warmer up in herrre, haha.

Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 9

This is the sweetest dirtiest story ever!!!

Kisses

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