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Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 14

"First, she compliments my looks (a SURE way to stroke my ego and get something you want from me)..." LMAO!

"(shhh, I listen to Alice when she talks, okay?)" Lol again!

“I did, baby.  I put on some boxers, see…”  And the laughing goes on!

Fun fun fun chapter!  LOVED it!  :)

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 14

I think I know whats coming, and am looking forward to it! :)

Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 14

Lemons!

Huh, can't wait ;)

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 14

Bring on the smut!!! *LOL*

Oh, where are my manners? Um, great update, the UST is driving me nuts, and thank you once again for sharing!

Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 14

Good Chapter..Can't wait to read more..

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 14

haha!  No one can feel guilty when you have the desire to get Edward naked! LOL.  Since the 80s were before my time, I cannot fully appreciate 80s rock.  However, I love all the teasing going on.  Too much sexual tension.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 14

awesome chapter!

Reviewer: lilgoblin (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 14

This story is super cute!  I'm really enjoying the interaction between Edward and Bella! Keep it up!

Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 14

As a child of the eighties, I have to say that I most definitely appreciated this chapter. I loved the set list and costumes. Jasper as Tom Cruise is priceless!

Reviewer: lost my mind forever (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 13

Wonderful story! Just got to finish reading the last 13 chapters. Looking forward to see the 80's night!

Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 13

Loooooooooooooooove It!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 13

Ok I really like this story, but please do not let her forgive jake because he is a complete and total ass!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

no worries, i am NOT a jake fan.  thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 13

Damn right, it would be a terrible idea for Edward to listen to the message first!  It's probably going to be Jake saying "I'm sorry Bells.  I love you Bells."  Blah, Blah, Blah!  Even if she does forgive him (well, I guess I should say "when" she forgives him), it's still not going to change how she feels about him, versus how she feels about Edward.  And how long are these two going to dance around the luh-love word?  Just spit it out already!  Especially Edward...Bella needs the reassurance knowing Edward's past.  She needs to know (even though she feels it) that she's not just one of Edward's conquests.  And Emmett is just one oblivious idiot.  They are in the kitchen with Edward in a t-shirt and boxers and Bella in EDWARD's t-shirt and a pair of panties...but, yeah, nothing is going on.  It's all innocent.  (I'm rolling my eyes now!)  I say we start placing our bets as to how long this secret remains a secret.  Somehow, I'm thinking once Alice and Jasper start observing, it ain't going to be a secret for long!  But it is going to be fun to see just what will happen at this 80's night.  I'm kinda guessing they are going to slip on some things that will make their friends raise their eyebrows in question!  Such a good, fun story!  I'm soooo looking forward to the next chapter!


Kathy M.



Author's Response:

haha, right?  just a little fyi--i'm not the biggest fan of jake, so...whatever is left on that message...it's not going to affect her relationship with edward.  also, yes, emmett is a little slow on the uptake--seriously, he's the most oblivious character in this story.  who really thinks that edward and bella have a brother/sister relationship?  hahah.  please, place your bets of how long you think it's going to remain a secret--i mean, i already know, so i probably won't tell you...but i'd like to see how long you think it'll last ;)

thanks for your great review, and thanks for reading!!!  hope you enjoy the next chapter just as much!

Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 13

read all of this today and i love it!  definitely looking forward to udpates!



Author's Response:

yay, thank you for catching up!

Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 13

Fuuuuuuuuck. I love this story! I can't believe I've put it off for this long. Please update soon! And happy belated congrats! <3 I want to know what trouble our favorite couple will get into... And I love Emmett.



Author's Response:

thank you!  i can't believe you put it off for this long, too ;)  i'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 11

OMG I love "Just Friends" too! What a perfect fucking song. I'm never gonna look at it the same way again. Thanksss! <3 It was sad when he was singing it. You wrote it very well, because my heart was hurting! I like the ending. Jake is a bitch and I don't like him.

Reviewer: Ready4Jasper (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 13

Game on indeed!!

I just found this story yesterday and can't wait for the updates.

Congrats on graduating!!



Author's Response:

thank you!  updates soon, i promise :)  hope you continue to enjoy it!

Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 8

LMAO OMG 98 degrees!!!!!!!!!!! I have that CD on my stereo in my car right now! Again, you have such an interesting selection of shit in this story!

Glad to see that Edward can be mature about this ;] Though I sure as fuck wouldn't want him to be "mature" around me. Gadammit, just touch me, fucker! hahaha. I love your writing. It's so funny! Especially Edward's inner battles. I generally like Edward's POV more, so thanks for switching it up. I'm happy to see that (again), Bella can be the change in Edward's life.

Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 6

I Believe In A Thing Called Love is the most hilarious song I've ever heard! A bunch of my girls sang it on our camping trip and lured in the 'coons LOL then it happened in the car and at the gas station and at the store and you can imagine the kinds of looks we got. You have such interesting choices/selections in this story! I'm lovin' it!

Glad to see things are going well for Edward and Bella. Their little moments together are just so sweet. I'm envious. Thanks for all the details of them singing! How beautiful!

 

Reviewer: cullenobsession (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 13

You rock!  This is a great story line.  I can't wait until you update.



Author's Response:

no, you rock :)  thank you!!! 

Reviewer: cullenbabygirl (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 13

Love, love, LOVE this story!!  Update soon!



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  love, love, love you, too :)

Reviewer: butterflies1993 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 13

I just hope Jake or some other bimbo doesn't come between their relationship.  And I really can't wait to see who finds out first about them.  I have an idea it might be Alice because she sees everything.  But I am curious.  Can't wait for the next update to see what Edward has planned for the challenge!

Thanks for giving me credit for starting the thread on the forums.  You didn't have to.  But it was pretty cool that you did.  Thanks again!

 



Author's Response:

of course i gave you credit!  it was your idea, afterall :)  thanks for continuing to read and review!

Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love this fic!!! So glad they are finally together (almost) -- wish I could emails when this is updated!  But I keep checking!

Reviewer: purplemilk27 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 13

I think all of us ladies will now be dreaming of syrup and sunshine and happiness!  Another great chapter!



Author's Response:

haha, i know that's what i dream about....thank you!

Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 3

Com Studies major? Yay for me and Emmett! I'd like to er... communicate with Edward for a few nice long ass hours. OOoohh yeahh.

I love that Never game! It's so fun. I wish you'd gone into more detail about the game, but it's understandable that it may have gotten a little dull with the focus on the game. But on the other hand... think of all the potential nonverbals from our favorite couple!

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