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Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 23
Whoa, Edward!!!! This chapter cracked me up. I had a whole bunch of other stuff written, but I accidentally deleted it :/ Just believe me when I say that I loved it!
Author's Response: hahah ohhh computer glitches. no harm, i still appreciate the review thoroughly. i'm glad you enjoye bella's embarrasment (at least, i'm assuming that's what cracked you up). thanks for continuing to review :)
Reviewer: lost my mind forever (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 23
It is going to be about Edwrad and Bella on stage. He wants them to look like they are available right?
Author's Response: why are my readers so smart? i can't pull ANYTHING over you guys....hahah. thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 23
Wow! What a rollercoaster ride that chapter was!
Edward is really contemplating some monumrntal steps in their lives. How old is he again? What a sweetheart!
That was pretty funny when Bella turns and flashes everyone and Edward tries to cover her up by grabbing her! What a visual! hahaha
Maybe Marcus wants them to start doing theme nights. LOL Seriously, his very name does not forbode well. I'm worried. You and your cliffies!
Author's Response: right? it was a rollercoaster to write, too. i didn't know how many emotions i could actually go through in a single chapter until i wrote this one, haha. to answer your question: edward is 23 and bella is 22 ... so, yeah, they're just getting on with their careers (i'm the same age as them and experiencing some of the same situation with my future, so i thought i'd incorporate it, haha)
and, yes, marcus isn't a good name...but, i like him the best out of all the volturi, so i don't think it'll be too bad ;) don't worry too much, please!
also, thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 23
I always laugh so hard with the story. Another great chapter. Keep them coming.
Author's Response: thank you! i love making people laugh, so thanks for making my day :)
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 23
Hm, something not-so-good is coming up, methinks! Awesome chapter as usual, filled with fabulous loveliness. :)
Author's Response: haha, as usual -- you're so perceptive. although, i'm not so into angst, so...it'll be minor i promise :) and thank you for reviewing, as always!
Reviewer: SoImpossible (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 23
I can't wait to see them a) record the song b) go out on a date. I'm really happy that she has sort of worked out that Jake won't be in her life right now. He still acts like he own her..and he shouldn't need to hear it from a man (Edward) that he's serious about Bella. He should have respected Bella's feelings.. that she was serious about someone else. But he didn't. He acted like she was his until another man forcefully handed him his ass. It was pretty sexist and rude.. and he doesn't need to be in her life. I love that Edward is thinking of the future but planning on it being with Bella. He's growing up. Its fun to watch.
Author's Response: yay! i'm excited that you're excited! hahah. and, yes, jake is pretty much gone -- if he comes back, he won't be back to fuck with b/e anymore...i was done with him being so freaking inconsiderate and immature. time to grow up and get over yourself.
and, yes, i'm so glad that you've been enjoying watching edward grow up -- it's fun to write as well. thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 23
Uh Oh!
Author's Response: >:) (that was my best attempt at an evil grin). thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 23
Wow great chapter..... Poor em and the pool to funny...
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 23
I'd die if I was Bella! Just die, but it might be worth it for Edward.
Author's Response: haha, i would DEFINITELY die of embarrassment. without a doubt. but...i look at it as her induction into the family :)
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 23
Thanksgiving was fun! Love the pool scene...
Can't WAIT till Bella and Edward do the demos. And wonder what's up with the new manager...
Author's Response: yay! there's lots to come, and i'm glad you're excited for it! thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 23
That was a great chapter! Go Edward for putting Jake in his place. And such a sweet thing to be all nervous when discussing their future together! I can't wait to see what kind of songs he'll write and sing w/ Bella! Great job!
Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed the chapter -- it was definitely plot filled, and i'm glad it got you excited for the future :)
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 23
Awesome! Busy Chapter!
Author's Response: yup, VERY busy :)
Reviewer: 2SHOTS2BEERS82 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 23
i hope the guys arent out of a gig!!! i cant wait for the update!!! happy 4th and thank you so much for writing such an awesome story.... i dont know you but i love you and you complete my smutty little life..lol :) have a great one!
Author's Response: they're not out of a gig...i promise -- there will be fun bar fun to come :) happy 4th to you, too! i hope you had a fun filled weekend, and i'm glad i could contribute. i don't know you, but i love you too, haha. thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: casey-jade21 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 23
haha classic you had me cracking up! loved it. update soon.
Author's Response: yay, thank you so much :) updates are coming soon.
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 23
I'm sad to see Esme and Carlisle go (especially Carlisle :-) but I'm excited about the new storylines you set up. I'm interested to see how things go with the music recording and what's up with the whole Marcus thing. Congrats on all the recs, you definitely deserve it. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: dude, i'm sad to see them go, too -- honestly, they were absolutely the most fun to write, haha. ...maybe they'll return for christmas? who knows. anwyay, i'm excited that you are excited for the future! there's so much coming up and i'm really nervous/excited to see how everyone will take it...
thank you for continuing to support me and review, as always :)
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 23
BIrth control pills make your boobs bigger! I am taking my back to the pharmacy and demand that I get the ones that make my boobs bigger, screw the PMMD and acne, I want bigger boobs damn it!! ::Fuming:::
Oh yeah, the story. It was great. I found myself choking on my lunch while I laughed at it. You have a great talent. I love that Carlisle is flirting with Bella, it cracks me up. I hope yo have a way for her to get Jasper back.
