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Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved your first chapter! I have had this story on my to do list for awhile and am so glad I finally started it!
Author's Response: yay, i'm glad, too! i hope you enjoy it :)
Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 22
Great job. I love the interaction of the fam. :)
Reviewer: sonecrackle (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 18
Bitch pleeeeeze! I luv luv that sketch!
Author's Response: me too -- it's my absolute fav. in fact...i think that's one of the best episodes of snl in recet years :)
Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 22
I just read your story from the beginning - OMW AMAZING!!! Adore your style and thank you!!!
Author's Response: eee, thank you! welcome to the off limits train :) i'm glad to have you!
Reviewer: sonecrackle (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 15
First lemon was awesome!
'Popular' ringtone is perfect for Alice. I heart Wicked!
Jake is such a total ass hat! He should definitely be publically humiliated for all the shit he has put Bella thru. Rose should be the one to hand him the ass kicking of the century.
Keep up the fan-damn-tastic writing!
Reviewer: sonecrackle (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 15
First lemon was awesome!
'Popular' ringtone is perfect for Alice. I heart Wicked!
Jake is such a total ass hat! He should definitely be publically humiliated for all the shit he has put Bella thru. Rose should be the one to hand him the ass kicking of the century.
Keep up the fan-damn-tastic writing!
Reviewer: sonecrackle (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 15
Awesome job on ur first lemon!
Sooo happy with Alice's ringtone. I love Wicked, and 'Popular' fits her to a tee!
Jake really needs to suffer from all the shit he put Bella thru. I think Rose should be the one to royally kick his ass. There should be definte public embarrassment.
Keep up the great job!
Reviewer: laleangel (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 22
I honestly love your Carlisle!! Just read last 2 chapters and he is so different from the normal Carlisle's that folk write about, gotta say I love your one the best!! He makes me laugh out loud and smile every time. Also laughed at the what we are thankful for game, having both Edward and Bella say the Porche was hilarious!!
I'm glad that it was Bella that was in the wrong as I was with Edward saying WTF, he didn't do anything, though he was really cute trying to figure out what he had done and then apologizing anyways. awwwwwwwwwww
Cant wait for more. xx
Author's Response: ee--thank you! it was definitely a risk making my carlisle the way i did, but i'm glad he was received so well!
Reviewer: Outlander (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 15
I guess I'm a "lurker" and you want to know whether you can do lemons or not. Shuh, yeah! You can do a fine lemon!
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 22
Not a lurker, just a new reader.
Good story! I'm looking forward to more......
Author's Response: yay, well welcome! and thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: luckymac (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 22
The whole story's fantastic! I think your version of Carlisle is the best one I've ever read, so freaking funny! It's always refreshing to read something unexpected. Can't wait to see more. Will we ever get to see Jake get the tongue lashing/beat down he deserves? :)
Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed carlisle :) and...about jake...you'll see!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
It's funny 'cause I haven't been reviewing too much lately thinking that you were probably getting swamped with reviews and that mine would get lost in the pile. No more. I'll review every chapter from now on, I promise!
Now, I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I just find it such a relief when everyone is happy and in love, and there's no danger or horror lurking in the background. The love scene in the end was HOT HOT HOT! I love that it was their most intense love making, and in his childhood bed!
I think I can guess why your reviews are down, besides people thinking like my stupid self. Everyone in your story is HAPPY now, like I said before. There's no more suspense or drama. The only drama I can think of (and I actually had to think a bit) was Jake. So while chapters like this keep people smiling and giddy all the way through, there's no NEED to punch out thoughts since how many times can you hear "great chapter", and no excitement to 'em? That's just my guess. What do I know? NADA!
Keep 'em coming love! I love happy times! WOO-HOO!
Author's Response: hahah, well, thank you! yes...everyone is happy right now. i'm not much into angst. obviously there's gotta be some drama, but...i like to keep the drama at least slightly self contained :)
thank you for reviewing--it's nice to know that you're still out there!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 19
Awww. I wanted to cry at the end!! It was so sweet. "Im in love. Im in love" :)
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 18
WAY TO GO ROSE!! I soooooo was not expecting that.
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 22
I so loved that chapter....(I am delurking). They had an almost Norman Rockwell holiday and I loved their makeup. I wonder how confident Bella would be running into a former childhood girlfriend of Edward's?
Author's Response: thank you for de-lurking! it always makes me smile when y'all come out to play :)
and....i'm one step ahead of you with the whole edward's former girlfriend thing....just you wait!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 17
OH SHIT!! DID THEY USE A CONDOM!?!?!?!??!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 17
Hahaha...They're all gonna think they only had sex cause they were drunk.
Reviewer: lulu123 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 22
i honestly can't remember if i reviewed on the the last chapter but incase i didn't i will say what i thought of the last one as well!!
i love your carlise it is so the polar opposite of SM's and it is sooo good, also i'm glad everyone got the chance to see jasper, pretty sure that would have been a good night! =D
i actually think this story is soo good, and one of my favourites, i love charlotte and the whole family and how the cullen's are just like.... culleny! =D
can't wait for the next update, please please don't slow down or stop just because the readers and reviewers have gone down, trust me this is amazing and people will be back pestering you for more very soon!!!
Author's Response: thank you! i definitely wasn't planning on slowing down with the readers -- i can't get this story out of my head! haha. thanks so much again for the kind review :)
Reviewer: eviltigereye (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 22
i love this story!!! and even though it's summer, i'm actually reading more than i was during the semester.....so i will try to remember to comment after every chapter just how much i love your story :P
Author's Response: thank you! i really appreciate that, seriously :)
Reviewer: NuclearLove3640 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 22
write more! such a good story! and a cute one at that, it makes me smile. :)
Author's Response: i'm so glad! my goal in life is to make other people smile, so...thank you :)
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 17
loool Alice found out first. I was right! ;-) Love this chapter.
Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 22
Love your story. Carlisle is fucking hilarious! (fist bump!!!) Please update soon.
Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you're enjoying carlisle :) updates are coming soon!
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 15
looved this chapter. It was everything I hoped for and more. Great job. Lovw the Emmet and Bella moment.
Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 22
Love this story! More please. Happy, happy Bella and Edward!
Author's Response: haha, absolutely. i'm not much into angst :)
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 16
Awww!! That was so sweet!! AND HOT!!!
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