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Reviewer: little tea pot (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 14

This is currently my favorite twilighted story. I love your characterizations of BxE.  This is a really well written AU story. Anticipating the next chapter.

Reviewer: serena_heart_moon_4ever (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 14

love it, continue plz.

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 14

hurry up and write it - OMGGGGGG!!!

Reviewer: Lily09 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 14

Seriously, i couldn't stop laughing at the whol escenario of Edward trying NOT to get in Bella's pants... makes you think 'So close, yet so FAR'. I'm just really trying to picture what Emmet's gonna do when he finds out Edward's screwing with Bella, but which one's worse the fact that Edwards screwing Bella or that he broke THE RULE..??? It's gonna be soooo much fun finding out which one and the scene that would ensue....

All in all very great story and i'm glad it piqued my interest ... PLEASE UPDATE! ASAP!!!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 14

great chapter!! cant wait gor the next update!

Reviewer: Calricjes82 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 14

Hot hot hot! Great chapter. Thanks for the update. And I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 14

Love the bow to the 80's and the costumes, Edward is in love and sex crazed, what could be better!!! Update sooon!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 14

I swear this story just keeps getting better and better. The stuff with Rose at the beginning was fantastic. I may just take back my guess about Alice figuring stuff out first....I think Rosalie may be the first to realize Bella and Edward's dirty little secret, lol. It was mega-funny though, her teasing Edward. Why is it that torturing Edward is so fun? Lol. Not to mention poor Emmett....fifteen minutes is not enough to mess up my hair and make-up!

And while the thought of Edward in those jeans is wonderful, I must say that Jasper wins my vote for favorite outfit. Jasper in nothing but a white button-up shirt and socks and shades.....mmmmmmm. Way to transfer sexual frustration to your readers, lol.

Also loved Edward's commentary on Bella's clothing. "shhh, I listen to Alice when she talks, okay?" Too funny. And it was so sweet that Em got all big brother "you're not wearing that in public" on Bella. Awwww for Emmett.

While we're at, may as well go ahead and add an awww for Alice too. I loved her conversation with Edward and her being concerned over Bella. It was also sweet that Edward was touched that Alice cares so much about Bella. I definitely enjoyed Alice describing Bella returning to the apt on "Cloud Nine" though. Oh, if only Alice knew what put Bella on that cloud, lol.

Their little "game" was definitely hot as hell. I loved Edward's "Nice, Bella.  Really nice.  Cause blue balls even before we get out on stage.  Point 1 goes to Swan."   Yeah, their little teasing and touching is definitely amping up my frustration level, lol.

LOVED Edward's set list thoughts as always. I actually think the set list commentary is one of my favorite parts of this story. Perverted Edward + great music= Win!

I also really enjoy the switching povs. I know that there are some that don't like it, but for me personally I love getting both sides of the story. And I really enjoyed the last Bella pov here. Such a bad girl faking sick and worrying poor little Alice, but "my desire to get Edward naked and alone FAR outweighed any guilt"....I can completely understand that, lol.

Can't wait for Edward to make Bella all better. Alice will be asking what her miracle cure is tomorrow, lol. AWESOME, FANTASTIC chapter as always!!!!!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 14

It's about time!

Reviewer: krissylove (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 14

love the story! can't wait for chapter 15!!!

Reviewer: cole5183 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 14

Make it sweet (with a dirty naughty lemon the morning after)!  I really love your story!

Reviewer: frostedhope (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 13

Chapter 13, I absolutely /love/ the ending.  I don't think there was a better way to do that.

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 14

GOD!!!You really keep me hanging here..You better update fast! ;D Because this just keeps getting better and better..

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 14

They are naughty!  Ooh I hope they don't get caught!  Although then there would be no need for secrecy.  Hmmm...

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 14

well....well...its about time for those two....can't wait

Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 14

Quote: (Bella) I absolutely could not wait.

Us, too, Bella. Us, too.

THank you for updating. Loved it. Sigh. Secret ExB is hot.

Reviewer: lynncullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 14

I squeed like a fangirl when I saw another chapter up! I loved 80's night! I'm a big 80's fan too! I got to see Bon Jovi in concert a few years back with front row seats (don't ask how much!) and it was a fantastic night. Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!

Reviewer: Teddy (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 14

NOOOO!

How could you leave it at that?? Now I have to wait for the next update...

Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 14

I loved it!!!!!  The set of songs was great!!!  Poor Edward getting all worked up!!!  Can't wait to see when they get home;)

Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 14

man oh man! I think when Jasper came out Risky Business style, I cried I was laughing so hard!! it was perfect!!! :D

Reviewer: christykq (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 14

I love what Rose blurts out, making Edward choke on his beer. Classic. I'm wondering if Rose and Alice know more than they are leading on and just torturing Edward because they know he can't touch Bella, it's against the rules. The costumes were classics but I wish Jasper would have gone with the Sid Viscous punk rocker with dog collar and mohawk instead of Tom Cruise but too late now. And Tom Cruise DID NOT wear boxers, no matter how small they were. They were tighty whities all the way. Very funny that Edward thought their bodily fluids were going to make babies in his sheets. And I'm so glad Edward wore his Bella-smelling Clash shirt in the end. Perfect. I hope the rest of the gang doesn't show up unannounced while Bella and Edward are gettin' busy. That would not be good.

Great chapter. Great story. Update quickly.

Reviewer: dvandever (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 14

It's totally possible I may be just excited for them to get a little as they are to actually get it :)  Great chapter!  I totally was singing the songs to myself, lol.

Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 14

very good!  I do so like that they are equals in this relationship.

Reviewer: Irritable_Grizzzly (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 14

I really love how this story has evolved.

Like I said earlier, I was so afraid of what I like to call "made-up angst" where people don't say what they're feeling and misunderstandings ensue.  Hate that.

I'm also very glad you didn't go the "Edward continues to be a manwhore" route.  Ye olde "if I can't screw her, I've gotta get it out of my system" thing or maybe just to throw off Emmett.

Yes, I'm sure they won't mind when the relationship is eventually revealed, since it's not just a hook-up, but is a relationship.  Look, if Alice and Jasper were able to mess around for a year with nobody being the wiser, I'm sure Edward and Bella will be fine.

I love the evolution of their relationship and the pacing of the story.  I love the torturing each other onstage - and hell, just torturing each other in general.

Damn, I keep picturing Edward in those jeans...sigh.

Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 14

Can´t wait either! Need more!

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