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Reviewer: kaystu (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 22

i started crying reading ur an, i love you. so much.



Author's Response:

love you more.

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 22

Now why the hell can't I have Thanksgivings like that? Lol. :D My holidays are soo boring compared to that, but I do think I'll have to force my family to take up that little traditional game, except ours would probably be much more boring and everyone would know who the JASPER paper would belong to. ;D Seriously though, loved the idea of the game and the answers they all provided, especially the Porsche revelation.

I think I understand Bella's angriness about the phone incident, but honestly the only things about it that could have made me real upset with Edward would have been him not identifying himself as Bella's boyfriend and cussing Jake out and not putting the phone on hold and asking if she wanted to talk to Jake before handing her the phone like that. But after first waking up and it being early in the morning, those actions are totally understandable. I've had a hard time even finding my phone in the mornings before when it would wake me up.

But I think I get that Bella wasn't just upset with Edward, but even more so with Jake and with herself most of all. Edward just got to bear the brunt of it, poor pansy. And I'm sure he could have spared himself some of his misery if he would have just apologized right off the bat. Listen to Carlilse, he's married, he knows the deal. Whatever it is, you are wrong because you are the man and you should apologize. You can always find out what you did later. :D

I thought it was really hilarious that Edward cooks instead of playing football and that Bella enthusiastically ran out to play football. I love those role reversal moments, not the least because I would totally also be outside and nowhere NEAR the kitchen myself.

I loved Charlotte and Edward's relationship with her. Too cute! It also kinda reminds me of my life. I have an 8 year old sister and we really look alike and often I get mistaken as being her mother, even when I was younger that would happen too. I was totally understanding Edward on this too though because as much as I love my sister and love spending time with her, just the thought of having a kid of my own FREAKS me out horribly! And the saddest part of that statement is that I'm 24, lol. ;D

Bella's prettier than Gabriella AND Sharpay....wow. Quite a compliment from an 8 year old, lol. :D

I continue to love Carlisle. There's just something about him being a dirty old man that really just....makes me like him more!

I loved when Esme laughed at Edward because of him and Bella fighting and I definitely heard the word that wasn't said when she told him they'd get to have their first make-up. (SEX) And it was some damn good make-up sex too! :D

AWESOME< AMAZING< WONDERFUL< Chapter! Thanks so much for the shoutout, being appreciated is always fun! Plus we pervs have to stick together! ;p

Best wishes for your best friend Kayla on landing the Leah role! Or I should probably say, break a leg, Kayla! Isn't that the right sentiment? :D It would be awesome if she gets cast and then I can watch Eclipse and say "Look, see that girl playing Leah, I know her."....."Well, okay I don't really know her but I know her best friend."....."Well, okay I don't really know her best friend either, but her best friend writes really really really really terrific fan fiction and I wished that actress luck through a review."  .......Mmmmm, maybe I might be better off just shutting up. Or maybe I should just go to bed now, lol. ;D Yeah, I'm pervy and stupid!      Can't wait for more Off Limits! :D



Author's Response:

hahah.  thank you for your amazing review, as always, my dear.  you continue to have such amazing insight into my chapters that i sometimes wonder if you aren't reading my mind, haha.  so, a million times thank you!

also, kayla wanted me to tell you thank you from her, haha.  she read your review and subsequently called me talking about how awesome you are, so...i thought i should pass that on to my fav reader (oops, did i just admit that outloud?). 

haha, me shutting up now, too.  new update coming soon :)

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 22

wow !, that was hot !!!

Reviewer: XmissXStaceyX (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 22

i like that he calls her Bel and not Bells, its different ya know? keep it coming it just seems to get better and better.



Author's Response:

thank you!  yeah, bells reminds me of jake always, but i'm a nickname person, so...bel it was :)  i'm glady you're enjoying it!  and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 22

i loved this chapter! the game was unbelievably hilarious!!! i think my favorite part was the whole porshe! and charlotte is so cute! :)



Author's Response:

thank you!  i know, i have a really great urge to play that game with my family and friends this year :)  and, yeah, i know i'm cute....oh, wait--the charlotte in the chapter? not me?  hahahah.  juuuust kidding.

thanks for reviewing, as always!

Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 22

Well the reason i didnt reveiw last chapter was because i didnt really like it.
I didnt like your carlisle. I just dont. Ive read a lot of au-human stories and everyone's kept carlisle right. I just dont think he should be a loud cursing guy. I just cant see it. It ruins him for me.
I also didnt reveiw because i hate saying bad things to the authors whos stories i really like. Because i figure they might just not want to write if people dont like it. I didnt think very highly of the last chapter as a whole. I had nothing really nice to say..so i ididnt.

This chapter thought, I liked a lot!

 



Author's Response:

sorry you didn't enjoy carlisle :(  -- but, i guess that's the danger of writing an OOC story, not everyone will be pleased.  oh well--i'm glad you enjoyed this one!  thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Jalice (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 22

I think the story is great and I love Carlisle.  Not sure why your read count is down...



Author's Response:

thank you! ...i'm not sure either, but hopefully people will come back soon, haha.  thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: princessamy1 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 22

I love this story and I love your writing!!! Please do not think of stopping till the end!!! This is the Edward I would most like to be with. Great job!!



Author's Response:

haha, i had no intention of stopping -- i promise!  and...what do you know?  this is the edward i would most like to be with, too ;)  thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: mnabbott (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 22

Ok, so earlier today I lost my wallet at a location unknown, and honestly seeing that this was updated completely turned my day around.

 

Even though it's almost tomorrow.



Author's Response:

omg, that happened to me last week.  i was so pissed off.  from the course of me getting out of my car to making it through target to the check out line, my wallet had disappeared.  i even watched the security tapes and they couldn't tell where it went because of "blind spots" -- tell me, what is the point of cameras if there are blind spots???  sad times.  so, i totally understand.

i'm glad that the chapter made your day better....your review made mine better :)  so, thanks!

