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Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 15
Gah. Jake is such a douchebag. But I can't find myself to be upset about his damn stupid message (leave it to him to breakup friendship over a voicemail) because I'm getting myself some Cullen love! TWO CULLEN LOVES! Bella is one lucky girl. She doesn't need a tool like Jake, and good riddance too. :) Ugh. No more Jake, please.
And you did great on the sex scene - it was very, very, very 10x very, HOT. It's not cheesy, it certainly doesn't read like thrasy love novel... seriously.. I love it. Don't be nervous, k? You did awesome. *hugs*
And props to Edward for saying 'I love you'... gahhhhhh... I think I fainted from romance overload. So so incredibly sweet of him. :)
Please write more - still loving it!
Author's Response: *hugs back* thank you, thank you, thank you...a million times.
i'm writing MUCH more, i promise. it's reviews like yours that make me want to write more, so thank you again. and no worries, i hate jake, too ;)
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 15
Excellent work! Your fears were groundless. I loved this update. Can't wait for Thanksgiving.
Author's Response: *squeals* thank you :)
Reviewer: Scully (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 15
Ooooo, Thanksgiving. I can't wait. I know that in these types of stories, or any type of story, there has to be soma sort of trial for the protaganists to overcome. Any ideas on what this one will be?
Reviewer: Regetta (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 15
Trust me, you can do lemons ;) It was so perfect for their first time with the right balance of sweet and funny. Update soon!
Reviewer: JEM1979 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 15
No need to fear! You did a great job. ;)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 15
Sweetie, you did lemon just great!! Stop worrying. Fingering in the car? whew!! Humping on the hood?!? WHEW!! Squishy panties? eew, but WHEW too!! lol....Edward and his huge junk doin' there thing? Fan-freakin'-TASTIC!!!! And how amazingly cute was it that he told her it was all about da love, and not just da booty? Damn near broke my heart, girl - nothin' like a luscious blend of love-n-lemon!!! A tasty treat, indeed. :)
Jake's a dick. I'm glad Bella's going to the Cullens. I'm with her - violating Edward in his little kid bed is so...deviant and delicious!! >:> She should take him to a thrift shop and get him some vintage clothing so he can dress the way he did back then...hmm....she can role play as his babysitter...um...
I'm a dirrrrty girl!!!
Thanks for the succulent update. !! >:>
Reviewer: chaser1000 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 15
Wow that lemon got me out of lurkdom to say that was hella hot!!!! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update
Reviewer: Teddy (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 15
I think you did well! Too bad Emmett had to come home early ;)
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 15
That lemon was fuck hot. You have a talent for writing them!
Reviewer: TWILIGHTRULESZ (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 15
that was so... well would it be wrong to say beautiful? but i love emmett and i hate Jake. I love Edward and i LOVE this story!
Reviewer: steph86red (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 15
I thought the chapter was very well written!! Good job...and I love this story!
Reviewer: butterflies1993 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 15
I think you did a good job with the lemon. Don't beat yourself up about it. You are a wonderful writer! I am so glad that Edward told Bella that he loved her before they did the deed. I just really hope everything works out for them and that there isn't some horrible angst lurking around the corner. If there is I understand every story needs alittle angst. Anyways, I really the loved the big brother Emmett moment. I wish I had a big brother like him. I can't believe Edward and Bella almost got caught in the act. I am still waiting for that twist. I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 15
by far the best chapter yet! AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for more ;)
Reviewer: savemesuperman128 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 15
I love this story! It's one of my favorites!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 15
THIS IS A VERY NICE LEMON!!!!!!!!I LIKED IT VERY MUCH!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 15
KTBPA - Great song choice, totally fitting and yes, you can definitely pull off the lemons. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 15
ahhh....I'm all tingly. Do NOT question your lemon writing abilities!! that was....HOT! haha
Reviewer: smithle1 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 15
HOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: casey-jade21 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 15
me like. woot for the sexn!!!
Reviewer: jaime12576 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 15
Great chapter and great Lemon!!! Not over the top and not too little just right :)
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 15
Yes, you can do lemons. First one, huh? Don't believe it. That was a sweet, awesome, wonderful chapter. I love sweet Edward. And I loved Emmett with Bella at the end, that was so sweet. I get so excited when I see that you've updated.
Reviewer: carolinacrc (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 15
i liked it;)
Reviewer: obsessedliz (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 15
Great job on the lemon...no worries ;)!
I'm really enjoying this story!
Reviewer: lea72476 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 15
Your lemons are GREAT! Love this story. It's one of my favorites!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 15
Your lemonade was delicious- tangy but not too tart and very refreshing.
I don't know how Bella had the strength to leave Edward's bed..gah..
Emmett is just the sweetest man alive- hope the parents realize how special Bella is to Edward- he doesn't seem like he's going to be very forthcoming.
Who's gonna figure out that the're sleeping together first? My money's on Alice...am I right?
Please post next chapter soon!!
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