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Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 18
Holy Effin Hell! Well that's a coming out of the closet relationship for the books dude! What a way to tell the band that despite their rule, Bella and Edward have been together and stuff. Wow. I'm really glad I'm not them! Love it Love It! Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Syndie (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 17
here to hoping your deductabe doesnt suck!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 17
hahaha !!
You need to write the next chapter asap !!!
Alice .........damn Pixie !!!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 15
at last !!!
Very well written too, gfotta love the Cullen boys !
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
i can sooo identify with this triangle !
I met my now husband when i was 18 ,my best friend (male) was not so impressed !
Altough my best friend and i never shared a bed ( he batted for the other side ) but my hubby didnt know that ! Ouch !!!
Pooor Bells
Reviewer: Io Vio Amo Tesoro (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 17
HAHAHA
that was so hilarious.
what will Alice do?
you have to write more.
Please???
Reviewer: robpattlover (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 17
WOW!!!Lovedddd the chapter!I think it was my favourite one so far!Finally they have been discovered!!!Can't wait to see what happens!! Great work!Update sooooonnnnnnnnn!x
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 17
i think she has known all along.. it will be interesting to see how she responds to them now. i think she can keep their secret.
i absolutely love this story and cant wait for update.
Soon please
Reviewer: tazzded (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 17
Very nice job! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: evisme217 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 17
Dun Dun Dun!! I did not expect the Rose/Bella kiss. Whew, if I was that type of girl, I would have thought that was hot. Okay it was, it just surprised me.
Nice costumes! I love it! I dressed up as a man with a sword for Halloween last year. Trust me, the sword is EVERYTHING. haha.
I cannot wait to see what Alice has to say about Bella and Edward! Great chapter, as always.
Reviewer: VioletBree (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 17
hellz yeah i love it, lol
hurries plz and thankz lol
Reviewer: RoxyCapri (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 15
you can def do lemons!!!! have no fears :) it was sweet, sexy, loving and refreshing
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: parrannnah (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 17
Afuckingmazing. Seriously. By far one of my favorites ever! Edward's inner monologues make me fall off my chair laughing every time!
Author's Response: wow, thank you so much! i'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: Colena (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 17
I love this first part!!! I hope you're going to put the other soon!
I wonder what alice is gonna say lol
And I'm sorry for your car!! I can't understand the people who did that kind of things, it's awful!
Oh and I really love the relationship between Edward and Bella!!
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you! the other part should be put up by tomorrow :)
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 17
Firstly, sorry my review is so much later than usual....real life combined with Sookie Stackhouse and the MTV Movie awards actually managed to drag me away from my stories for a few days, lol. Anyways, so sorry to hear about you getting vandalized. That totally sucks, but I glad all your reviews were able to make you feel some better. :P
Amazing chapter as always. I was really surprised that Bella and Edward went dressed as Pocahontas and John Smith....or excuse me, Captain John Smith. Captain, hehe.....all I could think of was "Do you got a little Captain in you?" and replying to myself, "No, Bella's got a LOT of Captain in her! Lucky Bitch!" Yeah, I need to stop reviewing at 3 and 4 in the morning, lol.
I was totally cracking up when the all started quoting the lines from their respective movies, especially Em being dressed as Woody and using Buzz's line and Bella's tentative Pocahontas quote said like a question. Also loved that Edward liked getting to have a sword. All I could think of was that cute teenage guy in Never Been Kissed that has the sword and when he and Drew Barrymore are dancing and she's spouting some philosophically deep shit and then asks what he's thinking about and his reply: "My sword". I could totally picture Edward doing that here, but with Bella having a smartass comeback about it.
Now first of all I have to say that I am completely hetero, but it was really fucking hot when Bella and Rose started making out on the dance floor. Poor Edward never stood a chance. Bella should definitely thank Rose, lol.
And Alice caught them! Yay! My first guess was right, I think, lol. Can't wait to see what happens next, and hopefully we should be finding out soon since you've hit over a 1000 reviews, right? Lol. :D
Congrats on getting to that mark though. I know it's got to be a milestone in reviews that any writer can be proud of. Hope your weeks gotten better and thanks for such an amazing, wonderful chapter! :D
Author's Response: haha, no apology necessary -- i know exactly what it's like to get sucked into the world of true blood, so i can't exactly argue with you -- also, yes, the mtv movie awards were hilarious...i'm pretty sure i've watched the clip of kristen dropping her award....i'm going to guess about 15 times, haha. best moment ever?
and, yay, i have hit over 1000 reviews which is damn amazing, so, yes--more to come VERY soon (i just need to finish editing the chapter, and i swear it'll be posted!)...let's just say that more fun is on the way, haha.
thanks, as always, for your review -- my week has been getting better, and hopefully it will continue in that direction when i head home to new york tomorrow (fingers crossed for running into rob?). haha, okay, that's all :)
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 13
oh shit.... Let the games begin!!!
