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Reviewer: Irritable_Grizzzly (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 27
Lovely! I am entranced by your story.
I love the twists and turns and I know I keep saying it, but I love that you've avoided all the cliches, going all the way back to not having Edward be all player-y to throw his bandmates off the scent.
Excellent work with telling Marcus where he could shove it!
Edward met his idol AND got his groove on! I'd say you made it up to the poor boy.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: wow, thank you so much. that was honestly my goal at the beginning of all of this, so it's really great to hear that you feel like i've avoided the cliches. i just wrote the epilogue, and i'm pretty sure i've avoided the cliches there, too (i guess you'll let me know when the time comes, eh?)
thanks again for your reviews...i love em.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 27
The Felix twist was hilarious. Great chapter.
Author's Response: glad you approve :)
Reviewer: Cosmos (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 27
Great chapter, really like that Edward is so supportive of Bella even though it looks shes going to get her break and he might not. Only 5 chapters to go - nooo
Author's Response: edward is pretty baller....in everything he does....and, yes, all good things must come to an end :) but thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 27
Awww, such a great chappie. I so loved Edward going all fanboy. Too funny.
I am happy that things seem to be working themselves out so nicely for them. Everything is falling in place.
Great update.
Author's Response: i may or may not have based the fanboy stuff on myself.....hahaha. thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 27
i was really worried about who was in the office last chapter... i'm glad they didn't seem too bad... i just hope they let edward sign along with bella... also i really like the idea of bella having her own website...very funny =] keep writing
Author's Response: thank you, i definitely am!
Reviewer: clumsy brunette (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 27
i luv this story..will u be doin a sequel??
xxx
Author's Response: i'm so glad you love the story, but...i don't think i'll be doing a sequel. i just started writing a whole new different story, though...so be on the lookout for it :)
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 27
I will be sorry to see the end of this story, But I just love what you have done with the characters and storyline, and it feels as though everything is starting to come to a head for the characters, as they get ready to take their lives and relationshipd onto the next step. I hope the remaining chapters bring only good things for Edward and Bella, because their emotional connection and strength of their relationship just shines in every chapter, and it's only getting better.
I can't wait to see what happens next, even if it does bring us one step closer to the end, I get a feeling the lable will love Edwards songs and fingeres crossed and holding my breath that they let Bella and Edward work together. Please don't keep us waiting to long for th next chapter.
Author's Response: good things are definitely on the way :) good and funny things, haha. i hope, at least. next chapter coming up soon!
Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 27
Great chapter, and I love'd that poor Edward FINALLY got some!
Author's Response: finally, i know, haha. thank you!
Reviewer: ariateh (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 27
that was a really sweet end to a funny chapter
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 27
I AM!!!!
herrrrrm. i DO NOT want them to split. Bad things will happen >:( But, rather, they go together no matter what and he is EXTREMELY jealous and then Bella keeps calling Edward 'bunny' in public :D. yeeeeaaaah.....that's it :D
keep up the good work. i REALLY enjoyed the chappie!!
Author's Response: no worries, i believe in happy endings so...there will be no split...i can promise you that one ;) and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 27
Very well done, I like that Bella came first and Edward was good with it.
Author's Response: there are far too few stories where bella is more successful than edward...that's all i'm saying ;) and thank you!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 27
great chapter! update soon!
Author's Response: thank you! absolutely :)
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 27
You have this incredible gift of making things super romantic, but yet funny as hell all at the same time. I love it! :D
Edward's fan boy moment totally melted my heart. However, I have noticed that he really often either thinks of himself as a young boy or a female, lol. So I've psychoanalyzed his past behavior and realized that his previous whoring ways were just a way to compensate his inner child/female, but now that he's found true love he is able to embrace the parts of himself that he did have closed off. Hehe, did that make any sense? It's 3am here, btw, just sayin'. ;)
Loved that Bel has got a chance at a record deal and that she has her own fan site. How cool is that! And of course, our favorite perv was really excited by the website. I'm sure that the only reason he hadn't run across it himself is that he really hasn't had to spend anytime away from Bella so far. Otherwise, I'd totally bet that he'd be Googling her. Since he's owned. ;D
Felix....OMG! LOVED that! Edward's all jealous and I'm wondering how the hell Bella is thinking that grinding with another guy is an okay thing to do, and then we meet Alec, hehehe. I so love that you made big hulking Felix gay. It's just wonderful. Also really enjoyed Bella and Rose dancing with each other. I bet that gave Edward some images for the spank bank. ;P
Loved the apartment. Loved Bree. You have the most interesting takes on other characters. Can't wait for E & B to get moved in, but I bet I'm nowhere near as impatient for that as Emmett. Poor guy. However, he can't say that Edward didn't warn him. I'm sure next time he sees those two even seeming like they might be heading towards the bedroom, he'll be heading towards the door. That said, I, personally, very much appreciated the lemon.
