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Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 18
excellent chapter
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 18
whew!!!!! I was gonna tell them to get the morning after pill!!! Ok now moving on to more sex!!!
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 18
I WAS GOING TO QUIT READING IF YOU DIDN'T SAY + or - so thankyou cute chapter !!!!!! what ass will think it Jakes Em or Jazz ? hmmmmm!
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 18
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! OMG! Are they coming clean about their relationship? Upadate SOON!
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 18
Somehow I knew Alice would be cool with the idea of B and E together. You left us with a mighty big cliffy there. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: teamwedard4eva (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 18
ahhhh omg!!!
why did you leave it there!!!!
update!!! this is such a fantastic story!!
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 18
oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!! i absolutley cannot WAIT for the next chapter!!! this one was soooo unbelievably amazing!!!! plz update soon!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 18
xD!
ahhahahha this chapter whoa...was amazinggg!
loved it
cannot wait to see what happens next! :))
Reviewer: Skaistar (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 18
First, thank GOD she's not pregnant. Also...this is like ten levels of irresponsibility. What about Plan B? Oh, Bella, BAD decision.
Still thoroughly enjoying the story- one of my favorites- but ugh, I had a hard time with Bella in this chapter. Love Rosalie and Alice's support of her, though.
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 18
Talk about a roller coaster...that was some ride you took us on this chapter! Funniest parts of the chapter was Alice's line "I had to endure HOURS of Bella screaming out profanities about your—“ and Edward having an internal battle with an angel on one shoulder and his penis on the other...rofl.
One thing I don't get is why, oh WHY did they have to stop having sex because she MIGHT be pregnant?! If she was, she was and wasn't going to get any MORE pregnant by having more sex, and if she wasn't...well she most likely wouldn't get pregnant unless they stupidly forgot protection again. It was almost like Edward was distancing himself from her, or protesting the fact that she might be pregnant...or maybe the fact that she wasn't panicking at the idea like he was. It actually felt like a punishment to me.
The ending was great...a true grand finale, having Emmett and Jasper momentarily get a taste of Edward's scare...lol. And way to let the cat out of the bag, Bella...I luved it. Thanks for the fun ride and an enjoyable read. :)
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 18
I love you. SO much. Seriously. This story is HUGELY wonderful.
I have one constuctive criticism... You tend to overuse the word slightly. Here's the paragraph that bugged me:
"I pushed Edward’s arm lightly, and he made an unhappy noise and moved slightly. I rolled my eyes slightly, knowing that he would need more than a small nudge to wake up and pushed his shoulder, shaking him slightly. "
But I still love you! Don't hate me!
Best line this chapter:
" I was having an internal battle with an angel on one shoulder and my penis on the other."
Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 18
That was scary! I cant wait to find out what Bella is gonna tell Jasper and Emmett about the pregnancy test. I love this story and I cant wait until the next update!
Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 18
LOVED IT!!! Loved that Edward didn't freak out and was gonna man up!!! He rox.....you rock!!!! Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 18
Hmm only "accidental pregnancy" you say? :P Awh, yay Bella for taking one for the team... even though she was a putz and FORGOT TO GET RID OF THE SHIT XDDD
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 18
great chapter again!!! rosalie is so nice for wanting to cover for bella!! update soon please!
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 18
Wow, that chapter was full of everything! I loved it. So glad Bella wasn't pregnant. Some stories I do, but it just didn't fit with this one, so I'm glad. I love Edward, he's so sweet to Bella.
Reviewer: Miss Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 18
loved it, as usual!
keep up the greatness, please. i love off limits.
Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 18
ha-ha I love the Papa don’t Preach reference. Which leads me to a story that I’m going to give you as a review!lol SO my family went to a Halloween party one year at my dad’s friend’s house. They happened to have karaoke there (which is always dangerous). I only did one song and it was Frank Sinatra’s Domani. My sister however (who is not the brightest crayon in the crayon box and who was like 13 at the time) decided to sing Papa Don’t Preach because she’s obsessed with Madonna. It wouldn’t have been so bad if she hadn’t dedicated it to my dad right before she started singing. UGH it was embarrassing. My parents had to have a long conversation with her asking if she was pregnant. I felt so bad for her, but it was HILARIOUS!! There ya go!
PLUS your story absolutely rocks my socks!lol (haven’t used that one in a long time) :D
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 18
OH DAMN IT MAN i like this chap i love rose in this one and way to leave a cliff... hope you update soon.
Reviewer: SDDoo (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 18
Awesome! I was so glad to see that author's note at the end!! I was afraid you were gonna pull the Bella-didn't-actually-wait-to-see-the-test-results-and-it-was-only-spoting-not-her-actual-period. I cannot tell you how glad I am you didn't go that route. By the way, totally digging the story!!
Reviewer: skr0075 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 18
Yay! Loved it! No babies, but a fabulously dramatic way to bring the relationship out in the open.
Thank you for not making Edward unrealistically excited about having a baby at present time. He may be crazy in love, but you kept in realistic and I appreciate that.
Reviewer: nicarter (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 18
ahhhhh...damn clifhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But still loved the chapter..i was secrectly wanting some baby action!!!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 18
Oh wow! That is one way to come out. LOL Can't wait to read the next conversation that will come out of that one. ;)
Reviewer: SoImpossible (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 18
I was like.. what are you doing? But I'm glad that Bella figured out that she wasn't ready to be a Mom. I totally get that this was a plot device for a dramatic outing of their relationship but I hope kids know about Plan B. Its a heavy dose of BC that you can take up to 72 hours after unprotected sex to reduce your chances of pregnancy. End PSA.
I'm glad that Edward wants his family to know. I'm really looking forward to the Thanksgiving thing. I feel like it will be very special for Bella to meet Edwards family as his official girlfriend. Hope that Emmett and Jasper don't give him too hard a time about Bella.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 18
I was on pins and needles!!!
Not that those two crazy kids wouldn't be great parents, but geez, they need to be together for a while first.
Absolutely gripping chapter...kind of a cliff-hanger at the end though.
Update soon please!!!
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