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Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 17

LMAO. I think Rose and Alice both have been on to them. LOL. Thank you for updating. Sucks about your car. People suck. But you love us and we lurve ya back.

Author's Response:

hahah, you think?  god, i have the best readers.  it's true--i do love you, and i have never been more grateful that you love me back.  seriously--thanks for the revew :)

Reviewer: PCullen1974 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 17

Uh Oh!  Well I knew ALice suspected something and now she has confirmation.  Loved it and can't wait for the next part!



Author's Response:

ohhh yes, alice knows now!  good things to come, i promise!

thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: IsleDreams (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 17

oh those crazy kids. Good thinking with the pocahontas!! Bout' time someone caught them. Gotta love some Alice.



Author's Response:

i had a ...ahem....dream that may or may not have involved rob and me dressed as pocahontas, so....yeah....glad you enjoyed it, hahaha.

Reviewer: Maplestyle (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 17

Sorry to hear about your car :(  I wonder what Alice is going to do with her information. Will she be happy? Will she blackmail them?? Will she be an evil pixie or a nice pixie?? Can't wait to find out!



Author's Response:

oh, alice has some stuff up her sleeves, hehehe.  i'm glad you're excited, though--thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 17

OMG! That is so funny!  I'm glad Alice found them and not Emmett.  At least Alice won't go bonkers.  She knew it was coming.  I think she wanted it more than they did.  I can't wait to see the next chapter.  I'm so sorry bout your car.  THat really sux.  Ohh, but the New Moon trailer had to make you a lil happier right?  Plus Twilight won all the awards they were nominated for: best fight, best male breakthrough, best kiss, best female, best movie.  How sweet is that?



Author's Response:

you are SO right.  the new moon trailer did WONDERS for my mood, haha.  as did the awards.  could kstew be any more awkward?  i don't think so.  and could i love her any more?  i'm starting to doubt it.

on another note, thanks for reviewing!  i'm really glad you're enjoying everything so far :)

Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 17

well, we all have a small crush on Jasper, Bella--and it's about time you and Edward got outed, all for your own good, right?

lovelovelove this



Author's Response:

eee---lovelovelove you!  thanks for reviewing :)

and, yes to the small crush on jasper.  it just can't be helped ;)

Reviewer: Yella_loves_Edward (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 17

hahahahaha they have been caught!!! YaY bout time! I loved the chapter! =)



Author's Response:

haha, i'm glad you feel that way.  alice DEFINITELY feels that way :)  thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: pseudocullen (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 17

Sorry to hear your car has been broken into...that just sucks. 

 

Speaking of suck...  Man this chapter was great!!!  Hehe.  I've been wondering when the dirty secret will be outed.



Author's Response:

hahahah speaking of suck...this chapter was great?  did you intend that to be dirty? or ...did my mind just go there?  either way--i'm glad you enjoyed it!  thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 17

Hehehehe, they are so cute!  I hope they don't mess it up!



Author's Response:

no major angst is on the way, i promise!  and, thank you--i'm glad you think so :)

Reviewer: LovelyNette16 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 17

Still a fucking amazing story!!!



Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: soph323 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 17

so excited to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

yayyy, me too, haha.

Reviewer: selene_romanov (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 9

bon jovi is awesome and so are you.

Reviewer: bizkitprinzess (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 17

Sorry about your car. My car is a piece of crap and that would make me feel violated (I love my crap car, that is identical to like twenty other cars in the town where I live).

This story is awesome. I've been reading for awhile without reviewing (I never feel like I have anything useful to add beyond loving the story, I'm shy about being un-constructive with my reviewing). I actually just rec'd this story to a co-worker (who I got hooked on Twilight) that stumbled onto fan fiction all by herself.

Anyway. Your story is awesome and I hope the cops can do something in regard to the theft and smashed in ness of your cars window.



Author's Response:

ok, first - thank you for rec'ing my story!  i'm glad that it's been enough to bring you out of the woodworks!  second - i'm so glad you're enjoying the story...it really makes my heart happy, haha.  third - thanks for the car condolences, we'll see what actually happens.  and lastly, but NEVER least -- thanks for reviewing!  it's super nice to hear that people have been reading and loving the story as much as i love wriitng it :)

Reviewer: selene_romanov (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

loved it all.

Reviewer: DSCH (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 17

Alice is going to make their lives miserable!

...i can't wait!! :)



Author's Response:

haha, neither can i ;)

Reviewer: selene_romanov (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 17

that's shitty about your car, awesome chappy, love the bella/rose kiss, la hot, edward = bunny, loved it.



Author's Response:

nothing better than some drunk girl/girl, right? hahah.  i'm glad you enjoyed it!  thanks for revewing :)

Reviewer: ShanShan (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 17

Boo to the vandalism! At least they didn't steal the car...that's a plus, right? It sucks that they stole your ipod and broke your new baby though...I hope the cops catch them!

AWESOME chapter! Loved the costumes! Cannot wait to see what Alice does...

=D



Author's Response:

hahah, thank you!  and yes, thank god they didn't steal the car.  it's always nice to hear some well wishes :)

Reviewer: Greenaway (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 17

Sorry to hear about your car!!!!!! :-( ****Hugs*****. It sucks when shit like that happens, I can totally relate!!!!!!!!!! Cheers for keeping on the story! They are so happy! And it makes me happy just reading about their happiness!! So cheers for the story and keep up the good work and flow. You are brilliant at this!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

haha, yes - my car may have been vandalized, but i love e/b too much to let the story suffer because of it :)  thanks for reviewing and for enjoying it--i'm so glad!!!

Reviewer: sweet (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 17

WOOHOO!FREAKIN HOT......I am really into this story,cannot wait for the next chapter.Bet Alice had a vision about them two...LOL.



Author's Response:

haha, right?  even when alice isn't a psychic, she's still a psychic :)

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 17

I LOVED the toasts they made... funny stuff!

HOT Rosalie and Bella kissing and then HOT dancing with Edward.

Yay! for getting caught finally!  :)

I'm sorry your car was broken into!  Hope the insurance covers everything!  GL!



Author's Response:

hahah, thank you!  i'm glad you enjoyed the chapter...it definitely had some fun elements -- more to come soon!

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 17

hey it was bound to happen, it is alice afterall lol! excellent chapter!



Author's Response:

right?  alice knows all :)

thanks for revewing!!

Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 17

AH! Alice! I think she suspected all along though. The whole vandalism thing sucks. I hope things start to look up soon!

Author's Response:

hmmm, i think you're right ;)  and thanks, things are already starting to look up!

Reviewer: cwebb (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 17

I look forward to your updates! I totally love this story-- keep up the work and sorry about your car



Author's Response:

ah, thank you so much!  i'm glad that you're loving the story, seriously!!

Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 17

So sorry to hear about your car, I hope they get the little buggers. Maybe you can watch the New Moon trailer, it should help you feel better a little. Love the story, I'm glad that Alice was the first to find out about E & B.



Author's Response:

haha, thanks.  me too. and yes, i have been watching the new moon trailer, and it's been helping....more than i thought it would, actually, haha.

thanks for the review-i'm glad you're loving it :)

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 17

ps i am really sorry to hear about your car! i hope this week goes better for you :)   (I really like your story if that makes you feel better knowing !!)



Author's Response:

aw, thank you!  honestly, it does help, hahah. 

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