Ooohhhh... The sexual tension onstage with the added bonus of knowing that they can do something about it finally, mixed with the teasing... Oh it's gonna be good.
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 12
I kinda love the idea of their secret relationship.
It's going to make their alone time so much sweeter..
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 17
I am sorry to hear about your car, and what was stolen. But I am glad you have a good friend there for support and to help you drown your sorrows.
I found this story a week or so a go and added it to my favourits, but only had time to sit down and read it today. I just couldn't stop reading it, each chapter was so well written and entertaining. I love they way your versions of the characters interact with each other, the banter and sweet bonding moments between all of them are well done, and touching without going over the top.
I love the image of them as disney couples, and I especially loved the drunken role playing games and piggy back. I would love it if the picture Alice took makes an appearance in the story again. That is if Alice doesn't kill Bella and Edward after this one. I think the irrate glitter covered Pixie might have a thing or to to say about her brother and friend. I can't wait, I am sure it's going to be very entertaining.
But I am sad, now that I am all caught up, I am going to have to wait for the updates like everyone else. So please don't keep us waiting for too long.
Author's Response: thank you so much!!! it's completely awesome that you reviewed every chapter -- you have no idea how much it means to me that you took the time to let me know you enjoyed it :)
as a response to this review: yes, that picture will definitely be making an appearance again ;) and...bella and edward shouldn't be THAT afraid of alice...but, definitely a little bit, haha.
and no worries, i'm usually pretty fast with the updates, so hopefully you won't have to wait too long for the next installment!
and, seriously, thanks again for reviewing!!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 16
Shower and Car sex, very hot, I loved it. I also loved Edwards continuing internal debat and conversations, especially trying to convince himself not to wake Bella up.
I loved the banter between Edward and Bella, and the sneaky little things they do while trying to be together, but at the same time keep their relationship secret from everyone else. I am sure it will continue to make for very entertaining reading, at least for as long as Edward can stop him self from screaming from roof tops.
I can't wait to see what happens next, so I am going to jump right into the last remaining chapter, and hope that it has the party in it. Because it's the last one, and I really want the visual of Jasper, Edward and Emmett as disney characters. Although I can't see Emmett in tights.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 15
So happy for Bella and Edward, glad they finally got some alone time, and that they both seemed to enjoy it so much. Very sweet that Edward reached out for her in his sleep. I think I like sweet Edward just as much as I like bad ass and jealous Edward.
I really want to punch Jacob again, but I am glad that Emmett has asked Bella to go to Chicago with them. I can't wait to see what Esme and Carisle think of Bella, and Edwards imporved attitude towards women and life in general. I also really loved Emmtt brotherly bonding with Bella.
I can't wait to see what happens next, so I am just going to jump right into the next chapter.
Reviewer: daydreamer22688 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 17
Awesome!! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 14
oh song flirting again, so hot. I can't wait to see what happens whe they finally make it home, I am sure it's gonna be sexy as all get out. So after my shortest review ever, I am jumping straight into the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 13
oh and the sexual tension keeps on smoldering away. I can't wait to see how the 80's themed night frustrates our favourit couple. I am sure it will be just as lusty and well written as this chapter, and I can't wait to find out, so it's on to the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
and so the secret relationship starts, with some smokin hot adult shower fun. I can't wait to see what the two of them get upto next.
As always Edwards internal debate and thoughts are amusing and entertaining. But is it now a three way debate between Edward's angle, devil and his penis, because that would make for some great reading.
I can't wait to see what happens next, so I am off to the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 11
once again I loved the update, very well written, and more angsty and dramatic than the previous chapters, But I think it was needed so that Edward and Bella can move on from the comfort zone they had found themselves in. I can't wait to see where they go from here.
I really want to knee jacob in his pride and joy, but at leaset him being and ass wipe got Bella back in Edwards arms.
So once again it's onto the next chapter.
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