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Reviewer: sabr101 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 26
good story please keep writing see how many people are waiting for more?
Author's Response: aw, thank you so much for that -- no worries...my chapter was submit last week for validation...i'm just waiting on the busy busy validators to let it go through :) hopefully it'll be up later today?
and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 26
you have to update soon!
Author's Response: i already sent in the chapter for validation :) hopefully it should be up today!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 26
Well, Damn, I have no idea who is in Marcus' office........I'm surprised Edward is feeling so insecure about Felix.
Author's Response: haha, good? and...yeah, edward's insecurity took my by suprise, too -- especially since they just hashed out living together. i guess some habits die hard, huh?
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 26
Yeah, you are getting pretty bad with those cliffies, lol. Of course though, I have to admit they are awesome at inducing impatience for new chapters.
Loved the beginning. Poor Jazz. Zero awkwardness....*snorts* yeah right. ;D I knew then that that scenario probably wouldn't quite be the case.
I was really happy that Edward told Bella what he and Jasper had talked about and that Bella didn't get pissed about it. It didn't really surprise me that she wasn't mad though. I just can't picture her as the type to get all pissed and not speak to Edward because he was bragging about their awesome sex life. Shit, I know if it was me I'd be right there beside him bragging away. :D
And they're moving in together! Yay! They need to. Seriously. ;) Even though I did love cockblocking Emmett.
Edward's conversation with Carlisle was awesome! I loved Carlisle and Esme's story and that Carlisle is anxious to have a hot daughter-in-law. Gawd, I just love that pervy old man. :)
Loved Alice and Jasper's method for breaking the ice at the club. Hilarious.
And Felix....hmmm. That could turn into an interesting situation. Then again it could also turn into an opportunity for JealousWard to have some hot lovin' claiming his woman. Either way, should be fun to read!
Thanks for another amazing chapter! Hope things keep looking up for ya!
Author's Response: hahaha, please -- if i was actually having all that kinky sex with edward, i'm positive i'd be telling everyone about it. and, yeah, i still can't seem to say goodbye to carlisle...although i think he'll be on the back burner for the next few chapters...because there' a LOT about to happen (evil smirk!). thanks for reviewing, as always -- and hope you enjoy what's to come!
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 26
WHO COULD BE NOWWWW
Author's Response: apologies for the cliff hanger...next chapter should be up momentarily :)
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 25
OMG !!!!!! THATS AWFUL OMG
Reviewer: a_rainy_day (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 26
Oh yeah - p.s. I've been feelin' sorry for Edward's penis these last two chapters. It needs to get some.
Author's Response: haha, i have too. no worries--good things come to those who wait?
Reviewer: a_rainy_day (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 26
I don't have much to say except thumbs up, mama. :)
Reviewer: llg5437 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 9
heehehe Edward's so sweet.... texting Bella at night :)
Reviewer: llg5437 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 8
Sweetward?? :D
Reviewer: camianbu_88 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 26
great great great great story!, I love it
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Reviewer: arabelladarkin (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 26
I like Carlisle even more now - didn't think that was possible!
Anxious to see who the other guy in Marcus's office is and what the meeting is about. Can't wait for the next post. Oh - and congrats on your job - sounds awesome!
Author's Response: haha, i'm glad! i love carlisle, too--i just can't seem to say goodbye to him! and the next post should be up momentarily :) thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 26
Ok, I have just fineished after 2 whole days reading... and I must abmit I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The way that Jake is a jackass is AWESOME!!!!!! ( u can get that I am Team Edward.... I mean it's sooo obvious when you get to know me.... and I am afraid u will)
The new Carlisle is just too good for words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He is like the best daddy (atleast for boys...)
Now Bella is so different and yet soooooo similar to the one that SM has created (and I think yours is more close to reality actually.....)
and last but not least
EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He is so amazing! U have caught the way he thinks and his insecurities!!!! Also you pictured being a player sooo much better than other stories!!!!!!
PS: I HATE CLIFFIES!!!!!!
PS2: I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: um, first of all - you're awesome for catching up in like record time, haha. and, i'm so glad you're enjoying my characters, despite how ooc they are! thanks for reviewing, and i hope you continue to enjoy what's to come ;)
Reviewer: starbubbles (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 7
So I really liked the chapter, but I think my favorite part was your disclaimer: "Per usual, they're not mine...I just like to play barbie with them".
