You are one hell of an author (twilight style)

 

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I am surprised that was your first lemon....it was perfect. I loved it! I loved the Back to the Future reference as well. Kudos!

Author's Response:

haha, thank you!  and, back to the future is my roommate's favorite movie, so...it was a little homage to her ;)

yay happy, and then the shit hits the ceiling..boo...excellent chapter, love it love it love it!

I think you could even try to do "Beauty & the Beast" for Emmett & Rose...just a suggestion =)

=D Bella's lists=loooveeelllyyy lemonade.

Gotta love it.

Mas por favor.

I would suggest Tarzan and Jane just because Edward in a loin cloth is just droolworthy to resist...

How about Tarzan and Jane or Beauty and the Beast?

Aww... that last part was so sweet!

Beauty and the Beast... that's a good one! And it relates to them! Here is the lyrics to one of the songs in the movie, it's actually called Beauty and the Beast!

Tale as old as time
True as it can be
Barely even friends
Then somebody bends
Unexpectedly
Just a little change
Small to say the least
Both a little scared
Neither one prepared
Beauty and the Beast

Ever just the same
Ever a surprise
Ever as before
Ever just as sure
As the sun will rise

Tale as old as time
Tune as old as song
Bittersweet and strange
Finding you can change
Learning you were wrong
Certain as the sun
Rising in the east
Tale as old as time
Song as old as rhyme
Beauty and the Beast

Tale as old as time
Song as old as rhyme
Beauty and the Beast

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh  ahh the horny teenager stage - I think it happens in every relationship no matter how old we are!!

oh no...why did Edward have to say that last line? I cringed coz it sounded too good to be true....or maybe, it really is going to be that good?

Pls don't let Edward F this thing up. It's so adorable how he said he was in love with his best friend!

Your lemons again were just dripping with juices, LOL! Oh, i'm sure your disney characters will be awesome! :D

aw so amazinggg!

i loved this chapter so much

i love this story so much

cannotttt wait to see what happends next! :)))

Aww! That was too much- car sex is the best. The idea of possibly getting caught makes it hotter and more fun. Oh for the costume, Bella could be Alice and Edward could the rabbit from alice in Wonderland. She does call him Bunny.  What do you think?

I think Tarzan and Jane or Roger Rabbit and Jessican Rabbit for Emmett and Rosalie.  Em would be the perfect Tarzan and Rosalie would ROCK as Jessica Rabbit.  Also, couldn't you see Em and Rose going totally nuts and having Emmet dress as a woman in drag (as a tramp) and Rose as a Lady? Alice would be pissed at their non-traditional roles, but it would be soooo them.  Haha. I love Jasper and Alice as Peter Pan and Tink.  For Edward and Bella of course the obvious is Beauty and the Beast, but too predictable.  Mary Poppins and Chimney Sweep would be cute.  But I think my fave would have to be Jasmine and Aladdin.  The costumes would show all their yummy curves and the sexiness.  Sigh...

Also, love the story.  And music choices always make me smile.  I tell you tho, you GOTTA have Bella sing with Edward on piano... Nina Simone's "Do I Move You"  Sexy as hell song... and the piano accompaniment.  Ahhhhh....   I didn't much like Edward's pointing out that Bella's body wasn't perfect, but was perfect for his.  I get what he was saying, but if I ever knew somebody that was seeing me naked was thinking I wasn't perfect, I'd be ticked off.  I don't think he would have thought that.  I think he would have thought, "Damn her body is perfect for me," but not the part where he thought her body wasn't perfect, but perfect for him.  No what I mean?  Just had to put in some food for thought with all my positives.  Hope you understand.

 

Can't wait for more!