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Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 9
oh big brother/father Emmett, I just love it, I wonder if there will be a bed check later in the night.I also loved the fight and Edward asking Emmett if it was O.K for Bella to "sleepover", I can't wait to see how brother bear Emmett is when he gets his hands on Jasper. That will be just as entertaining as this chapter, Iam sure.
I also loved the girly bonding and banter, almost as entertaining as the boys. I can't wait to see what happens next, so it's onto the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 8
loved it, Bella and Edward bonding, very sweet and touching, I love how they are getting to know each other. As always jealous Edward is very enterating, if he is reacting to Jacob like this when he's only heard about him from Bella and after one phone call, then I can't wait to see how he deals when Jacob shows up.
So once again it's onto the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 7
once again very entertaining, I just love jealous Edward, especially when he's all caveman and possessive as well. but the por man had=s just walked in on his sister a friend going at it, Bella is going to have to help him get over that, although I di love the Closet comment, had me crying with laughter.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 6
I just loved it, bad ass Edward torment for an entire set, and the always entertaining internal Edward debate. Must be so har togo from Badass slut to being owned by someone in the space of three days, and then only allowed to be friends. Poor Baby.
I can't wait to see what happens next, so it's on to the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 5
I just love Edwards oh so amusing and always entertaining, internal debate. It's great. The sexual tension between them is smoldering, and smokin hot, I can't wait to see how they mnage to bend the rule next, because I get the feeling that this friends thing won't last long, not with how attracted and emotionally involved they are with each other already.
Jealous Edward especially makes for nteresting reading, since I am sure bad ass slutty Edward has never been Jealous a day in his life, and now he's jealous when his girl is hugging or being pecked on the cheek, by a guy he knows is in love with some one else. See friends won't last for lone, especially if Jacob makes an appearance.
on to the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 4
sweet, and Oh so hot, I can't wait to see what happens next, What a way to show a girl you think she's hot, especially when she won't take your word for it. But I think Edward may have just opened a big can of worms, how in the hell will he stop the kiss in time for the concert and with out Alice finding out.
Can't wait, so it once aganin on to the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
once again very entertaining, I always love reading the story when all the Cullens are in the same place, you never know what might happen, Between their teasing banter, and sexual tension, it's so hard to guess what will happen next. So rather than guess, it's on to the next chapter right now.
Author's Response: hahah--oh, yes. the cullens together = madness. ridiculousness DOES ensue. i hope you enjoy it!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 2
oh loved it, just as entertaining as the last chapter. Loved Bellas confusion over a possible, Alice/Jasper/Edward triangle, and her jealousy over Edward. Very entertaining, as was Emmett's harassment of Edward, What else are brothers for.
I can't wait to see what happens next, so it's on to the next chapter.
Author's Response: haha, thank you! yes...bella's perception of the events prior to revealing they're all family is pretty skewed. also, i love emmett....so.....he's around a lot :)
hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: isle-esme (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 17
well my guess is alice knew all along, sop she is going to help them hide their dirty little secrete;by the wayi love your taste in music <3
Author's Response: haha, i'm not even going to try and hide it--of COURSE alice has known. pshah. she's alice ;) and, thank you! i'm glad you're enjoying my musical endeavors, haha.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
loved it, very entertaining. poor edward.
added this story to my favourits already. but I haven't had the chance to read it yet, but after a chapter like this I am sure it will all be read in one session.
So I am going to cut this review sort and head over to the next chapter, because I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: wow, thank you! i'm so glad you feel that way! keep letting me know what you think!
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 17
sorry for what happened to your car and what got stolen. loved the ending...busted! :)
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 11
aw, cute.. Although jake is an asshat. Even if that is how the relationship has gone in the past, calling bella a whore was a hurtful.
I'm glad they didn't do anything but kiss though....
Great work!
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ew.... I don't like jake being so forward about what he wants.. And I actually don't mind jake most of the time.
This is awkward... And awkward is entertaining!! :D
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 9
they're in love!!!! They're in love!!
The ending was sweet.
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 8
That was a super cute way for them to get to know each other! Love the fact that bella talking in her sleep always comes into play..
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 17
your awesome we have to make that 1000 comment ur awesome wat will alice thing ur a amazing writer
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh man, he invited her over!! Awkward! Still lovin' the inner monologues.
Nice job!
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 17
haha! Busted! I hope their relationship starts to develop a little bit more than just sex in every place possible. =)
Sorry to hear about your car. I keep my Ipod and connector in my car as well. But, I drive a crappy thing, so no one wants to touch it. haha.
Author's Response: i promise it will...i'm just getting as many lemons in as possible though, cause i figure the more i write them, the better they have to get, right?
and no worries, their "outting" will have some fun repercussions.
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 6
fantastic setlist! Love the ones I knew... Going to look up the ones I didn't.
Nice up !
Reviewer: mnabbott (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 17
You are killing me with the non posting. Love the end. hilariously embarrasing.
Author's Response: thank you! and more to come soon, i promise!
Reviewer: jewles622 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 17
Omg hunnie I am addicted ... seriously I just got sooo sad when I realized there wasn't another chapter ... I seriously think I freaked the hubbie out cuz I was I started swearing about having to wait to find out what happens next (see I'm addicted :-D) .... Anyway you are AMAZING .... I started reading this fic last night and stayed up til 2am reading and then seriously took every free minute I had today to keep reading....oh and getting way mad when I actually had to work or the stoplight turned green and I couldn't keep reading...this fic makes me super happy.....so ty ty ty...ooh and I'm so sorry ur car got broken into.... You should totally make a voodoo doll for whoever stole ur stuff muhahaha
Ps: did they not use a condom during their drunken night of fun?? I didn't know if it just went without saying or if it was left out on purpose...
Pss: your lemons totally rock my socks tehehe
Much luv
Author's Response: wow, thank you so much! it's always nice to hear that new people are finding this fic and enjoying it :) apologize to your husband for me for the freakout, and just know that another chapter is on the way!!!
Reviewer: jewles622 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 17
Omg hunnie I am addicted ... seriously I just got sooo sad when I realized there wasn't another chapter ... I seriously think I freaked the hubbie out cuz I was I started swearing about having to wait to find out what happens next (see I'm addicted :-D) .... Anyway you are AMAZING .... I started reading this fic last night and stayed up til 2am reading and then seriously took every free minute I had today to keep reading....oh and getting way mad when I actually had to work or the stoplight turned green and I couldn't keep reading...this fic makes me super happy.....so ty ty ty...ooh and I'm so sorry ur car got broken into.... You should totally make a voodoo doll for whoever stole ur stuff muhahaha
Ps: did they not use a condom during their drunken night of fun?? I didn't know if it just went without saying or if it was left out on purpose...
Pss: your lemons totally rock my socks tehehe
Much luv
Reviewer: kty_xii (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 17
sorry to hear about your ipod. but i want to know what alice does!!! omg so excited for net post!!
Author's Response: thank you! you will be learning super soon, i promise!
Reviewer: a_rainy_day (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 17
That was HOT.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 17
Just found this story and I love it! So cute and funny. And the secks is hott!
Author's Response: :) thank you, thank you!
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