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Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 26
=[ You're killing me with all of this cliffies!! But in a really good way.
More soon please!!
Author's Response: hahah, well, if it's in a good way....
more is coming soon :) thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 25
LMFAO That was hilarious! HA HA! I love how Edward freaked and Jasper was like d;lfajdfadsfjpf. Dude. Awesome writing. Can't wait to see them explain that one.
Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it :) and let's be honest...if you were edward, wouldn't you freak too? it's definitely going to be exciting to see how they all react, hehe. thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: camianbu_88 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 25
jajajajajajajajajaja, sooo funny!!! i loved the way you wrote about Bella & the vibrator...very real... i loved it
Author's Response: haha i'm glad you enjoyed it :) although, i somehow don't think bella thought it was too funny ;)
Reviewer: cece (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 25
lol I just read this whole story today and I am in love! I cant wait for more this story is amazing! :)
Author's Response: wow, that's some dedication right there! that's a lot of chapters in one day :) i'm so glad you love it--i love you! more coming up soon, i promise :) stay tuned!
Reviewer: Longing for Edward (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 25
OOOOOOOO! Naughty Bella. Nosy naughty Jasper! But it's all Edward's.
Author's Response: haha, yeah...they're all pretty naughty in this chapter. hope you enjoyed it, though :)
Reviewer: HaYhAy (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 25
dun dun duuuuuuuhhhhh
Author's Response: (queue music). stay tuned!
Reviewer: x0potterfanatic0x55 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 25
Omg i love your story. Its fucking hilarious how Edward talks to his cock!!! Haha well update soon because i cant wait much longer<33
Author's Response: thank you so much! i love YOU for loving my story :) yes, edward talks to his cock...it's pretty awesome. can you imagine if shit like that was real? hahah. updates soon to come, i promise!!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 25
DAMNIT! A CLIFF!!! Update please! :)
Author's Response: you liked it, though...right? more to come soon -- i promise!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 25
oh my god awesome chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. I loved the marriage dream and talk, as well as the way they all reacted to it, especially Carlisle.
I can't wait to see what happens especially withn what Jasper saw, and how embarassed Bella gets, and how posessive Edward can be. Please don't keep us all waiting to long for the next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you! yeah, there was a LOT going on in this chapter. but, i'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless -- then next chapter should be good, too :)
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 25
Please don't make them have a threesome! **Begging** That is the kind of kinky shit reserved to before the marriage talk. Edward and Bella have already had the talk and besides, it would break Alice's heart. No one could handle breaking little Alice's heart. Please don't do it!!!
Author's Response: no threesome -- i promise. they're not about that, haha, seriously.
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 25
Wow....seriously, seriously hot stuff! And actually pretty real life...the joys of roommates...LOL...especially male ones! Okay...can't wait to see Bella brazen herself out of this one...and what about a little smutty peek at Jasper and Alice if the horny little voyeur gets out of there alive...I'm sure he's feeling a bit "inspired"....LOL
Actually I like the idea of a J/E/me threesome the best...(wickedly giggles)
Author's Response: haha, yes -- i have never NOT had roommates...so, i understand the JOYS of having someone being able to walk in on you (...woops). anyway, i totally agree with the j/e/me threesome...although i wouldn't mind a e/e/me threesome either (i'm not particularly picky, haha). thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 24
Marcus' new rule is going to cause problems...and that bitch Lauren is going to do what she does best...being a bitch!
What is around the corner...or next chapter for E&B? And how will Rose & Alice handle their men having to "socialize" with the bar patrons??
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 25
Great chapter! I was worried there at the end that someone had broken into the apartment!! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: nope - no one broke in ... but jasper was definitely an unwanted visitor, haha. thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 25
Great chapter! I was worried there at the end that someone had broken into the apartment!! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 25
Great chapter! I was worried there at the end that someone had broken into the apartment!! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 25
Great chapter! I was worried there at the end that someone had broken into the apartment!! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 25
Great chapter! I was worried there at the end that someone had broken into the apartment!! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 25
Oh my GOD... dude I am so embarrassed FOR Bella. I swear to gawd... I think I just turned about ten shades of red. Fucking Jasper. LMAO!
Author's Response: yeah....i actually turned red with embarrassment while writing it...i wasn'tsure if i was actually going to let it happen, but...well...you know what i ended up doing, haha. ohhh jasper. he's got a mind of his own ;)
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 25
At the begining you said humilliating, and yes it got to it, thankfully at the end. Poor Bella she will be red for months to come after this. What will the guys tell her? Will they accept they were watching? Edward has the right to it yes. but Jasper? What is going on there?
How upset, or angry will Bella be?
Something else important in this chapter, Carlisle's reaction to Edward's question about marriage, that was a shock for him, a big shock. How long will it take him to answer?
About lending them the money for the demo, he is a great dad, and of course he will gladly do it.
Author's Response: hahah yeah, it was DEFINITELY humiliating...hahah. they definitely have a lot to discuss in the next chapter :) thanks for reviewing, per usual!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 25
Oh boy...AWKWARD! lol:D Loved this chapter! Hope you'll update soon! :):)
Author's Response: my best friend always jokes that i thrive off of awkward....apparently i do. this chapter had such a ridiculously positive response, haha. thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 25
wow i have really enjoyed your story so far! I look forward to seeing what happens next..
Author's Response: thank you so much! you're too sweet :) i hope you continue to enjoy what's to come!
Reviewer: bridesmaid (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 25
Wahaha! That was an epic! Jasper? What the fuck! Hahaha :)
Author's Response: haha -- is that a good thing? i hope so :)
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 25
ha ha to naughty
Author's Response: (evil laugh). oops. ;) thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 25
I am actually so relieved and happy that a J/E/B threesome will never happen in this story cause if it did I would have to get in the computer and whoop that lucky bitch's ass. I mean really, she's already getting all kinds of hot, kinky sex with Edward. That's enough right there to make me jealous. :D
I loved that poor Jasper never gets any kinky sex, lol. Also really cute that Edward told him that Bella had a crush on him, though I don't think that Bella would think any part of that particular conversation was enjoyable. And I'm really not sure that she's ever gonna be able to look Jasper in the eye again, but then again maybe I am underestimating our girl, lol.
"Life makes me horny" Best chapter line by far~! Is is sad that I can understand where the poor guy is coming from? Lol.
Loved the wedding talk. It was soo sweet. As was Edward and Alice having a little sibling bonding time, even though Alice ratted his ass out right afterward.
And Edward's phone conversation with Carlisle was too funny. Of course though, just about any scene with Carlisle in this story tends to make me giggle.
Loved the chapter....looking forward to more....wishing I had an AMF myself right now! :D
Author's Response: hahah -- glad to know that you're okay with my decision to never have a j/e/b threesome in this story...it just would be..ugh...wrong. although, i was thinking about doing a sort of "fantasy" outtake if you will. and, yes, i couldn't truly say goodbye to carlisle. i just missed him so much. i think he'll probably be making a few more appearances -- i can't let him go :) glad you enjoyed...and thanks for your review, as always!
Reviewer: evisme217 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 25
WHOA... surprising! Damn the cliffy! Still nice, but... whoa!
Author's Response: haha, yeah, it kind of surprised me too...but then i just went with it :) glad you enjoyed it, though!
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