That just made my day.
Reviewer: kursten masen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 6
looks like i'll be adding more songs tonight on my ipod! u really gave adouble treat thanks!
Reviewer: kursten masen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 5
Gosh your really good!!! i told myself i'll just read 2 chapters tonight and go to bed but your writing is so engrossing i can't stop! By the way i got a hold of your fan fic thru the indie awards nominations... hope you win!!!
Author's Response: wow, that's so great to hear -- thank you so much! i'm glad you're enjoying the story -- and thanks so much again for all the good wishes when it comes to the indies :) you're too sweet!
Reviewer: kursten masen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 3
lovin the slutty couple!
Reviewer: missam908 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 26
Well I just started this story last night and it is amazing. I read through the night to get finished with it before I leave for Twicon tomorrow. These 2 are kinda like me and my hubby and I love your Lemmons. My hubby likes when I come to bed at night and its so funny because he says you have been reading Twilighted havent you. That is too funny. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: wow, thank you so much! ...tell your husband your welcome, from me, haha...and have tons of fun at twicon :)
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 26
Oh that's not right leaving us again with another cliffhanger! Oh man!!! Post more soon!
Author's Response: sorry, sorry, sorry! the chapter was getting to be over 20 pages long....so....i split it up. the next chapter should be up as we speak, though :) thanks for reviewing, per usual!
Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 26
i love this story, but the Carlise buisness in regards to Bella is a complete TURN OFF - sorry.....that's his son's girlfriend and he is married....
some people seem to like it - but it's just disturbing....
Author's Response: sorry you're not a carlisle fan....i come from a super ridiculous family where inappropriate jokes are welcomed, and i know that's not for everyone. lucky for you, carlisle won't be making an appearance in the next few chapters, but i hope you continue to enjoy everything else! and thanks for letting me know how you feel :)
Reviewer: mychemfan78 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 15
HOT HOT HOT!
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ok Off Limits is AMAZING! Edward's inner monologue totally reminds me of Scrubs. Your sense of humor is hilarious and just perfect for your story. Looking forward to finishing your story. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: haha, thank you so much! i never thought about the inner monologue in those terms, but...now that you mention it...yeah, it is a little bit JD-esque, right? i'm so glad you're enjoying the story - and thanks for reviewing, too! i'm glad that people out there get my ridiculous sense of humor ;)
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 26
Oh no! Don't leave a cliffie like that. Who is in the office? Why is Edward so shocked?
Oh and I had to LMAO at the Rick Springfield Jessie's girl changed to Edward's girl. ;)
Author's Response: apologies for the cliffie - more is coming REALLY SOON. edward's shock will be explained...i promise :) thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 26
I love that Carlisle is a little inappropriate. Its funny. So I started to read this yesterday and am kinda bummed that this is the chapter it ended at b/c I haven't had to endure a cliffie yet. And now I'm stuck in limbo waiting to see who is in that skeeze's office. In case I haven't said it, I love this story.
Author's Response: aw, apologies for the cliffie -- but imagine the people who had to edure the cliffies before you...haha. the next chapter should be up today or tomorrow, though, so....it's coming soon! also, im glad you love carlisle. i love him, too. hope you enjoy what's to come, and thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: bloodsuckers21 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 26
hey this is a great story and i cant wait to read more of it! i love this story because you really captured all the emotions of all the characters in it! you also made it very sexy and hot. coodoos to u! btw i love how you made bella a little bit more confident. but i do have some questions so here they are: is there a james or victoria in the story?? will bella ever have a rensemee??(sorry if i spelled that wrong) and last but not least will lauren get edward drunk and take advantage of him and create drama into the realationship of bella and edward??(of course i do belive that bella and edward belong together so if lauren does do something naughty i hope that bella and edward will make up for it!!) ps a freind of mine asks "will bella sleep with carlise?" hahaha yea shes inapropriete like that. sorry. keep up the fantastic job and hope to hear more of this juicy story!
Author's Response: okay, funniest review ever, possibly. no...bella and carlisle will never sleep together, haha. there won't be a renesmee...i think. and, james has already made a brief appearance (see chapter 7), but i don't think there will be a victoria. thanks for the review--and i'm glad you're loving it!!!
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