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Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Edward's Room

What I really loved about this chapter was the dialogue. The way that you articulated their hesitancy through pauses and such, it felt very IC to me. I also thought it was very sensual when he was unbuttoning her wedding dress. It was a lovely image.

Don't ask me why, but the line that I heard most clearly in my head while reading was, "Promise me, Bella. I need to know you know.” That line just really hit home with me.

On to read the next chapter . . .

Reviewer: dsfq (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

LOVE it!!!

More please . . .

Reviewer: dsfq (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Edward's Room

Thank you! I like it!

Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Edward's Room

I liked some of the details of this story- the almost 'oops' with the candle, their nervousness, etc..

Thank you for another window into a 'missing' moment so to speak.

Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

Well heck, can I go to Isle Esme? Wait, I guess if Edward isn't with you its not as much fun but I can try. LOL

Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Edward's Room

Now that is one heck of a wedding night.

Reviewer: laurelnola (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Edward's Room

Yay! Another “missing scenes” story by you!

“..savoring the way she looked and the way she looked at me.”

What a beautiful line.

“A century of long nights barely gave me the patience to resist simply pulling the luscious fabric apart.”

Ah, I love how you remind us that Edward hasn’t just had to wait the standard amount of years for his soul-mate- it makes us feel his desperation all the more.

““I am…” her eyes flickered down, “Am I enough?”

Awww! Once again, you give me a Bella that tugs at my heart with her insecurity.

“My shoes thudded to the floor and she flipped my socks over her shoulder, laughing nervously when she caught my eyes flicker to the side and realized one had almost landed on top of one of Alice’s candles. “Oops,” she whispered.”

HA! Typical, accident-prone Bella. I love it!

“I realized I couldn’t tell the temperature difference between us.”

This was lovely- it speaks so much about what holds them together, despite their differences- that they complete the other to the point where there’s almost no beginning or end between them.

““You’ll stay with me…” she drifted off and I wrapped a thick down comforter around her. I answered her question. “Always, Bella love. Forever.”

Sigh. A perfect ending, as they deserve. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful scene with us!

Reviewer: lexy lujan (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Edward's Room

your a great writer. i loved it!

Reviewer: 2footprints (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

Yes, so much better than what S.M had as her description. Don't get me wrong, I loved hers too but come on, we needed some DETAILS!!!

Great work

Reviewer: stray (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Edward's Room

Really in character. Good writing!

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

That was romantic. I loved the fruit scene. My fav.

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Edward's Room

OH WOW! That was HOT! Almost fits into "The List". RUNNING to the next chapter.

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

Hot and sweet all wrapped up in one cute fic - I agree, Stephanie could have elaborated a little more on the wedding night - especially since she did such a fantastic job describing all of the beautiful moments of them kissing and touching in the previous books!

Thank-you for the indulgence!

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

DAMN! That was erotic! Wonderful. Loved it.

Reviewer: jbess (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Edward's Room

I love getting more details on their wedding night!

Reviewer: pickeljuice (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

Everything I could have imagined and more that was missing from the wedding night. Now everything feels complete. Absolutly amazing!

Reviewer: michaelsgirl (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

I liked it...it was like a tiny little taste of "The List"...

Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

How could life be any better than that?

Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Edward's Room

great story line.

Reviewer: lexifisher (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

Fiinally, the moment I was wanting in Breaking Dawn and never received. You are a great writer, capturing the moment as we all had imagined. Thank you for putting it to word.

Reviewer: stinal102 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

W O W !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: stinal102 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Edward's Room

Oh, my! You write so well. WOW!!! Thankyou!

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

"How could life ever be any better than this?" Seriously! Fuckawesome l'il story...'nuff said! MWAH!

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Edward's Room

Sweet Jebus, now that's what I call a honeymoon! So beautifully written...tender, passionate...blissful!

Reviewer: noxetdies (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

Thank god for fan fiction. Scenes like this were greatly missed in the books. Well done!

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