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Reviewer: HaYhAy (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 16

vury nce i wuv it!!!!!!!!!! u shud chnge ed's ncknme to Tiger insted of Bunny.

Reviewer: HaYhAy (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 15

i can do lemons!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 23

This is a great story!!  I'm so glad I found it!  I've spent the last several hours reading through all of your chapters!!  You are a great writer and I'm loving your Edward and Bella!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  i'm glad you found it, too :)  i hope you continue to enjoy future chapters!

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 23

Emmett is too funny. He's scarred for life now, and how does Daddy Cullen feel about seeing Bel's boobies? Too funny?



Author's Response:

ohhh emmett....my one true joy--gotta love him.  and i'm going to tell you that daddy cullen felt pretty good about seeing bella's boobs - and maybe edward hasn't heard the last of it ;)

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 22

I like this Carlisle! He's hilarious.  It was an extremely funny chapter. I loved it!!!



Author's Response:

thanks -- he's pretty inappropriate, but...i'm cool with it, haha.

Reviewer: Chicsarah (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 23

Great story, I wasn't sure about rockband Edward, but I started it because of all of the positive reviews.  If my extra review helps anyone else start (and seriously get hooked) on your story, then I have paid you back for the several hours of enjoyment I have had!  Please post again soon!



Author's Response:

well, thank you for giving it a chance!  i'm so glad that you enjoyed it...and honestly, that's my only concern as a writer is that people are enjoying themselves, so...thanks again!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 23

OMG!  Jasper, so not cool!

Uh-oh...  What could be up with the new manager.  Can't wait to find out.



Author's Response:

haha, right?  jasper was barely embarrassed, but bella was utterly humiliated.  i'm sure bella won't let that one slide...she's pretty feisty ;)

Reviewer: ikss (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 19

"I know how you love your face"

hahahahahah!!! :) Priceless.

Reviewer: ikss (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 19

So...I just started reading your fic a few days ago. I am diggin it! :) It's very hot and very funny, as well. Kudos! :)



Author's Response:

thanks!  i'm glad you decided to give it a chance :)

Reviewer: a_rainy_day (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 23

Ok, it's been a busy holiday weekend but now I can finally read and review!

First of all, YAY. You are the fastest updater in the West and I love that one of my fave FFs is never a torturous wait. 

I also love that your story is FUN. I haven't read the reviews but I'm sure everyone burst out laughing at the Emmett scene just like I did. Poor Bella! It's funny that she accidentally flashed a former crush. LOL! Your story is funny without being silly slapstick, so thank you! (I actually stopped reading a FF that started out cute and quickly turned ridiculous). It's fun, and rockin', and sweet, and soo lemony sheksy. 

I think my favorite part of the whole chapter was Edward telling off Jacob. YEAAAH!! Edward took a lot of ribbing this whole trip from everyone, so I'm really glad he got to lash out at someone who really deserved a good smackdown. It felt really good to read that part.

OK, so I have a guess/ prediction about Marcus and the next chapter. I am probably wrong, but here goes: it'll have something to do with a former fling of Edward's. Either Marcus is dating one of them and she wants to torture him a bit by having her new man give the band something to trip up over, or an ex-singer in the band that Edward messed around with is somehow going to be added to the performance bill at The Mansion. Or some sort of combination.

That's the only thing I can think of, but I also think Bella's confident in regards to her man (especially after hearing him tell Jacob about wanting to marry her in the future-- awww!), so she can hold her own and maybe have some fun fuckery with this ex with the help of her girls Alice and Rose (esp. Rose, haha!).

That is my lame ol' guess. I can't wait to read what YOU have in mind for the gang!

p.s. Also can't wait for a sweet first date. Too cute.



Author's Response:

haha, wow -- you had QUITE a bit to say, my dear....and i love you for it :)  a big your welcome for updating on time--i really hate when i get super invested in a story and then it never updates, so i try to be as regular as possible!  i'm glad you appreciate it.

also, a big YAY to my story being fun.  that was my goal--i wanted something that would make people laugh, so i'm really excited about that comment ;)

now, as for your future predictions, i refuse to give anything away...but...i will hint that one of the things you said is so close to true, it's ridiculous, haha.  anyway, thanks for the review, as always - and i hope you continue to enjoy what's to come!

