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Reviewer: zoe harris (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 19
I loved it! Emmett said exactly what I was thinking: "It's called the morning after pill for a reason!"
I love how shocked Edward's parents are about a girlfriend.
Ahh... Loveward :)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 19
Loved it!!!! I think my favorite parts was probably Carlisle's response. Can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 19
Seriosuly loved this chapter! I am so happy everyone is in a good place, can we please have more happiness to come? At least for a few chapters lol. You are doing a great job!
Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 19
I'm mad at Emmett he went a little overboard with the punching. I would have at least heard an exsplaination. Then he talked bad to Bella. I'm glad that Edward stood up for her. I'm glad that things worked out. I feel so relieved that everyone knows. Great chapter!
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 19
First of all, I liked your little Plan B shout out.
Second
"You are JUST out of college. You’re in a band, for Christ’s sake. How would you be able to support a child? Your boyfriend is EDWARD. Does he look like he’s ready to be a father?”"
was just laugh out loud funny. Especially the part about her boyfriend being Edward.
Reviewer: polkadotgrl (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 19
OH my GOSH! This was SUCH an amazing chapter! (sorry for all the caps but it totally deserves it!) You Are Amazing!!!
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 19
oh so very cute.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 19
First, I love your story. It's great. And yes, E&B should have been more careful. But Emmett giving a sex lecture? That's the pot calling the kettle black. I felt bad for E&B, especially Edward. Emmett was beating up his own brother. Bella should have kicked the crap out of Emmett instead of groveling at his feet. Glad to see its all out in the open though.
Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 19
My cheeks hurt from smiling so hard while I was reading. Gah, I can't make this dopey smile go away!
I'm glad they are not pregnant, but sad Bunny got his face all banged up. Although Edward probaley looks pretty hot with a busted lip and a black eye :)
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 19
So funny that Carlisle has a filthy mouth too! Absolutely hilarious!!
Really great that Edward and Bella are out in the open. Wonder what sort of hilarity will ensue when they visiting Carlisle and Esme.
This story is interesting and highly entertaining. Eager for more 'cause I'm a greedy little reader!
Reviewer: skr0075 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 19
That phone call was ridiculous, but very funny! I liked it, great chapter as always!
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 19
Yay! No crisis! They are so cute together!
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 19
woo! things got a little heavy there for a bit. glad things blew over (mostly). carlisle and esme on the phone was priceless, poor edward. even his mom knows he's a slut... great update :) you always make me laugh!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 19
hah carlisle swears lol!
Reviewer: envy (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 18
I totally wanted her pregnant... I was hoping she was as she was praying for it to be negative, i was chanting "please be positive" lol
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 18
I LOVE YOUR WRITING AND CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE. GREAT STORY!! THANKS!
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 18
Wha!!!??? I mean, I'm sure they're going to be fine with it, but seriously, what a way to tell them. And I'm also glad she's not preggers.
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 18
Well, this chapter was definitely action-packed, lol. Loved that Alice and Rosalie were betting (and so complexly betting at that) on Edward and Bella's relationship and Rose's reaction to them being in love ("I thought you were just fucking") was priceless!
I was quite happy to hear Edward talking to his dick again. They have terrific conversations. ;D It was also sweet how romantic Edward was being in front of Rose and Alice and how he wants to tell everyone that he loves Bella. I was amazed a bit though that I never heard Alice or Rose comment on the "Bunny" nickname.
And I was soo soo happy that Bella wasn't pregnant. I would have kept reading regardless because I love this story but I really, really, really didn't want her to be pregnant.
It was super sweet that Rose was going to cover for Bella about the pregnancy test thing. Now, that's definitely a true friend, lol. You're getting horrible at these little WTF type cliffies though, lol. As always, loved it and can't wait for more!
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 18
haha! I'm really glad that she's not accidently pregnant. But, imagine the musical talent their kid would have...ahh
Reviewer: Jordanthegirl (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 18
also , i want to see emmett freak the fuck out =D
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 18
HALLELUJA! BELLA IS NOT PREGGERS!! COULD YOU IMAGINE THE SHIT THEY WOULD HAVE TO GO THROUGH!! EMMETT AND JASPER WOULD HAVE SERIOUSLY KILLED HIM!!!! CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE
Reviewer: GeneralGem (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 18
oh wow, stressful indeed, i must say it is a good thing she ain't pregnant. whoo, ah well can't wait for the next installment, its such a good story!!!
Fab writing. Gemma
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 18
Oh, I would have totally crapped my pants if Bella had been pregnant. Huge sigh of relief! Can't wait for the update (wink, wink, nudge, nudge).
Reviewer: screamingninja (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 17
LOL. Poor Edward, he was just found naked with Bella by his baby sister. I would have screamed. :D
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 15
I think she kinda overreacted to the voicemail message. I mean, it seemed like Jake was trying to apologize in his own fucked-up way... And I didn't think he really disinvited her from Thanksgiving. Oh well... T-giving with the Cullens will be so much more awesome!!
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