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Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 18
Awww, that was so mean. Boo to the cliffie. Great chapter though.
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 18
Well, crap. Nice knowin' ya, Edward. Cause Em and Jazz are gonna beat ya to a pulp. Not only have you broken the Rule, you hid the fact and nearly got her pregnant as well.
And Bella, what the hell!?? Ya couldn't just let Rose cover for ya???
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 18
thank goodness she isn't pregnant. phew. great chapter!
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 17
captain? you killed me. lol. finally someone finds out!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 18
OMG!! THANKS GOODNESSSHE IS NOT PREGGERS!! GLAD THAT SHE FESSED UP TO THE TEST BEING HERS! CANNOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 16
sexy!
Reviewer: lost my mind forever (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 18
Wow! First, I am so glad they are not pregnant. Second, Alice and Rose had the bet going for a month? Really? Thirs, What a way to find out for Jazz and Em!
Reviewer: arabelladarkin (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 18
Eeps! So I guess it's all going to come out in the next chapter? I love that Alice and Rosalie had a bet going - I really love those two. Looking forward to reaction from Emmet and Jasper. Great chapter as usual!
Reviewer: laura18 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 18
Okay so this story is awesome!!! I started reading it yesterday and i'm already through... keep up he good writing!
Reviewer: parrannnah (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 18
Seriously I think I almost died waiting. It was a beautiful chapter, stressful in all the right places : ) I would lovie it if Alice somehow did find out about them in her car. I would love that reaction! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: jewles622 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 18
Awww again I freaked my husband out with the screaming!!!! Seriously you are amazing!!!! You rock my socks lovey!!!!! More pretty pretty please.....with naked Edward on top
Reviewer: evisme217 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 18
Woooo! Holy guacamole with lime juice! Bella possibly being pregnant is SCARY! Good chapter though. I knew Alice knew! Of course, it wouldn't be Alice if she didn't know.
My favorite part of the chapter: "I heard a strangled cry from the bathroom, and Jasper came walking into the kitchen with…OH MY FUCKING GOD."
Damn priceless, Bella, really.
Reviewer: kaystu (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 18
i was going to text yell at you for this possible crisis but then i read ur AN at the bottom and smiled :) i kept reading and yelling "morning after pill u twatheads!!!" then i was either going to call you and yell or write it all out here.....but i'm content now so continue, all is well, hahaha
Reviewer: Acinom (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 18
OMG...I was freaking out over the pregnancy test! I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter!! Hopefully they're ready to go public! Lol!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 18
hahaha, pregnant Bella? i agree, so young and so many issues to deal with. They barely started their relationship. Anybody opposed to plan B?
Anyway, ohh, what's Bella's plan?
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 18
And I thought it couldn't get any better than the way Alice finaly got proof of their relationship, especially once you add in the bet with Rosalie. But no, you just had to go and through in a pregnancy scare, and have one of the guys find it. Very entertaining I just loved it.
But, I can't wait to see what Jasper and Emmetts reactions will be like, I get the feeling that they won't be any where near as calm and reational as Alice and Rosalie. I am sure it will be very amusing reading.
Your more than welcome to the reviews, it's a pleasure writting them for asomeone who appreciates them as much as you do, I hope they continue to brighten your day.
Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update, it brings us one step closer to Thanksgiving and Esme and Carisle.
Reviewer: Squisht (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 15
Love the ringtone for Alice :)
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 18
This is freaking hilarious. Glad Bel's not pregnant. I love Rosalie's line- 1st of all, that's negative, so wipe that look off your face. Then Shocked anyone- Bella announces it's hers. Okay so I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Looovvvved this one!
Reviewer: TWILIGHTRULESZ (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 18
i am speechless... that was the coolest thing ever!
you are a fantastic author and this is my favourite story!
can't wait for the next chapter! =]
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 18
Here's some love:
Awesome chappie! Nice little cliffie at the end, as well. Totally necessary, though. I loved that Rosalie was going to cover for her, that's awesome.
I definitely enjoyed Alice and Rosalie finding out as well, that's awesome. Well done!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 18
loved it. can't wait for more
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 18
WOW!!!Way to let the cat out of the bag..Please update again soon, I can't wait for Emmet and Jaspers reaction. ;D
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 18
What's even better than Kris dropping her award was Rob's reaction haha. Those two. Oohh those two. I loved all the glances and constant touching. Honestly. I thought I was looking too much into it. But someone said: If you think I'm looking too much into it, how would you feel if your significant other was looking at someone else like that or was constantly acting that way around (the regular) someone else? And I finally understood that I really wasn't crazy. She put my fears to rest, because I was like, 'fuck yeah! That's so true!' Isn't it though? And it totally makes sense. Think about it.... that's why I've always thought that they got shit going on between them. Especially now! This is totally off-topic, I realize LOL = ]
That said, I wouldn't be very happy with you hookin' up with Rob because that would mean that you're messin' with Rob and Kris... Wow, that sounded totally freakish, but... *laughs nervously* Did I mention that I totally love you and your story? ; ] That was all a joke. I'd totally jump you if you and Rob hooked up because well, yeah you'd be messing with Rob and Kris, but most importantly... DAMMIT! I want me some of Rob first! lol I'd be totally envious. But maybe you really will! Though I don't really keep up with their whereabouts and have no effing clue where he's at these days. But you just might = ] lol
But in all seriousness, happy engagement to your sister and hope you had a safe flight out if you haven't already gone out there. And I really do love your story.
And LMFAO @ the end! I LOVE how the tests totally went around the room. Fucking hilarious. I didn't see Bella's reaction coming. I'm surprised, but I liked their different responses. Can you just imagine Edward calling Bella "Preggo"? haha It sounds like a pasta. Italian. Just like 'Bella!' ......... hmm.
But really. This was a sweet ass chapter. Just enough drama, just enough comedy, and just enough love and friendship - now I sound like a weed-smoking flower-child. I apologize. LOL
Please update soon. Sorry I just went crazy with this review. But when it comes to these two, that's usually what happens to me.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 18
I REALLY LIKE THIS CHAPTER...AND THANKS FOR NOT DOING THE PREGNANCY THING..........
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 18
lol, I wasn't worried :) Great chapter!
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