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Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 22
Communication people! Such a wasted day, think of all the secret lovin' that wasn't due to lack of communication;o)
Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 22
I really liked it! I liked Charlotte, too. Nice personality build-up for Edward! Write quick!
Author's Response: haha, thank you! i have a serious addiction to men with children...i think it's the sweetest thing ever. glad you enjoyed it, too :)
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 22
*delurking momentarily* OK, great chapter. This was one of the better EPOV's so far. I seriously love Carlisle being all flirty and Esme being all fun and them just being awesome. LOL. Thank you for updating.
Author's Response: thanks for delurking :) it makes me happy! and i'm really gla you'e been enjoying everything! ...it's definitely a boost of confidence knowing that you're still out there reading!
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 22
Aww! So cute. I loved the extended Cullen family.
Author's Response: aw, thanks :) me too! and thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 22
Okay I don't know if I told you yet, but I love your Carlisle. A lot. Ugh, and the Jake drama makes me grumpy. Stupid dog, get out of the story! Hehe, nicely done, the making up was PERFECT :)
Author's Response: you didn't, but thank you! i love carlisle, too. sorry about the jake drama, but...he needs a verbal beatdown, and...i am predicting that it's coming soon, haha (well, not so much as predicting, cause i wrote it, so i just know). but i have a distinct feeling that after the beatdown he'll be running away with his tail between his legs...damn dog.
thanks for reviewing, as always!
Reviewer: Oliviamk1218 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
XXOOO :-)
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 21
Favorite quote this chapter:
"Yeah. What now, Dad? Mine."
Excellet chapter!
Reviewer: lucyrose (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 21
Amazing! please write more
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 21
OMFG! LOVED IT! TOTALLY LAUGHING MY ASS OFF AT HOW BELLA WAS CHECKING OUT CARLISLE AND HOW EDWARD WAS ALL JEALOUS! HE FREAKING MARKED HER WITH A HICKEY!! LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 21
Edward and Alice's non-verbal abilities are impressive. How they got to trick Bella was amazing, and the result was really good too.
It will be a great holiday, not only for the Cullens having Bella there, but for Bella to discover something her life has been missing for a long time.
Oh! and bringing the musical for the family to watch? priceless!!!!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 21
Wow, I just read this story in it's entirety so far and I love it! I have a thing for Edward as a rockstar and this is my second story I'm reading and I love them both! Great job and I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 16
AWWWWWW! love this story. maybe Beauty(Belle) and the Beast would be a good fit.
Reviewer: lattegirl (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 21
damn laundry room sex has never been steamier.
love the ending with their musical... and emmet's apology... so adorable
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 21
awesome.....the dryer.......um
update soon
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 21
Ohmygosh, you and your friend sound just like me and my friends, lol. It is pretty horrible when you think of talking dirty and flashback to a scene with Edward from FF, lol. Thanks for sharing that story with us!
I think your version of Carlisle may just be my favorite version of him ever! Emmettx20 indeed! Him and Em running to meet each other in slow motion and then him checking Bella out and flirting with...lol. And poor Bunny getting all jealous of his dear old Dad was priceless. :D
It really made me feel better about my Edward and Jasper fantasies from last chapter when Bella started having some ideas of her own about Edward and Carlisle, lol. I love pervs, really I do; they make me feel much more normal.
Esme was also super cool here and Edward better get Alice a crown for being the best sister ever. I mean seriously, she helped him get washing machine sex! I loved Bella's comment on how only they would have their most romantic moment in that situation.
And I have to admit that I was thinking that DVD was going to be something totally different than what it was, with Bella keeping it as a surprise and Edward being all excited about her bringing it to a family holiday and her dismay about watching it with a HUGE screen and surround sound....well, I guess you can probably imagine what type of DVD I thought it was, lol. Hey, I already admitted to being a perv. :D
Loved that Em and Eddie finally reconciled completely and that Em was able to see how much Edward loves Bella. That big teddy bear! *sighs happily*
With this bunch, I can't wait to see what happens at Thanksgiving dinner! :D Amazing chapter as always!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 20
I just knew the evolution of the set list would be very interesting and that prediction has definitely proven to be true. It's changed quite a bit since that earlier chapter, lol.