Also loved Bella getting the best of Marcus and quitting for the band. Asshole trying to act as their manager! Please! He deserved to be made look like a fool, though he really didn't need much help.
As always loved it, and eager for more!
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 27
Thanks for the update ^^ realy sweet end and no cliff ^^ I'm happy ^^
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 27
I love this chapter and that Bella will be loyal to Edward--hopefully the label won't try to mess things up between them. I'm happy they are quitting the club and shut out Marcus...So happy they are getting an apartment together!!
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Totally curious: In your banner, if Rob horizontally flipped for reason or is he left-handed? My guy friend is left-handed and plays around with it switched like how Rob has it in the banner, but when he plays, he still plays the "traditional" way... Do you know which is which for Rob in your banner?
Author's Response: just looked it up for you - and, yes, the image is flipped. but, i am a leftie guitar player and i play it like in the pic....soooo we can pretend that my edward is left handed, hence, awesome :)
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 27
I do wonder what they'll be called... Belledward! Hahahaha. Totally kidding. That was pretty retarded - forgive me.
I love this story! Concert, fans, and lots of lovin' to be had? = ]
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 27
I think Jonathan was definitely interested in both of them...and the songs. Hope the meeting is a big win!
Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 27
I'm hoping that the record company is open to the idea of Bella and Edward, not just Bella. I get the impression that this record label is more interested in the artistic talent as opposed to someone they manufacture into a star. Which is a good thing. One thing I would like to see by the end of the story is a marrige proposal. Which I'm already assuming is going to happen. You wouldn't hint at something like that and then not do it... Right???
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 27
MUCH better :) Yay for Bellas Big Break! Trips Bs! This is going fabulously well... too well. Should I be worried? Loved it!
Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 27
Okay well I definately want an Epilogue that has a happily married Edward and Bella with little musical prodigy babies running around. I loved their apartment, it sounded so amazing. Of course they label will have to take them both, one doesn't work without the other. I could see them trying to snowblow Bella, but Edward won't let that happen. I think they need to do this together, become successful, having a sweet proposal that will make me all mushy inside, a beautiful wedding that has humor at the reception, because with Daddy C. and Em around...chyeah. Then have like, fraternal twins, a boy and girl. Ya know, the perfect happily ever after.
What can I say, I'm a hopeless romantic. I could have said have Bella die in a plane crash and have Edward fall madly in love with a girl named Sarah a few years later...but I digress.
Amazing as always. Was this fic nominated for an indie? I could have sworn it was...maybe I'm getting my voting mixed up. You seem to have too many reviews for an indie...but that just shows you how awesome you are. This story is so WIN.
Please pardon the less than eloquent review, I've been up for 36 hours with a sick 2 year old. I'm loopy.
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 27
I hope they do like Edward's music. At least he and Bella already had a plan to record so that no one would think that he was just riding her coat tails. Because if the label is just wanting her to be some pop star instead of a rocker, that would be miserable for both of them. I cannot wait to see what you have in mind for them.
Is Bree going to be a problem? Will Bella go on tour and then start to get jealous of Bree being so close to Edward? Ok, maybe those are my insecurities dripping out...don't let Edward stray please.
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 27
I want to see the happy couple get their recording deal together and...perhaps a ring???
Oh and that bitch Lauren and her asshole boyfriend needs to get what's coming to them.
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 27
wow, would it be ironic for something bad to happen in that relationship because of Edward's insecurities? no, i don't think so. Hopefully everything works out. I'm not too good at reviews, but this story is one of my favorites and the lemons are written very well.
Reviewer: SDDoo (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 27
I love the Edward's the supportive boyfriend, and not feeling jealous that his idol was interested in Bella. Both Edward and Bella have come a long way, so it's sad to hear the story's coming up on the end. I understand it though - you had a story to tell and you're just about done with it. I appreciate that you aren't dragging it out, because that takes away from the story. Anyway, thanks for not leaving us with another cliffie!
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