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Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 26
yeah, it made sense if you're EVIL
Author's Response: *runs and hides* i'm sorry :( --but...more coming soon....yay?
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 26
Cracked UP when Lauren suggested he pee on her! That's such a guy thing. 8)
Your Carlisle is such a dirty bastard - I knew he had it in him!! (hehe, now if only I could have him in ME....dayum.) If I were Bella, I'd go for the threesome with Carlisle!!!
So....is the guy in Marcus' office a recording guy?????? huh????
Thanks for the update! Please let Edward pop a nut soon or his testicles might burst into flames!! (although that would be quite the stage show, no??)
;)
Author's Response: hahahah---is it wrong that i'd have a threesome with carlisle, too? unfortunately, that's just not going to happen, though, haha. and, ugh, you guys are too smart for me. i literally can't pull anything past you, haha. thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: chaser1000 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 26
Oh shit , another cliffie!!! Another great chapter, can't wait to find out who it is in Marcus's office.
Author's Response: sorry--but, hopefully it's worth the wait! thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 26
Wonder who was waiting in Felix's office? But I bet that was your plan!
Continue to just completely love this story. Poor Edward- have not read so much cock-blocking ever! Nice that he has noble intentions for Bella- but Carlisle- lordy, but he has a seriously dirty mind...don't we just love it though!
It's a good thing they are getting their own apartment- it should save them from Jasper accidently peeping and Emmett's remarks (well from a few of them anyway).
Ready for more when you have it. Terribly sorry about the homeless thing. Glad the situation has resolved itself.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 26
Hey, another cliffy, you are so mean!!!! But I love it....
Author's Response: hahah--i'm glad you love it :) sorry for being mean. i'll try and stop it....nah, who am i kidding? apologies in advance for any future meanness that may occur ;)
Author's Response: hahah--i'm glad you love it :) sorry for being mean. i'll try and stop it....nah, who am i kidding? apologies in advance for any future meanness that may occur ;)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 26
can't wait for more
Author's Response: glad to hear that :)
Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 26
Damn those cliffies! I really hope you'll update soon.
I loved (loved!) Jasper and Alice's little musical preformance, hillarious!
Author's Response: sorry! more on the way :) and, yes--who doesn't love a little rick springfield?
Reviewer: lil leelee (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 26
oo oo is it like a record dealer or summit ??
loving the story, edward needs to calm down on the jealousy abit she asked him to move it with her!! lol
cant wait for the update
xx
Author's Response: you're just too smart for me :)
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 26
EVIL CLIFFILE, EVVVVVIIIIILLLLLL!! good stry though....jazz is such a dick, but it was funny. I love how you still incorperate the nickname 'bunny' i loooooove it. i now call my boyfriend bunny :D. great story btw...., did i alreaady say that??
UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!
:D
Author's Response: haha - i love the nickname bunny, and i'm glad you've adopted it, too :) thanks for reviewing, and sorry for the cliffie!
Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 26
Yay! Feels like forever since you posted! Please don't wait so long to post the next chapter!
Author's Response: i know, i'm so sorry! validation seems to be taking forever these days for some reason. but...i've already put the next chapter in for validation, so it should be up shortly :)
Reviewer: belami (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 26
Love this story.
That Felix character seems a bit dodgy.
Hope you post next install soon.
Author's Response: hahah felix is a bit dodgy, isn't he. ps-i love that adjective. i'm definitely going to have to use it more often :)
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 26
uh,oh....What the hell is happening now then??Please update very fast..youseriously can't leave us hanging like this.. Great chapter.. ;D
Author's Response: sorry for the cliffie--seriously, it wasn't meant to take so long for the next chapter to come out...validation has been a bit slow recently, but....more is coming soon! thanks for reviewing, as always :)
Reviewer: Cosmos (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 26
ha ha nice work love the sing, whose in the office you tease you, update soon
Author's Response: i'm a tease? well...yeah, i guess i am ;) thanks for reviewing...more is on the way!
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 26
Poor Bella ~ guess she just forgets that Jasper is "just a guy"....LOL...curious, little pervy things that they are....(wink, wink). I love the little bit at the end of the chapter where Edward is feeling a little insecure and jealous.....so very real.
I LOVE Carlisle...and the way that he and Bella have a mutual admiration society of one another's hotness. The way you write it it's funny not creepy. Hey...how about a Jasper/Alice outtake of when he tells her about what happened with Bella...I bet you'd make that seriously hot and funny as hell. As always loving this story....looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: haha...i'm so glad that you enjoy carlisle :) a bunch of people are really creeped out by him, but im glad that you get that it's all meant as a joke! and, thank you for your review -- you're so sweet!
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 26
Thanks for the new chapter but I realy hate the cliff... even if I like the chapter and how bella put lauren on her place XD
Author's Response: sorry bout the cliffie (runs and hides), but i'm glad you still enjoyed bella telling off lauren :)
Reviewer: jenteal88 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 26
I love this whole Felix thing :)
Author's Response: i hope you continue to enjoy it in the next chapter :)
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 17
Yay! They have finally been found out. Is Alice going to be nice about it or will she hold it over their heads?
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 26
Ugh, another cliffie? Damnit. Oh, well, I do that too. Sigh.
Author's Response: sorry! i know, it's rough, but i honestly thought my next chapter would be validated by now! ...hopefully you'll have the next part soon :)
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 15
You made very nice lemonade...especially for your first time, Edward was so sweet, It was cute how you made both Cullen brothers tell B that they love her.
As much of an ass Jake is, I am happy for the voicemail. It will help Bella move on.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 26
Awesome chapter love the story and am waiting for more
Author's Response: thank you so much :)
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 11
Jake is such an ass! I'm just glad Bella put a stop to everything so that she could run back to edward and be his...forever!
Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 26
OK
Edward expected the Meeting with Marcus to be unpleasant. 'This day was getting too good to have it not be ruined by something, right?'
Then, he says it was so not what he thought it would be ... so good,m right?
I'm glad Jasper didn't see anything. I'm excited they are moving in together. Carlilse's story was great.
Awesome job lady!
Author's Response: you are sooo smart ;) ...and i'll just leave it at that! and, i'm glad you enjoyed carlisle's story...i thought it was kind of funny. thanks bunches!!
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 26
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks, hun :)
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 8
I couldn;t have came up with a better (or grosser) idea to get Bella in Edward's bed myself. Used condom in bed is disgusting.
I'm glad Edward was able to chase James away. I hope he stays away!
I am really looking forward to reading bpov.
Reviewer: brooke (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 26
An excellent, funny chapter once again, but it's killing me that you stopped there.
Your Carlisle is so fucking awesome! I can't think of anyone who's ever written him in a way I enjoyed more, he's my absolute favorite. Now that I'm thinking about it, your Edward's also my favorite and your Bella's very high up on the list. And Emmett is also great. So basically you're just all around full of awesome.
And I love what Bella said to Lauren, it was perfect.
Author's Response: sorry about stopping there...but it would have been wayyy too long had i kept going...andthe next chapter is taking long enough to validate as it is! apparently i'm incapable of writing short chapters anymore...so that's good, right?
and i'm sooo glad that you love carlisle - a lot of readers are turned off by him, but i'm glad that you get that he's just joking about everything :) funny...not creepy, right? and AH, that's the most flattering review EVER that you love my edward and carlisle best. that's kind of ridiculous....ridiculously AMAZING.
thanks for the awesome review :)
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