Reviewer: SALTIRE884 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 22

Great, sweet chapter.  I love these two, always smile when I get the update in my mail box.

 

 



Author's Response:

thank you!  your review made me smile, too :)

Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 22

That was good, but I'm not down with the whole mad-for-no-(discernable)-reason thing. That shit will destroy relationships! The make-up sex was rockin, though...



Author's Response:

haha, sorry.  yeah, bella was acting like a crazy bitch, but...in all fairness it's only her second thanksgiving without her father, and then she was accidentally forced to talk to the one person that she had absolutely no desire to talk to.  unfortunately, she killed the messenger.  i think she made it up to him pretty well, though, right?

thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 22

i always review i suck at them but i try  i almost  left you a review before i read JUST TO THANKS FOR UP DATE I ALWAYS LOOK EVERYDAY I LOVE your writing your very good    this story YOURS of  is sweet ..... hot....... funny....... sad .........hot..........endearing when it dos come to the end I will read it AGAIN !!!!!!    more more more more



Author's Response:

aww, thank you!  no review is a bad review, i promise :)  and more is coming...

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 22

lovely make-up lovin, loved the scene with them all crashed in the living room, and i want to throttle bella for the way she treated E aftger the jake phone call.  jesus, bitch, calm the fuck down!  guh!

and thanks for the new tunes - you hooked me up with some unfamiliar ones!



Author's Response:

thanks :)  yeah, i know--i always want to kill those crazy bitches for freaking out at their boyfriends for no reason, and then...i wrote one.  funny how that works.  i think she made up pretty well, though, right?

i'm glad i could help with your music education!  and thanks for reviewing, too :)

Reviewer: SDDoo (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 22

I happen to love the slightly creepy-pervy-glad-it's-not-happening-to-me Carlisle.  The whole family was fun and the game tradition was great.  "You're a used condom" is one of my favorite lines from this whole fic and I'm glad it was used again!! 



Author's Response:

hahaha, thanks.  you know what's scary is that this carlisle is based on my mother.  yup, you heard that right.  imagine my life now...feel bad for me, seriously, haha.

and, yes, i was glad to bring back the "you're a used condom" line.  god, i love emmett so much!  thanks for reviewing and letting me know :)

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 22

Jake seriously needs a beat down. I'm all for a friendly Jake, but I can not stand a coniving, maliciously Jake, he knows Bella's weaknesses and uses it against her. Honestly for once I would be thrilled if someone let Edward beat the shit out of Jacob.

Also, I love that they actually love one another. They're there for each other and taking care of each other, both physically and emotionally. It's refreshing and nice.

I think Eddie needs to do something incredible for Ms. Swan too. He's in love, for apparently the first time, he needs to do something spectacular to show that love to Bella...just a few thoughts...you said you liked that right?



Author's Response:

hahah, oh i hate jake.  i'm just figuring out the logistics of his beatdown.  we'll see how it goes, hehe.  and, yes, edward DOES need to do something spectacular for bella.  i have some plans :)  hopefully you'll enjoy them!

thanks for your review!!!

Reviewer: Acinom (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 22

so i was definitely confused with how Bella was acting all day, b/c for once I didn't really see what Edward did wrong!  but I'm glad it all worked out ok...not too thrilled about the whole forgiving Jake thing, but it could be b/c I'm like 100000% Team Edward!  Lol!  but I still liked it!



Author's Response:

sorry about crazy bitch bella, but...i hope you understood that she was just mad at herself, not edward.  unfortunately, she took it out on him and had some inopportune timing.  ....and, trust me, jake is not completely forgiven.  i'm CLEARLY 10000% team edward, too :)

thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 22

Love the game the whole family played...and the reaction to "the Porche"...



Author's Response:

haha, thanks :)

Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 22

loved it  keep it coming   update soon

 



Author's Response:

thank you!  more is coming soon :)

Reviewer: YourNameHere (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 22

Loved the sexy times :) Amazing!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 22

=D Sign me up for Thanksgiving dinner at the Cullen's house.

That was an amazing lemon...and I loved Alice's reaction to the descration of her Porsche.



Author's Response:

haha me too :)  and thank you!

Reviewer: Dominatall (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 22

Summer break couldn't keep me away from this story. I look forward to everyone of your updates. Great Job! Keep'em coming!

Author's Response:

aww, i think i just blushed a little bit.  thanks so much!

Reviewer: tweely (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 22

Fun chapter!

Reviewer: Oliviamk1218 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 22

I read you're entire story today and would love to read more.  It's a great story.  Thanks for not forgetting the romance aspect as so many of the writers do. I'm going to favorite you're story.

:-)



Author's Response:

wow, thank you so much!  all 22 chapters in one day?  that's pretty awesome, if i do say so myself.  thanks for letting me know you're enjoying it--it really motivates me to write more :)

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 22

awe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Irritable_Grizzzly (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow. News Flash: Guy apologizes honestly without being completely sure what he did wrong!

I love how Alice found out about the Porsche!  Poor Alice.  You know the next trip she takes with it will be to a Detailer!

I love their relationship and how it's evolved.  It's just awesome.  I also like how you didn't take a lot of the usual paths to create aritificial drama. 

Sorry if I've been remiss in reviewing even while I greedily read. 



Author's Response:

hahah--i know that him apologizing was pretty unrealistic, but...wouldn't it be great if stuff like that really happened?

anyway, i'm glad you've been enjoying everything--i always love hearing your reaction to the chapters, though, and i definitely had been missing out on them recently (pouts).

no shame in being greedy, though :)  thanks for coming back out and letting me now you're enjoying the story still!

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