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Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 16
it's probably cliche for Bella to be Belle (the look is right) and Edward to be Beast (or the Prince if too vain for fur), but Belle's my favorite Disney cartoon heroine
and, of course, great chapter!
Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 16
Great chapter, as usual. Halloween with Edward--soooo much fun! That's my fav. holiday. For E/B how about Alice in Wonderland and the Mad Hatter (that's my favorite for them), Snow White and the Prince, or Cinderella and the Prince?
Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 16
Bella and Edward should be Beauty and the Beast!!!!
I LOVE ALICE & JASPER AS PETER PAN AND TINKERBELLE!!! I was Peter Pan for Halloween last year (except since I'm a girl it was kinda drag-ish)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 16
HOW ABOUT THE ALADDIN CHARACTERS?? JASMINE AND --CRAP - I FORGOT THE GUY'S NAME. LOVE THIS CHAPTER, BY THE WAY!!!!!
Reviewer: lynncullen (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 15
I totally forgot to leave a review on this chapter. And that is soooo not fair because this story deserves a review per chapter, per reader. P.S. fantastic lemon writing skills!
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 16
The obvious would be Belle and The Beast (Post Curse Breaking) He kind of has reddish hair.
Reviewer: lynncullen (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 16
God women! 2 lemons in 1 chapter! Your bestie must have some very good sex dreams! Another fantastic (and delicously long) chapter! Thanks for keepin the updates rolling!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 16
This is REALLY good, you're doing a fantasic job..Can't wait for more..Can't wait for your next update... ;D Love the idea of Jack Sparrow and Elisabeth.. ;D hehe. Bella and Edward could go as Pocahontas and Capt. John Smith..Edward would probably love seeing Bella in a skimpy Pocahontas outfit.. ;D
Reviewer: lollipopstick28 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 16
Cinderella n prince phillip!!
Reviewer: Kels1986 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 16
Belle and the beast or simba and nala from the lion king
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 16
Sigh.... thanks for making it a happy Friday with an "Off Limits" update.
Off to peruse the husband's Disney collection for ideas... yeah, I know.
Reviewer: SoImpossible (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 16
The last line scares me. They just got happy.. don't let Edward screw it up. He's been so devoted to her for the past month even though they weren't together. I can't imagine he'd be stupid now that he has her. And definitely thanks for the lemons. I can't wait until they check a few more off the list.
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 16
I actually love the shower sex than the car sex, even though technically the car sex is hotter. Both are similar in the sense that they can get caught, but otherwise so very different. I don't know... trying to keep silent in a slippery shower? Then taken from behind? That seals the deal. :D
It seems like Edward's extended family is having suspicions already. :P Woot!
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 16
GREAT CHAPHTER HOT!!!!!!HOTTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEAUTY & BEAST ?
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 16
Hi there :) OOOH< Porsche sex! that was some steamy car lovin'. whew!!
I think Edward should go as Alladin. His chest would look great mostly bare in that vest, and those balloony pants would hide his ginormous boners. ;) Bella could go as Jasmine (who, if you recall, basically did a POLE DANCE despite it being a kids' cartoon!) which would expose her belly and 90% of her breasts, which would drive Bunny nuts all night....and result, no doubt, in some serious magic carpet burns!! >:>
Reviewer: kaystu (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 16
I LOVE YOU!!! this was PERFECT....and i guess edward is an almost decent substitute for spike :) anyways, see you in a few hours love, xox
Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 16
Ah Jesus. He just HAD to go and say that, didn't he? Man, now he's gonna screw something up! Aghhh!!! This is bad. This is very, very bad.
Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 16
Love it! racking my brain for a costume thats Edward worthy..however, I dont think there is a Disney movie with a male charector wearing only a fig leaf *sigh* so I am no use! Update soon please :)
Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 16
I'm so loving this story. Write quick!
Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 16
1. That song by Panic at the Disco is my favorite dirty song. How'd you know? Seriously, I saw the first lyric line and let out a "squee!"
2. Disney costumes for Bella and Edward--my suggestion is Belle and the Prince (the Beast after the spell is broken) from Beauty and the Beast.
3. LOL @ the Superbad reference. I love that movie something fierce!
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 16
lol Spike? From Buffy? ... I always did like the bloody bloke. But yes, I agree. Edward is my favorite.
And since Bella is already Miss Swan, maybe she could be Elizabeth Swan? .... But I kinda get the heebie jeebies from those two actors in Pirates. I don't know. I hope they get creative ;-]
Oohhhhh this was a hot chapter! Waking up to this on my birthday was fucking hot. Thanks, bitch! <3 Please update soon with more lemons. I know I want it, but I know Bella and Edward want it more. How can you deny them? = [ Just think of the Cullen pout... and how he could be spankin' ya! haha and then do it.
Reviewer: PCullen1974 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 16
WOW! I absolutely loved this chapter. Shower sex is so awesome for so many reasons and you wrote it so great! I really hope that everyone will be accepting of their relationship. I think Alice knows more than she is letting on and the car scene was hysterical with Bella freaking out about airing out the car! Loved it and can't wait for more!
Reviewer: polkadotgrl (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 16
This chapter was AMAZING! and i cannot WAIT for disney costumes. My senior year in high school all my friends choose different disney characters and we dressed up for school... hands down one of the best days of school ever! I love this story and look forward to your updates all the time! Keep up the amazing work!
Reviewer: Regetta (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 16
love it :)
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 15
I would say two thumbs up...you can definitely write a good lemon!
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