This was short but sweet! Love that Bella has finally met Alice. I hope that they get to be great friends! Wonderful as always. Everyone always writes about Alice loving dresses, makeup, and all of that girly stuff. So this is like a nice change of the old Alice. Somebody doing something new!

“I would rather go to a Fall Out Boy concert than spend time or money on my looks.”

 

hahaha i missed the italized bit the first time I read that sentence and was mildly appalled.

hooray for updates. awesome chapter.. im glad bella and alice will be friends...that said with this new alice who will help edward brainstorm?? oh dear

omg thats so funny!

i laughed my butt off when it said fall out boy concert because i recently went to one and it was shocking lol!

:) cant wait until the next chapter please hurry :)

Awesome to see Alice.  Can't wait for her to run into Bella....

Edward needs a night out.  Bella probably does too.

I know this sounds like the beginning of a phone sex call, but what is David wearing? (It's a fashion mag, that'e a totally relevant question)  Eric criticized his style, what's it like?

Keep it up, I like your start.

Author's Response:

David is your regular 'womanizer', who approves of the usual business suits and shirts. Eric, like other designers had a random phase where he had a thing for feathers on business suits (I think I had mentioned this detail). So, David being the sensible boss that he is, obviously rejected Eric's designs. Eric felt humuliated and concluded that David has no fashion sense since he disapproved of his ideas.

and no it doesn't sound like the beginning of a phone sex call.lol!

Thanks for reading, and if it makes it easier for you I will try and mention what he wears in upcoming chapters.

Also thanks for your question. It's good to know what the readers are thinking.

Send in Edward.  Nice start.

please update soon i cant wait to see what happens next! =)

how come Bella is described as not being pretty? and why are her eyes grey?

Author's Response:

If you've read 'Midnight Sun' you'll remember Edward saw her as plain and ordinary at first.

Also Bella's eyes are grey because this story is completely isolated from the Twilight universe. Just like everyone else are humans, and the fact they don't live in Forks, I changed this little bit about Bella. 

So... is this the Devil wears Prada mixed with that other school movie...oh well.  Interesting take and more plz.

no edward?

Great story so far, it's funny to read a story with different character names and a story where Bella isn't like she always is, this is definitely refreshing. :) So I'm looking forward to reading on. It really looks promising so far. :)

p.s. you are so sweet and awesome to that readers personally!

can't wait to read more!