It was a lovely little lemon.  Just perfect not too sweet not too dirty just right!  Love the story!  Love those Cullen boys :)

amazing.

I think you can sleep soundly, your lemon was excellent, lol.

*Ahem* but...practice does make perfect... ;)

Great story!

Whoo-hoo!  Finally!  But let's be realistic....there's no freakin' way they're gonna keep this a secret.  Especially if she goes to Chicago with them.

Yep.  This will be a very interesting explosion...

You made me so happy with this new chapter!  More happy moments please!!!!  (Oh, and if I haven't commented before well I LOVE this story!) Please update soon!

 

 

You had nothing to worry about! That chapter was amazing! The exchange of the I love you's, Emmett telling Bella that she could come to him too. The lemon. Perfectly perfect chapter!

oh my gosh, that was absolutely incredible, who knew that me (the sometimes ice queen) could feel so many emotions in a chapter, i honestly got a little misty at the end there! I thought the chapter was perfect, and it was everything i wanted it to be and more, im proud of you boo and love you.....and cant wait for MY chapter to soon come :) :) :)

Hot! Sweet! and still humorous! This chapter definitely had it all. And the lemon was fantastic....definitely cold-shower-inducing! So no worries, you can definitely do lemons! And hopefully that won't be your last one either! :D

Bella being a horny, devilish little vixen was totally kick-ass. Her putting Edward's hand on her panties was totally hot. And his reaction was priceless. The making out on the hood of the Porsche was very HOT as well. Gah, that's a wonderful scene to have in your mind....beautiful car and beautiful man together! :D

"Yeah, Bella—those aren’t my keys. Fuck. Inside NOW!"----ROFLMAO! And that happened again when Bella informed Edward that he wasn't a fucking Jonas brother, lol. Note to self....don't cockblock Bella, she gets pissy.

But Edward may just deserve sainthood status for not only stopping himself from taking what he wanted, but also potentially incurring the wrath of Bella as he stopped her from taking what she wanted....all to make sure she knew he loved her and that it wasn't just fucking for him, which was totally sweet.

The "I love you"s were almost as good as the lemon. ;)  They were sweet and yet totally true to the characters of Edward and Bella in this chapter. And I might have mention that I enjoyed the lemon, hmm?

And if that wasn't enough to make you jealous of Bella...she also gets the other Cullen man comforting her and telling her that he loves her. It was kinda cute when she remarked as to how both of them had confessed their love for her, even though one was in a brotherly manner and one totally wasn't brotherly.

And the message from Jacob....he's definitely an ass and yet his rambling apology almost made me feel sorry for him. Almost, lol, but not quite. Although it was all better when Emmett comforted her! I want Brother Bear too!  :p

Besides, Thanksgiving with the Cullen family is sooo much better than her going to Billy and Jacob's for Thanksgiving. I cannot wait for that little trip. I have a feeling that Bella and Edward will find it even more difficult to hide stuff from Esme. After all, as the old saying goes "A mother always knows". So it should definitely be interesting. I'm also looking forward to the progression of Bella and Edward's relationship since they've declared their feelings for each other and made love. I'm sure there are lots of interesting things to come for these two!

I continue to be amazed at how well you combine the love, lust, and humor in your chapters. This chapter especially was HOT and yet still made me laugh and made me go "awwww".  You're a very gifted writer to be able to go from hot lemon, to sweet words, to a funny line as seamlessy as you do...I've seen many stories that just haven't been able to manage that transition.

So...no more concerns! You're fabulous and the story is fabulous! Just keep the chapters coming for us! Please? :D

Coming out of lurkerdom...

I think your wonderful at lemons. :) And I'm really enjoying this story so far.

Wow. Hot.
I loved it.
And I was kind of hoping that Emmett would figure out something... but then again, I wasn't, because that would be bad... right? XD

I love this (:

-erinzomg

I LOVE YOU.

Marry me?

Don't worry 'bout my fiancee, he would love your story too.

 

Uh...I liked you lemons!  Made me remember my first 'makinglove' session and it was really great. 

 

Jake is an ass.  I've always hated him.  Good job with keeping it that way.

 

I love Emmett as the older brother, but damn why did he have to come home -whines-

Yes!!!  Feel the LOVE Baby!

Wow, what a hot lemon... *fans herself* Don't worry, you're doing great! :)