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: hahaha, your review honestly just cracked me up. yes, different birth control pills have different side effects, and a very common one is bigger boobs, haha. apprently the side effect is actually general weight gain, but because it's hormonal stuff, it ends up going to your boobs...at least, that's what mine did....hahah. exchange away ;)
and about the story...i'm so glad you're enjoying it and cracking up. just be careful whilst eating. i would hate to be responsible for your asphyxiation ;)
thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 23
Hmmmmmmm....I'm not sure what the problem would be. Maybe one of their old lead singers (Tanya?) are bitter and want to get back at Edward (nee Slutward) and are telling the managers about sexual harrassment or something along those lines. Or else they found something out about Balle that would mean she can't sing with them.
Great chapter! I loved Edward telling off Jacob...such sweet satisfaction. I'm glad Edward didn't panic and get distant after he blurted the wife thing....I get a little nervous and keep thinking at some point he's going to panic...but then I get rewarded with Swoonward (*sigh*) I lurrrrrrrve him!
LOVE this story! Please hurry with more!
Author's Response: haha, your predictions are on the right track, although not all together correct...but, thanks! i'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter :) edward hasn't panicked yet becasue i don't think it's actually sunk in yet, but...there's a little bit of panic coming, haha. just to prepare you ;)
anyway, thanks so much for reviewing! more is on the way :)
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 23
hmmm....why do I have a feeling that James will get involved soon and cause trouble??Ps..Like the whole Emmet walking around with his hand over his eyes.. ;D Please update very soon.
Author's Response: hmm...that's an interesting idea, haha. and, yes, the emmett covering his eyes thing was based on a true life experience ... unfortunately, in my story I was emmett and walked in on my sister and her boyfriend....not so fun, kids...not so fun.
anyway, thanks for reviewing, per usual -- updates coming your way soon!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 23
Are they going to have a baby? This chapter was just fucking hilarious!! I had tears flowing I was laughing so hard. Emmette was priceless and Edawards inter voice is just funny. Basically I really love this story.
Author's Response: no babies out of wedlock! and that's a promise. yay, i'm glad i made you laugh so hard that you cried -- that's QUITE the ego booster :) thanks for reviewing!!!
Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 23
wow uhh HOT! that was pretty awesome! and Edward and I share a birthday!!!!! SO...marriage? hm wow. I like it! Maybe I'm just sappy like that. I dunno whats gonna happen w/the band sitch but it doesnt sound good!!! :D So excitedfor next chapter!!
Author's Response: aww--happy belated birthday, then :) and, to the marriage comment...i feel like it was more of a slip that edward hasn't really realized he's said yet. i mean, he kind of realized it, but it's WAYYY at the back of his head. we'll definitely be dealing with the band sitch first (and...it's only kind of bad).
hope you continue to enjoy!!! thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 23
great thanksgiving vacation...of course getting caught naked in a hot tub leaves a little to be desired but in the end its all worth it. lol
can't wait for more
Author's Response: haha, thank you! i thought it was a pretty good vacation, too :)
Reviewer: coco1984 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 23
Hm... the larger tits suggest pregnancy...... trust, cause at 7 1/2 months myself, I should know... I guess we'll have to see how things shake out.
Author's Response: haha--well, first of all: congratulations! and thank you for reviewing :) i hope you continue to enjoy what's to come!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 23
Mmmm... I was hoping for some more Carlisle :)
That was a really good chapter, I am looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: haha, sorry to disappoint with less carlisle. but...there was so much that needed to get said/accomplished...and carlisle couldn't be there for most of it :) but, i'm glad you still enjoyed it...and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 23
I loved the part were everybody walked in on them in the hot tup. It was a little predictable (after all, going topless in hot tups in the middle of the afternoon, with the family in the next room -- or wherever they where; don't remember exactly where the pool was positioned;) -- is always just begging for being busted;)) but it was neverless LOL worthy;) Which earned me a few 'WTF is the deal wiht her' looks... lol:D Ooh, and Emmett falling into the pool! hah:D:D ...loved that too=) Yeah, I think I just loved the whole chapter;) :D Can't wait to read more! :):)
Author's Response: haha, right? topless during the afternoon is just asking for trouble, whether the family is occupied or not. but i'm glad you still laughed...that's the goal (despite the weird looks from everyone else, haha). i'm glad you've been enjoying it -- and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 23
oh, gosh. i love how edward and bella are going for the whole music business thing. awesome, and the bella in the hot tub thing? priceless. another thing i love is how i just got my nails painted neon green and they look cool typing.. which is why i will continue writing about how much this story kicks my ass. so awesome.. and my prediction is that they wont be able to play anymore at the bar?maybe copyright shtuff? or maybe it's good and they like bella? hmm, i dont know. can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: yay, i'm glad you approve of them going for it with the music business. i mean, when you graduate with a degree in musical theater, but you live in seattle, being a rockstar is really the only viable option, right? haha.
also, i totally approve of the nail colors -- especially since it makes you continue to type about how much you're loving the story...that makes me feel awesome...and it makes YOU awesome.
thanks for reviewing :)
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