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Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 25
HAHAHAHA That was hilarious! Poor Edward & Bella, they just can't stay out of a embarrassing situation!
Author's Response: they really can't ... and i'm not sure why. maybe it's time they needed a place of their own? (just saying...)
Reviewer: SDDoo (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 25
Poor Bella! I hope she doesn't think Edward knew Jasper was there. That would make for awesome drama, but Bella's got to be mortified enough. And it was pretty mean leaving us with a cliffie on this! But I'm still loving it, so I'll forgive. :)
Author's Response: sorry about the cliffie, but it was REALLLLY long...and, yes, jasper's going to have some fun explaining to do, haha. glad you're still loving it :)
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 25
soooo funny !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: mspolarisblack (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 25
awesooooomeeeeeee....amazing job!!! loved the fact that he threw jasper a bone....:P
Author's Response: haha, thank you so much! i did too -- everyone thinks that boys don't gossip, but i promise you...they do!
Reviewer: Elizabeth Masen (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 25
I think I mentioned it before, but I lurv Carlisle!! He's freakin' hilarious!
Poor B&E! It will be interesting to see how J interacts with them, esp B, in the future.
Great chapter
Author's Response: you definitely have, but i'm glad he's still be enjoyed by you :) b and j are def going to be awkward for a while...wouldn't you be? god, i can't even imagine that. hope you enjoy what's to come! and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 25
holy F!I understand why Edward is pissed..Because Jasper could have walked away sooner.Awsome chapter
Author's Response: ohhh yeah, jasper's fo SHO in the dog house. thanks :)
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 25
I'm honestly laughing so hard right now. Jasper is by far my favorite character besides Edward and Bella. That was hilariously perverted on his part and I don't know why it's making me laugh so hard. I can't wait to see how Bella deals with the humiliation!
Author's Response: i feel like all these characters are little perverted pieces of me, and i'm glad that you are enjoying them as much as i do, haha. i DO love me some jasper, although i'm telling you straight up--someone's in the dog house. :)
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 25
great chapter!! it was so funny!!!! update soon please!
Author's Response: thank you! i'm so glad you're still enjoying :)
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 25
LOL. I would be perfectly fine with those three getting it on together.
That was a fun chapter. ;)
Author's Response: haha, as fine as you might be...it's just not in the cards for these folks. edward doesn't like to share ;)
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 25
=O
HOLY CRAP!!
Jasper is in SO much trouble.
Author's Response: that he is, my friend....
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 24
loved it
Reviewer: SoImpossible (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 25
Umm, I hate anything that even hints at J/B. I'm sorry. I love this story but this chapters end wasn't for me. I didn't even like that she had a crush on him in the begining of the story. I think I just enjoy Edward too much. I'm kind of squicked out that Jasper saw that..
Author's Response: no worries -- i totally understand. i get queasy at the mention of j/b, too -- honestly, there will be NONE of that in my story. trust me on this one: jasper is SOOOO in the doghouse. i'm an edward fan through and through.
in fact, when i was introducing my friend to twilight we were talking about the characters for some reason, and he was like--is there anyone in this book you DON'T like? and so i told him jacob...i despise jacob. so, he gets to new moon and calls me and is like -- why do you hate jacob? he's awesome! to which i replied, if you don't know why idon't like jacob than you've severely underestimated my love and devotion to edward.
sorry for the ending...i just...bella's so easily humiliated (plus something great is going to come out of this, although i can't disclose that yet!)
thanks for reviewing, and i hope you enjoy what's to come!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 25
Oh holy shit! Poor Bella!
Author's Response: yup. eek. poor bella is right!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 25
Another great chapter! Why do I never get sick of Edward's cock talking to him? :)
Author's Response: thank you! i never tire of his cock talking to him either, so...no worries ;)
Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 25
Kinky!! I was cracking up when I read the last few sentences! My husband was like wth are you about to piss your pants over in there?? LOL! Is Daddy Cullen trying to ignore Edward and the marriage questions? Daddy Cullen..yum.
Author's Response: haha--i'm glad you enjoyed my ridiculous chapter. and, no...daddy c isn't ignoring the question, he just didn't have enough time to have a ral conversation about it with edward...but it's coming :) thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 25
That was a fucking awesome chapter!!!!!
Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it ;)
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 25
Another great chapter, and thanks for not having J/E/B threesome. It would be too complicated in this story.
Author's Response: oh, it would be beyond complicated...and let's be honest--this is a comedy, not angsty. that would be outta control crazy.
Reviewer: Draicun (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 25
Love the story!
Author's Response: thanks! i'm so happy to hear that :)
Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 25
Oh poor Jasper, he's in trouble now lol and gotta love Emmett, he always knows the right things to say ;)
Author's Response: yup...jasper's gonna get it...and not in a good way. stay tuned :)
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 25
Oh HELL NO!!! Bella's mortification is going to be way, way to much to bear!!! And Edward's anger? Bet this will having him proposing much sooner than he may have planned.
Seriously, I just got so embarrased I had to stop writing for a minute. Cringe. I guess it's a good thing that Jasper won't be in the band on a permanent basis. Wonder if he's going to let it slip to Alice about what he saw...That's going to be eighteen kinds of ackward if he does...
This story continues to keep me on the edge of my seat! More please...I think....
Author's Response: i know! i got so embarrassed writing it that i almost deleted the entire page and went with something else...however...i thought it was a really funny/ridiculous way to get something to happen...not gonna say what, of course...but stay tuned :)
Reviewer: LoveSunshine (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 25
Uh oh!!! Jasper got caught!!!
Author's Response: he did INDEED.
Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 25
Oh how funny! I'm trying desperately to stiffle my laughter as I'm reading in company.... but it's damn its difficult!
And I'm dreaming of the J/E/moi threesome too!
Author's Response: haha -- i should have put a warning at the top: do not read in public. people may stare. hopefully you didn't make TOO much of a commotion, haha. i'm glad you're enjoying it (and sweet dreams to you!)
Reviewer: Colum (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 25
Great chapter..poor Edward can't get any today, love the diry talk at the bar and Jasper has issues.
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 25
write more sooon
Author's Response: same time next week :) come back for more!
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 25
Aw, man. I can't tell you how disheartening it is to hear that Jasper's not getting in on any kink. Hilarious chapter!
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