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Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 17
OMG! That is so funny! I'm glad Alice found them and not Emmett. At least Alice won't go bonkers. She knew it was coming. I think she wanted it more than they did. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I'm so sorry bout your car. THat really sux. Ohh, but the New Moon trailer had to make you a lil happier right? Plus Twilight won all the awards they were nominated for: best fight, best male breakthrough, best kiss, best female, best movie. How sweet is that?
Author's Response: you are SO right. the new moon trailer did WONDERS for my mood, haha. as did the awards. could kstew be any more awkward? i don't think so. and could i love her any more? i'm starting to doubt it.
on another note, thanks for reviewing! i'm really glad you're enjoying everything so far :)
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 17
well, we all have a small crush on Jasper, Bella--and it's about time you and Edward got outed, all for your own good, right?
lovelovelove this
Author's Response: eee---lovelovelove you! thanks for reviewing :)
and, yes to the small crush on jasper. it just can't be helped ;)
Reviewer: Yella_loves_Edward (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 17
hahahahaha they have been caught!!! YaY bout time! I loved the chapter! =)
Author's Response: haha, i'm glad you feel that way. alice DEFINITELY feels that way :) thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: pseudocullen (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 17
Sorry to hear your car has been broken into...that just sucks.
Speaking of suck... Man this chapter was great!!! Hehe. I've been wondering when the dirty secret will be outed.
Author's Response: hahahah speaking of suck...this chapter was great? did you intend that to be dirty? or ...did my mind just go there? either way--i'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 17
Hehehehe, they are so cute! I hope they don't mess it up!
Author's Response: no major angst is on the way, i promise! and, thank you--i'm glad you think so :)
Reviewer: LovelyNette16 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 17
Still a fucking amazing story!!!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: soph323 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 17
so excited to see what happens next!
Author's Response: yayyy, me too, haha.
Reviewer: selene_romanov (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 9
bon jovi is awesome and so are you.
Reviewer: bizkitprinzess (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 17
Sorry about your car. My car is a piece of crap and that would make me feel violated (I love my crap car, that is identical to like twenty other cars in the town where I live).
This story is awesome. I've been reading for awhile without reviewing (I never feel like I have anything useful to add beyond loving the story, I'm shy about being un-constructive with my reviewing). I actually just rec'd this story to a co-worker (who I got hooked on Twilight) that stumbled onto fan fiction all by herself.
Anyway. Your story is awesome and I hope the cops can do something in regard to the theft and smashed in ness of your cars window.
Author's Response: ok, first - thank you for rec'ing my story! i'm glad that it's been enough to bring you out of the woodworks! second - i'm so glad you're enjoying the story...it really makes my heart happy, haha. third - thanks for the car condolences, we'll see what actually happens. and lastly, but NEVER least -- thanks for reviewing! it's super nice to hear that people have been reading and loving the story as much as i love wriitng it :)
Reviewer: selene_romanov (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
loved it all.
Reviewer: DSCH (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 17
Alice is going to make their lives miserable!
...i can't wait!! :)
Author's Response: haha, neither can i ;)
Reviewer: selene_romanov (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 17
that's shitty about your car, awesome chappy, love the bella/rose kiss, la hot, edward = bunny, loved it.
Author's Response: nothing better than some drunk girl/girl, right? hahah. i'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks for revewing :)
Reviewer: ShanShan (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 17
Boo to the vandalism! At least they didn't steal the car...that's a plus, right? It sucks that they stole your ipod and broke your new baby though...I hope the cops catch them!
AWESOME chapter! Loved the costumes! Cannot wait to see what Alice does...
=D
Author's Response: hahah, thank you! and yes, thank god they didn't steal the car. it's always nice to hear some well wishes :)
Reviewer: Greenaway (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 17
Sorry to hear about your car!!!!!! :-( ****Hugs*****. It sucks when shit like that happens, I can totally relate!!!!!!!!!! Cheers for keeping on the story! They are so happy! And it makes me happy just reading about their happiness!! So cheers for the story and keep up the good work and flow. You are brilliant at this!!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha, yes - my car may have been vandalized, but i love e/b too much to let the story suffer because of it :) thanks for reviewing and for enjoying it--i'm so glad!!!
Reviewer: sweet (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 17
WOOHOO!FREAKIN HOT......I am really into this story,cannot wait for the next chapter.Bet Alice had a vision about them two...LOL.
Author's Response: haha, right? even when alice isn't a psychic, she's still a psychic :)
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 17
I LOVED the toasts they made... funny stuff!
HOT Rosalie and Bella kissing and then HOT dancing with Edward.
Yay! for getting caught finally! :)
I'm sorry your car was broken into! Hope the insurance covers everything! GL!
Author's Response: hahah, thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed the chapter...it definitely had some fun elements -- more to come soon!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 17
hey it was bound to happen, it is alice afterall lol! excellent chapter!
Author's Response: right? alice knows all :)
thanks for revewing!!
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 17
AH! Alice! I think she suspected all along though. The whole vandalism thing sucks. I hope things start to look up soon!
Author's Response: hmmm, i think you're right ;) and thanks, things are already starting to look up!
Reviewer: cwebb (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 17
I look forward to your updates! I totally love this story-- keep up the work and sorry about your car
Author's Response: ah, thank you so much! i'm glad that you're loving the story, seriously!!
Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 17
So sorry to hear about your car, I hope they get the little buggers. Maybe you can watch the New Moon trailer, it should help you feel better a little. Love the story, I'm glad that Alice was the first to find out about E & B.
Author's Response: haha, thanks. me too. and yes, i have been watching the new moon trailer, and it's been helping....more than i thought it would, actually, haha.
thanks for the review-i'm glad you're loving it :)
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 17
ps i am really sorry to hear about your car! i hope this week goes better for you :) (I really like your story if that makes you feel better knowing !!)
Author's Response: aw, thank you! honestly, it does help, hahah.
Reviewer: twltr12 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh no! I'm sorry to hear your car was broken into :( that sucks! Hopefully knowing that you did a simply maaahhvelous job on this chapter will help ;)! I loved the costume choice it was totally unexpected but sexy, and I can't wait to see what happens now that Alice knows about them!
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 17
haha ! i knew they were going to be found out. It was only a matter of time before they did ... secrets never remain that way for long ... so excited to hear what happens next!!!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 17
i would love to wake him up one morning....but there would be no alice, bella or anyone else. just me and him....can't wait for more
Author's Response: hahah, i feel the same way....sigh. anyway, more to come soon! thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: butterflies1993 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 17
I loved their costumes. I never thought they could be that! I really loved it. They have been caught finally. I was wondering when that was going to happen. I honestly thought it would happen while they were drinking. Because in my experience that is when you do some dumb shit that you don't realize you were doing because you are wasted. Anyways, I just hope everything works out for them. I really hope Alice isn't too hard on them. I just want them to work out so bad with no problems in between. The Sex Playlist is awesome too. Doesn't everyone have those songs they want to do it to. LOL! Anyways, love the chapter. I cannot wait until the next one comes out. And one last thing. I am really sorry to hear about what happened to your car!
Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed the costumes -- they were different...i didn't want them to be completely standard...and, yes, they have been caught! drinking does lead to stupididty, and...i think you'lll approve of everything alice has in store for them.
also, glad you've been enjoying the sex playlist. of course everyone has that! haha.
and thanks again for reviewing, as always. it makes me smile :)
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