Awww!! That was so sweet!! AND HOT!!!

A very sweet chapter and all is good in Off limits land :-) But maybe it´s time for some drama... By the way, I really like flirty Carlisle even though I wouldn´t like to have him as father-in-law.

Author's Response:

there's some drama a-brewing, i promise :)  and i'm glad you're enjoying carlisle...he's super fun!

I'm sorry i've never reviewed before, but wow, I've read every single chapter and love all of them. Bella and Edward have introduced me to some really good music - so THANK YOU!! lol

we dont have thanksgiving in England, but I love the idea of that game, so I'm going to suggest it at Xmas with my family - again thank you!!

I dont' know what I want to see next . . . I guess that as long as it has smut I'll be very very happy!! Although thinking about it - how about a band competition and Bella and Edward have to go against James and Victoria?? maybe . . .

thanks - and i still love your story - dont change anything!

clobub xx

Author's Response:

i'm so glad i've helped with your music education!  and i'm glad that you finally decided to review -- honestly, i'm so appreciative of all my readers, and i'm so glad you've been enjoying it :)

also, no worries on the smut front...as long as i continue to write this story, there will be smut, haha.  and thanks for the vote of confidence :)

looooved this chapter. Especially that their finally together. Loved the lemon ;-) Love how Edward reacted to stupid Jacob.

Great work on this chapter looking forward to the next one.

Okay, I admit to having been lax at reviewing, oftentimes because I'll read a new chapter right before going to bed. So, here goes, a review of the Thanksgiving chapter!

This was a much sweeter chapter, showing the tender side of Edward, and I loved it. I liked Edward's interaction with his cousin and Bella's reaction to watching it. I know what that does to a woman, regardless of whether or not she wants children. The lemon to me showed a deepening of E&B's relationship, an illustration of how serious it is, as Bella told Jake on the phone. 

I like Jake this way: apologetic and far away. Hahaha.

The only thing that I didn't like (that most people here seemed to enjoy) was Carlisle. I personally found it truly skeevy that he was ogling Bella in such a sexual way. YES I know he is a man (handsome and all) and she is both beautiful an sexy, but for me it really crossed a respect line for him to so openly sex her up with his eyes in front of his wife and son. I was also really shocked at Edward telling his dad to "shut it". I come from a really casual, joking kind of family, but there's certain lines we'd never cross. No matter how much I was kidding, I'd get a major smackdown for ever telling my dad to shut up. Whoa.

I didn't understand why Bella was mad at Edward. After he apologized to her I sort of saw her reason, but I think she owes him a better apology. :)

So, more things to do? I can't remember when the kids have to return to Seattle, but it might be fun to see them hit up the Chicago nightlife, for a change in scenery and atmosphere. What is Bella like jealous or threatened of women from Edward's past? Can she handle it or is she prone to mess with women for fun mocking of his old skanks? 

I also am wondering if this story will take a turn towards new living situations. Now that all couples are neatly sorted, will the issue of moving in together become an issue? Hmmm....

I might like some more girl talk time. I really like your renderings of Rosalie (as I have said before, your Rosalie is my favorite Rosalie) and Alice. 

Poor Alice. She might be itching to get home to wipe down her precious Porsche! Hahaha!

 

Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing!  i'm so glad that you've been enjoying the more vulnerable side of edward (you know, the one that apologizes even though he knows he didn't do anything wrong?)  i'm sorry you're not a fan of my carlisle...but...the story is ooc, so, i took some liberties.  i know this may sound totally bizarre to you, but...he's actually based off of one of my best friend's dad.  he's completely ridiculous and totally inappropriate, but absolutely hilarious.  he's been checking me out since i met him three years ago, and has been trying to convince his son to get together with me for just about that long.  i also come rom a really casual family, though, and i tell my mom and dad to shut it all the time...i also call my little sister a crack whore, but...it's all in jest.  we're just all pretty inappropriate in general.  didn't mean to offend by any means, though.

as for the future of this story...there's definitely going to be some reemergence of edward's former conquests...and i think you'll enjoy that aspect.  i hadn't thought about the new living situations, although, it definitely seems like there's a place to go with that...thanks for the suggestion!!!

hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story :)

Your writing is really good so don't worry about having to put a lemon in every chapter.Even if there had been no lemon I would have loved this chapter. Love when Emmet comes and thinks they slept together ;-) I so lmao ;-) Emmet is just such a big brother and sooo cute.

You did a great job on this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one.

That was a really silly reason to be upset especially at a man as sexy as Edward. 

I absolutely love this Carlisle!!!

I enjoy this story but I am curious as to what twists you have in store. I need some real Bella and Edward drama. 

Can't wait for the update!

Author's Response:

haha, yes it was.  i'm hoping that you got that she was more mad at herself and taking it out on edward than actually mad at edward.  who could actually be mad at that face?  let's be honest, haha.

some drama is coming...get excited, but...i have faith in this couple--they're pretty into one another, haha.

thanks for the review!!!

started reading this story a few days ago. enjoying it but am wondering if you have any further angst or plot twists planned. Good job!

Author's Response:

plot twists...yes.  angst?  ehhh....mild angst, i'd say.  not too much--it's just not my style right now.  thanks for reading and reviewing, though :)

I laughed so hard with the Porsche thankful slip. Too funny. Plus I think Carlisle is absolutely hilarious in this story. He is always portrayed as being cool, calm, and collect, so its a nice change to see him so feisty. Great job. Can't wait for an update.

Author's Response:

haha, thank you!  i figured if i was going ooc, i may as well include the parents, too :)  i'm glad you're enjoying everything!  thanks for reviewing, too.

Perfect, as always!  I really love the smooth over with Jacob/Edward!  I love Protective Edward! This Carlisle is HILLARIOUS! 

Author's Response:

aww, thank you!  i'm not sure it was exactly a smooth over with jacob, but...i guess that's a close enough term for it, hahah.  and i'm glad you're enjoying this carlisle :)  thanks for reviewing, too!!

I love this chapter. Especially the scene in bed where Edward and Bella fall and fall and fall .... in love. Great work. Looking forward to more.

lol love this chapter. Edward is sooo going to be sleep deprived with Bella in his apartement;-) Wonder when they'll crack;-) Looking forward to more.

Great job.

Loved that you did take this chapter into the story. It's just nice to know what they're singing and I like the Bedward chemistry.

Great chapter looking forward to the next one.