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 23

Hmmm, I'm thinking a scout wants to pick them up...?

Oh, by the way, Bad Company kicks ass.
It's nice to know that some people have good music taste!

& thanks for the Independence day shout out:)



Author's Response:

haha, i'm glad you approve of my music taste ;) ...i approve of yours as well!  thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 23

Hi ,i really enjoyed this chapter

My family looked at me woriingly as i actually laughed out loud !!!! Emmett !!!

 

Great story ,waiting a week for updates is killing me !!!

 x x  xx



Author's Response:

thank you :)  i'm glad your raucous laughter caused your family to look at you strangely.  it's the appropriate response to the chapter!  and sorry about the week wait in between chapters, but ... i'm trying to get a job as a screenwriter, so i have to split my week of writing accordingly so my scripts get done first (although...i'm going to be honest, i've pushed script writing back for this story more than once, haha).  but...i need a job!  aaanyway, thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 23

i love this story! i really hope whatever dram at the club isn't too bad.



Author's Response:

thank you!  i love you :)  and...no worries, i'm not much into angst -- this is clearly a comedy.

Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 20

Yay! Emmetts back to normal!!!!! XD

Reviewer: Laure_lei (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 23

Good Lord, hitting the end of a chapter without a 'next' button is like hitting a brick wall.  Keep it up; this story is yummy!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

aww, you're too sweet.  thank you!  hopefully you'll be able to click next soon :)

Reviewer: lulu123 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 23

ooooh i wanna know whats going to happen!!! =)

i loved loved loved the hot tub scene like actualy i laughed my ass off, it was total class!!

can't wait until the next chapter! =D



Author's Response:

hahah, soon you will know what will happen :)  and i'm glad you enjoyed the hot tub scene.  it's my life mission to make people laugh ;)

thank you for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 23

thank you for a great chapter



Author's Response:

and thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Cosmos (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 23

Oh I'm such an idiot - I thought I'd caught up so I started reading your reviews and TeamJasper was saying all about hot tub action and I was like.. hang on how did I miss that.. and then I realise there's a chapter 23 I haven't read yet - d'oh!

And oh my word it was fantastic - Emmett in the pool, just brilliant, I could not stop sniggering, Bella flashing Carlisle, Edward giving Jake a tongue lashing, brilliant.

Did you just steal my ideas for storylines - oh OK you wrote this chapter before my last review - we so clearly on the same page with the recording deal and some band angst. Looking forward to an update.



Author's Response:

hahahaha, that's absolutely hilarious.  well--great minds. right?  i feel like it's a good thing that we're on the same page...

and, yes, it was a busy chapter, but 'm super glad you enjoyed it :)  and thanks for reviewing, per usual!

Reviewer: Cosmos (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 22

Brilliant - I have finally caught up. No holidays for us here and it's bloody cold - brrr, so can't help you on thanksgiving traditions. If you have turkey on thanksgiving though what do you have for Christmas.. hmm?

So these last couple of chapters have been fab. I love the Cullens, pervy Carlise who can't stop swearing is just win. Cousin Charlotte who loves HSM is cute as - I need a little cousin, I am so all about East High (and I'm in my thirties - the shame!).

OK what do I want to see next, how about some band action - a big competition, chance of a recording contract etc.. not sure I could take any B x E angst I like them now they're all happy. Not sure I want Bella to make up with Jake yet either although it sounds like B is missing a friend.

Great stuff - look forward to an update



Author's Response:

i'm glad you're an east high fan and proud (it's ok, i feel exactly the same)...and i'm really glad that you feel postiively about carlisle -- everyone either loved or hated him, and it's really interesting to see which side of the fence people fall on.

as for xmas food...we eat turkey again...although once my family had steak (that was a weird year, haha).  most people eat ham, though. 

thanks for reviewing, and i'm glad you're all caught up :)

Reviewer: wilson55 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 23

Just started reading yesterday, finished all 23 chapters, I NEED MORE!! Seriously, Great Job, can't wait for an update!



