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Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 18
That was fun! I like how you strung out the whole "unveiling" of the relationship. And you still managed to throw in a dose of heavy reality and wrap it all back up into the story by the end! Nice!
And I LOVE it when your Edward talks to his dick. It's my favorite!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 18
well how will they react...only time will tell
have a great weekend and update soon
Reviewer: serena_heart_moon_4ever (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 18
Love it, continue plz! Also you made the right decision not to make Bella pregnant cuz it's so not the time. Anyway, love the story! It's ah-mazing!
Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 18
Oh honey been there done there done that... have 3 kids. Just once I wanted to TRY to get pregnant!!! All 3 turned ouut ot be damn good swimmers... go figure!
Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 18
UH OH.. what is she going to tell them.. i cant wait
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 18
love this! especially the strong, confident girlfriends who stick together!
Reviewer: OperationSeth (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 18
Oh come on! You replace a cliffy with another!? Urg!!!!
Lol, *sigh* I'll be waiting...
Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 18
Please up date soon!!!
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 18
OK...that was hysterical the way that Bella and Edward found out that Rose and Alice had a bet going on their sex life! Congrats Alice! And, yeah, I agree with Edward (and Kaystu) that a baby right now just isn't a good timing. They have a couple of years ahead of them before they should worry about a family. Now I'm really looking forward to the fireworks that I'm suspecting will be coming in the next chapter! I think it's going to be great that Emmett and Jasper found out in this way and when they find out that their girls knew and didn't tell them...oh, boy! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!
Kathy M.
Reviewer: a_rainy_day (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 17
I just want to let you know I read this chapter again. And when the whole story's done... I'll probably read it all over again from start to finish (if not sooner).
xx
Reviewer: hpandtwilight (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 18
ahhhh
Kate Voegele<333
she's awesome :))
love this story!
update soon please!! :)
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 18
Great chapter!! I was seriously sweating bullets.....
Anxious to see how the guys react. Was there a bet on their end too?
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 18
THANK FUCKING GAWD!!! Now... back to Bella/Edward good times. hee hee
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 18
Shit!
Big Big Big blow up from Jasper and Emmett coming I can see it.
Also, there is such a thing as a false negative and some women have been know to have a very "light" period during their first trimester.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 18
dun dun!! Em and Jazz are suprised for sure!
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 18
Holy hell I was flipping out thinking she might be preggo. Not a good thing for either of them.
I laughed so hard at Rosalie and Alice with the bet...going through trash cans for condoms-ew!
Soooo good, now the cat is out of the bag and I can't wait to see how the boys react!
Reviewer: jessnab (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 18
You were getting an ass beating if she was preggers ! Long chapter , nice and a good clifey
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 18
LOVED IT AND THAT OMJ I LOVE THIS STORY THANK GOD SHES NOT ....AND ALSO I HOPE THEY DONT BE THAT UPSET
Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 18
Count me as another who is SO GLAD Bella is not pregnant. I'm curious about what Bella is going to Jasper and Emmett about her "mystery lover" so hope you update soon ;) Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 18
ahhhhhhhhhhh.
item one. thank you for averting accidental pregnancy disaster. that shit has no place in this awesome awesome story.
item two. I love that this is how bella chooses to out her and Edward.
item three. great chapter!!!! :) thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 18
I have been waiting on this chapter! I knew that Alice and Rose knew! Ha ha. Can't wait for the reaction from Emmett and Jasper about Bella's pg test.
Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 18
Holy Effin Hell! Well that's a coming out of the closet relationship for the books dude! What a way to tell the band that despite their rule, Bella and Edward have been together and stuff. Wow. I'm really glad I'm not them! Love it Love It! Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Syndie (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 17
here to hoping your deductabe doesnt suck!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 17
hahaha !!
You need to write the next chapter asap !!!
Alice .........damn Pixie !!!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 15
at last !!!
Very well written too, gfotta love the Cullen boys !
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