Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 26: Awake And Alive
I love that Alice is making Bella act like a grown-up and that Edward totally owns her. You'd better follow this up quickly, I think Bella and Edward might spontaneously combust if you don't!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 26: Awake And Alive
can't wait for more
Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: Awake And Alive
Thank you for the update. I just love this story!
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 25: To Make You Feel My Love
i am loving this. i love feisty alice, i love rose being in the background. i want more please.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 25: To Make You Feel My Love
First, there is no such thing as settling for a martini. They are top notch, not a compromise. :)
Second, your Jasper is as swoon-worthy as Edward. You should feel no guilt for saturating as many chapters as you so desire with Alice and Jasper. Their interaction was great. I can't wait to see how soon Bella follows Alice's advice!!!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 25: To Make You Feel My Love
First, there is no such thing as settling for a martini. They are top notch, not a compromise. :)
Second, your Jasper is as swoon-worthy as Edward. You should feel no guilt for saturating as many chapters as you so desire with Alice and Jasper. Their interaction was great. I can't wait to see how soon Bella follows Alice's advice!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for loving my Jasper. He hadn't affected me in the way the other Cullen men had, so I was a bit skeptical about writing his character. As for the martini comment, I am going to take your word on that! lol..
Thanks for reading and reviewing...reviews like yours inspire me a lot...:)
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 25: To Make You Feel My Love
First, there is no such thing as settling for a martini. They are top notch, not a compromise. :)
Second, your Jasper is as swoon-worthy as Edward. You should feel no guilt for saturating as many chapters as you so desire with Alice and Jasper. Their interaction was great. I can't wait to see how soon Bella follows Alice's advice!!!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 25: To Make You Feel My Love
can't wait for more
Reviewer: mcnavy (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: Everybody's Fool
Where is the brown eyes, why does she have to be average looking? Bella has to have brown eyes
Author's Response: If you've read Midnight Sun, then you would know that at first Edward thought that she was very plain-looking...
As for her eye colour, I'm going a bit OOC in here...
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 24: Eyelash Wishes
O he's going to go all Emo yet again! Someone smack him.
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 24: Eyelash Wishes
can't wait for more
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 24: Eyelash Wishes
Woohoo!! An honest-to-goodness kiss!!! They better get over themselves and TALK about it. Aaarrggh.
Update soon!!
Reviewer: MsTwiSwe (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 23: Spellbound
Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 23: Spellbound
That was beautiful. Bella makes him act so normal. Keep it coming!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 6: Falling Inside The Black
LOL Alice NOT fashion savy...dear lord you are shakin things up...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 5: Everybody's Fool
*gasp* four years since what?
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Sun Goes Down
Wow the editor-in-chief is definatly a piece of work...I can't wait to see what comes next
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 3:Happy Working Song
Bella's boss sounds like my kind of guy and really who would want to survive on grass...yuck. Don't get me wrong I love salad buy I also love me my red meat.
Author's Response: Lol! I know what you mean..I am not a huge fan of going all veggie either...ha ha ha...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 2:Dreamworld
Well hot damn it's about time some people change the fact that Bella is an English major. I'm a science majoy myself with two degrees one in biology and molecular biology so it's nice to see another science major even if I'm only just reading about it. LOL... seems like we science majors are few in number
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for all your reviews! Very few readers actually review every chapter and thanks for being one of them. Letting us, the writers know about your thoughts is very helpful and it inspires us to write better. I am a science student too (in case it isn't obvious from my pen name..lol) and I am planning to pick a science major when I go to college next year. Wow two degrees sounds very impressive, though.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 23: Spellbound
great chapter
Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 23: Spellbound
I love this story please post again soon
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 23: Spellbound
That was beautiful bb :D
Are you planning on getting them together soon?
It seems like he's starting to feel more for her, and we already know that she basically loves him.
So maybe you wanna do a little time jump, and so where things go?
That was a big step, him playing the violin again.
And he obviously notices Her more now, esp after her dress rode up a bit, he was able to see Bella as a beautiful woman.
Author's Response: Well, that's the goal of every ExB story, isn't it? Getting them together? But we all know how stubborn Edward is and Bella just doesn't see the appeal in herself so the two still need to work out a lot of issues together...
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I don't mean to sound partial but I always keep looking forward to the reviews of my regular reviewers..:)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 23: Spellbound
can't wait for more
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 22: You Remind Me Of Home
Great chap!
Improvement in Edward's behavior and his moods *yay*
OOh was he looking at her lips?? LOL
can't wait for more :D
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 22: You Remind Me Of Home
Great chap!
Improvement in Edward's behavior and his moods *yay*
OOh was he looking at her lips?? LOL
can't wait for more :D
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