I think my favorite change would have to be the Kelly Clarkson song just because it shows how much Edward is "owned" as Emmett said. And who doesn't love owning Edward? :D I also really liked the song by The Doors and Bella singing it to Edward and Jasper, not just because jealous Edward is always cute, but because I'm such a perv that I love the thought of being between Edward and Jasper and being loved twice. ;p
The backstage sex was hot even if it was quick. I'm kinda glad that it didn't happen before they were outed because I just knew somebody would walk in on that shit and of course Jasper did, but thankfully it was before it progressed too far, lol.
And I'm so glad that big brother is back! Things just don't seem right if Em isn't happy and teasing "bunny". Wonderful chapter as always!
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 21
Oh, how will Jasper get back at Bella for pulling that DVD?!?! So devious of Bella to pull that on him.
Sorry, no Thanksgiving traditions to offer.
Hot Daddy Carlisle?!? Ah, yes, he is Edward's father after all.
Author's Response: all i'm saying is that it will be sweet, sweet revenge (evil laugh), hahah. thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 21
LMAOWTF @ your AN. Funny shit!
LOL @: Carlisle and Bella eye licking each other; Bella's pervy-panty-checking-Edward (OMG, hilarious comment from Bella); whiny Edward.
OMG. I thought that the DVD was their sex tape! ... Was that this story? Or... Hmm...
Awww *SIGH* at the whole damn entire thing. I want to be a Bella falling asleep in her Edward's arms too. *SIGH* This world is so unfair. Rub it in, why don't you.
Author's Response: haha, if it makes you feel better...i'm not living that life either (oh how i wish i was, sigh). and...no, no sex tape in this story, but...that might be a delightful idea (evil laugh), haha. i'm so glad you're enjoying it -- thanks for reviewing!!!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 21
I read this chapter last night, but I can't remember weather or not I left a review, and it's such a great chapter that it deserves one, and I wanted to make sure you got it.
I just loved Bella's reaction to Carlisle, and Edward's resulting jealousy and possesive thoughts regarding Bella, especially when he told Carlisle that he had something that belonged to him, and then pulled Bella away from his Dad. The hickey, and marking of Bella was very hot, but also highly amusing.
I also loved Alice and Edward working together to get Edward laid in the laundry, very hot, I have a really urgent need for a boyfriend and a load of washing.
As always, I loved the banter between the Cullen family and friends, I can't wait to see what they get up too during the rest of the vacation, and how they harass Jasper about his performance on the DVD.
I can't wait to see what happens next, please don't keep us waiting to long for the next update.
Author's Response: you didn't! -- so, thanks for coming back and reviewing :) you're totally awesome about that. i'm glad you enjoyed the chapter--i'm pretty sure i'll never do a load of laundry the same way again, sigh. anyway, the next update should be coming soon...sooo....keep your eyes peeled! and thanks for reviewing, as always!
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 21
washing machine sex?! amazing.
Author's Response: hahah, thanks.
Reviewer: BellaChick (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 21
on thanksgiving day my family and i don't eat ANYTHING all day but we watch the food network while we're cooking and hanging out to get ourselves super excited for the dinner
aslo we eat a fried turkey instead of baking it in the oven, the skin gets all crispy and just the perfect amount of juiciness while keeping all of the turkey juices inside it's fucking fabulous
Author's Response: ooo--i really like the idea of watching the food network while cooking...that sounds delightful :) i mean, i watch the food network enough on a daily basis, but...whatever, haha. thanks for sharing your thanksgiving traditions with me!
Reviewer: Autumn Dawn (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 21
I love Guys and Dolls! It's one of my favorite musicals!
Author's Response: me too! i was actually sarah in it my senior year of high school...and it just kind of stuck :)
Reviewer: Marn (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 21
That was good stuff lol I love that it was the musical tape.
Author's Response: :) i held onto that musical for 20 chapters...it was like torture not bringing it up sooner, but...there were obviously other things that needed to be addressed, hahah. thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: skyblue5580 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 21
Great chapter. Funny as heck and hot laundry sex rocks!
Author's Response: thank you! yeah...laundry will never be done the same way again, sigh. haha.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 21
this was a really funny chapter! carlisle is hilarious! update soon!
Author's Response: thank you! i love carlisle, but...my edward is so ooc i was thinking of who his parents would be...and a raunchy carlisle seemed like just the thing, haha. thanks for reviewing!
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