Author's Response:

whoa, all 23 chapters in one day?  that's dedication, and i feel REALLY good about it :)  more is coming soon...thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 23

Wow, I can definitely see how this chapter sets things up for the future. It had future written all over it, and the future's looking good, lol. Before commenting on the aspects of the chapter though, I have to share an epiphany I had while reading this one. You know how there are some movies or shows that you watch and they just leave you feeling happy, no matter what the storyline was....this story is just like that. It's like a little blue happy pill on the computer screen, lol. Seriously, it made me just as happy reading this chapter as those hot dogs, beers, and fireworks did yesterday. :D

Anyways, I think I have to agree that I'm not sure even slutty lingerie would be worth getting up before dawn to go shopping on Black Friday with Alice. That's just got torture stamped all over it, so Edward better damn well know that Bella loves him to go through that.

Loved Rose sending Edward the picture. I'm still trying to figure out if she meant it to be a nice gesture or not, lol. Plus, I was kinda wondering if Bella did know that the picture was being taken because I could totally see her going along with that idea, torturing Bunny always seems to be a good idea.

The stuff in the pool and the hot tub was terrific and even though I was slightly rooting for some hot tub lovin', I just knew that somebody was going to walk in on that. However, I was expecting it go more like Bella running around topless and Carlisle comes in and gets a nice eyeful, lol. But what happened was much funnier and didn't make Edward have a stroke which is probably what would have happened if he found Carlisle ogling Bella's naked boobs. I can just see the veins popping out in his forehead now. :D

Emmett finding them and then getting tangled by Bella's top and falling in the pool.....definitely priceless. And without a doubt, the best line of the chapter for me goes to Bel! "I showed our friends a musical, and you showed them my tits!”---LMAO!

And then just when you think things can't get any better, good old Jakey calls and we finally get to hear Edward give him that verbal lashing! :D It made me soooo happy when Bella handed Edward the phone. And in the midst of that lashing, Edward has to go and make me even happier by annoucing his intentions to make Bella his wife!  I imagine that little tidbit will result in an interesting conversation for them sooner or later.

I still love Carlisle's humor, him asking if they didn't get enough in the hot tub. It's funny...your Carlisle actually makes me think so much more of Peter Facinelli than Carlisle. Like I picture him you know, not made up as Carlisle Cullen, but just being Peter Facinelli. I could totally see him being that kinda of laid-back, humorous, really fun to be around type of person.

I am definitely wondering what will happen with the band. That message did sound pretty ominous to me, but then again I am not too worried with it, because we already found out that it's not something that Emmett and Jasper want to pursue for the rest of their lives and Edward and Bella are planning on recording a duet, so even if it is bad news for the band, I think it will still work out okay. Like I said, I definitely liked the glimpses of the future we could see in this chapter and I really loved getting things wrapped up with the dog.

Thanks once again for another amazing chapter! As always, looking forward to the next one! :D



Author's Response:

haha, i feel REALLY good about your epiphany.  honestly, real life is too angsty as it is, and i write to escape that.  i'm mostly angst free, so -- it's good to hear that you feel the same :)

yes, this was an action packed chapter which is going to set up a lot for the future...obviously :)  it's going to take a surprising route in the next chapter, though (at least, i hope it's surprising)...haha, yes, the ominous message will be addressed...but i think it will be an enjoyable twist :)

other than that, thanks for reviewing, as always!  they always make me happy.

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 23

tyhanksor the update :))



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing ;)

Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 23

ahhhh!!!!!!! i know it's NOTHING BAD....right??



Author's Response:

haha, um...i don't think i can answer that quite yet...sorry :-P

Reviewer: mountaintop (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 23

great story



Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 23

Why would Edward think Marcus call is for the worse instead of the better? Both things can be taken from it, at least that is what I want to think.

But even if it is not for the good, well Edward was seeing change in the horizon, so maybe this is the chance he and Bella need. Lets hope that whatever is coming is for the good.

Thanksgiving was great, Bella fit into the family perfectly, both Esme and Carlisle love her even with Japser's payback and Emmett's fall into the pool and everything else Bella is part of the Cullens now.

Edward is really serious about her, he said it to Jake and showed it clearly.

So what's next?



Author's Response:

well...there's definitely lots coming...hopefully you'll continue to enjoy it :)  thanks for reviewing, as always!

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