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Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 24
Loved it!!! The lemon was hot! Marcus is a fucking dick! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 24
Wow. I guess it probably is not very surprising that that was my favorite lemon so far. Mmmm, Edward spanking me...uh I mean Bella. :D Hot, hot, hot lemon!
I was surprised by the characters here after the author's note. I was expecting Tanya or James or Victoria. I definitely get Lauren, but Marcus kinda surprised me. He's one Volturi that I actually didn't mind in the books, but in this story he's definitely a prick. He and Lauren fit well together. Wondering how Felix and Paul will work out as well in this.
I definitely didn't like the idea of Bella and Edward acting single after the sets as well, but it should lead to some interesting situations.
I loved Emmett's and Jasper's reactions to Edward telling them about him and Bella planning on recording a demo. It was almost as nice as their reactions to Edward sticking his foot in his mouth about Lauren. His apology was definitely soo sweet and I love how he and Bella are always growing and learning in this story. They screw up but it doesn't take them forever to realize and fix those screw-ups.
I did absolutely feel bad for Alice in this chapter. I really hope she got the hell out of there after they went to the bedroom...I mean there are some things that you just don't want to hear your brother doing. ;)
As always wonderful chapter and I'm looking forward to more. Good luck at the Indies and Congrats on the nominations! Totally well-deserved! :D
Author's Response: haha, thanks. yeah...i decided to go a bit raunchier with their sex. who knew that i could raunch it up past in the porche and on a washing machine? haha--apparently, i can. my imagination has no bounds.
as usual, thanks for your review and all of your support :)
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 22
Awww. That was so sweet.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 24
This is great: "Yeah, bitch. What now? Mine. All mine".
Edward so screwed up with this: "At least she wasn’t literally eating you,” I cringed. “I can’t believe I ever let her have her mouth on me.” Poor Bella...
I'm so glad that they made up at the end..I think it is time for them to find a new bar to play at...It would be great revenge against Marcus and Lauren, as the fans of the band are gonna go where ever they're playing, and Marcus loses BIG TIME!!!
Author's Response: yeah...edward needs a new filter. but...they made up pretty well, i think ;) and, i like that idea of them finding a new bar to play at - i didn't even think about that, but it's kind of hilarious, haha. well played, my dear...well played. thanks for your feedback, as always!
Reviewer: iheartnj (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 24
I just read this fic straighht through to this chapter today - and I absolutely LOVE it!!! Can't wait to see how they handle this Lauren/Marcus situation!!!
Author's Response: wow--well, welcome! i'm so glad you love it!!! hopefully you'll continue to enjoy what's to come! thanks for your review ;)
Reviewer: eviltigereye (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 24
damn, why does everyone try to screw things up for bella and edward? it's just not fair :( lauren is a whore :) can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: it isn't fair, right! as soon as they have happiness...it's like someone's trying to sabotage them. but, no worries -- they can do it :)
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 21
Awwww. I can't believe Im STILL behind. Ohg well. I dont have to wait. ^^
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 24
these new band developements aren't going to be good, are they?
Great chapter, looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: they're going to be fun to watch :)
Reviewer: esmie3 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 24
Good chapter :) I'm interested to see how the "time after the show" is going to play out. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: hopefully it'll be fun to watch! thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 24
Whoo... Oh boy... that was hot! :)
Lauren is a bitch.
I hope they get jealous watching each other tomorrow after the show, that could lead to something very steamy...
Author's Response: haha, thanks -- i'm glad you enjoy my gratuitous sex, haha.
Reviewer: Dominatall (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 24
More Please!!!!
Author's Response: yay :) i'm on it!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 24
glad they have some open communication
Author's Response: it's important, right?
Reviewer: Chriscrew (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 24
Loved it! Yes, want some more please!
Author's Response: yay, i'm glad :) thanks for letting me know!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 24
I really don't like Marcus. Poor Edward is going to be SOOOO jealous. Great chapter.
Author's Response: yeah, i'm not a marcus fan either...but i DO love some jealousward :) glad you enjoyedi t!
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 24
amazing ...awesome....... great.......,,wonderful........funny..... hot...... sweet ! you should have edward paid attention to the guys and bella to the girls that would fix that ass !
Author's Response: aw, thank you -- you're quite amazing, awesome, great, wonderful, and sweet yourself ;)
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 24
Oh, yes please ;)
Author's Response: glad you feel that way :)
Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 24
Hey Miss Lexie,
Excellent chapter as always! OK, everybody knows the new rule at the bar, but just maybe, just maybe, they could take the bull by the horns and be on the offensive and not the defensive! Instead of passively suffering through it, why not jump right in the middle of it and show Marcus a thing or two? Sure Lauren is going to try some shit, but why not turn the tables on her?
And that was SO rude when Marcus said "They're the only ones the audience cares about," concerning Jasper and Emment. So cold!
Edward giving her the journal of compositions was so heartfelt, and their sexin' was smaking hot as usual!
Congrats on your nominations and good luck!
Author's Response: heyy there -- yes, marcus is a douche. and unfortunately, bella and edward and the gang are kind of being passive about it because they don't know what else to do. luckily, i have a feeling that's going to change soon ;) thanks for the review, and for the luck!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 24
Hehe...I really want more..This was GREAT!!Please update very soon. ;D
Author's Response: haha, that's good to know! i'm so glad you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 24
Ohhhh no here we go...
Author's Response: it's going to be a good ride, i promise :)
Reviewer: Regetta (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 24
I want some more!
Author's Response: of course ;)
Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 24
I knew it was skeeze trying to get payback. I think however, that B and E should have fun with it instead of it becoming some big ass problem. Lauren is trying to cause problems and break E like she feels he broke her, right? Well, let the bitch know it isn't going to happen. Have B and E make the rounds but all the while staying in their own world. They can talk about each other to the groupies or whatever. Or have B hang with the chicks and E hangs with the guys...I don't know I just seriously don't want this to be an huge issue for them. TRUST...it's a big fucking deal and I want them to have it with eachother. They love eachother, they trus eachother...I just don't want this to cause drama cause that's what the bitch is going for and that makes me fucking ill...
Author's Response: b/e totally trust one another...i think it's more a matter of failed communication with one another that leads to their issues...but they're working on it :) thanks for reviewing, though!!
Reviewer: dazedx3 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 24
amazing as usual :)
Author's Response: aw, thank you :)
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 24
LOL Great chapter!!! I only see Tanya trying to create trouble, but hopefully Bella and Edward will both be secure in their relationship to make it through their forced separation after their set! More soon.
Author's Response: thanks! i think b/e have a lot of trust in one another, so it won't be TOO hard...but...it's still hard to put on a show and not be able to be together in public. but, no worries--i have faith :)
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 24
haha edward is funny! update soon!
Author's Response: he IS funny, isn't he? haha -- thanks fro reviewing, as always :)
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 24
Cool!!!! What a way to make up... :D
Author's Response: haha, i know, right? thanks for reviewing ;)
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