Poor Edward :(

Although i do have to say that I'm a Bella and Edward supporter so to read how he felt about Angela is kinda odd and weird.

He's supposed to Feel something Stronger with Bella, ya kno?

Not that im knocking your storyline, cuz its good.
I just have a hard time when it's Edward and someone else.
He's supposed to have this connection with Bella that overpowers everything else he has EVER come across, no one else can compare.

You still did an awesome job with describing both of their pain.
B's from E's rejection and E's pain from losing his wife and child.

Author's Response:

I know what you mean. But the reason I chose Angela as his wife is because I wanted to save myself the trouble of creating a new character. And, besides I don't think people would have wanted to see Jessica Stanley as his wife. So having no other option, I chose Angela.

Thank you so much for liking this story...:)

I know what you mean about Alice being different. I like a lot her originality :D I especially liked how she dressed differently to get people's reaction.

And I love E/B interaction, it may not be much, time-wise, but it's real, it's natural. They can't get together at first glance, especially now, that we've learnt what a tortured soul Edward is. I support and respect your authorness :P all the way!! :D

Can't wait for next chap!!! :D Thanx for the response also!! :D

Oh, my! I knew the story was tragic... yet... still... it saddens me so much :( Poor Edward, poor broken soul... the question that strikes me the most is.. will Bella be able to rescue him? to put back the pieces? make him whole? will he let her??

You know? I think you gave us a mini-cliffie... not a total cliffhanger... cos the story was told... but ... the reactions ... I want the reactions!! I want what happens next!! :P

Can't wait for more... I really really can't :P It was funny to see Em/R interaction :P They're always a funny pair... I'm still rooting for a Jasper appearance... I cannot concieve Alice without Jasper :P

Thanx :D

PS: I'll post my review here instead of ff.net cos you updated here first ;) (over there I'm Mariana75 BTW)

Author's Response:

Yes I do recognize you from fanfiction.net. I am so glad you liked this chapter.

As for Jasper, I haven't thought much about Alice's love life here. Besides, she's different from other Alices, so it will take her a tremendous amount of time and effort to really like someone. If I focus on her, the story might shift from ExB, and I don't want that because some readers have already complained about the lack of interaction between them. I'll think about it, though.

Look out for the next chapter, I hope you'll like that one too. And thanks for the review!

Whoosh!! The air just left my lungs!  Poor Bella! 

Hurry the next chapter along, she needs some balm on her wounds.  (Me, too.)

Am I the only one whose every last chapter is the 'new' one? It's like this for me on FF, too. Really hard for me to continue with this story this way.

Fireworks on Guy Fawkes Night count as sparks, darling!  Well done.  Keep it coming.

oh he so wants her

What happend to Edward... Why is he so sad... I think it was too soon for sparks... just my $0.02

Love opposite Alice!

Your story is great, I like it very much!

Hi, I've just found your story. And I must say it's really interesting how you're playing it out, cos it's mostly non-canon (apart from the couples and not being there any vampires). I like the way you write, your ideas. And even though I generally don't like stories that are so off-script (from the books) I'm fascinated by yours ;)

I love their interaction, and how you're playing the build-up. Love the fact that they're still at the getting to know the other stage. I'm fearing for Carlisle :S Where is he??!! :(

I must be honest and say that there's room to improve, especially dialogue-wise, I think you're doing a terrific job for a first fic and I'm really liking where this is all going :D So I can't for more!!

One other thing, you apologise too much ;) It's your story, so stick with your creativity juices, so far you are doing great!!

Author's Response:

Aww, that's so sweet! That's one of the nicest comments I've recieved so far.Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and I am really glad that you liked it so much. Readers like you motivate me to write better!

As for Carlisle, his part will be revealed soon. But I can't promise you that he will be a major character here, even though Carlisle and Emmett are my two most favourite characters.

Thanks again for the lovely comment!

awww. i cant wait until the next chapter please update soon :)