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Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Edward's Room

well I would love to see your own non fanfic writing.  Point me in the direction when you are ready.  I'm an avid reader...of absolutely anything.



Author's Response:

Would love to.  Maybe I'll do well enough in the amazon contest that my excerpt will get posted for public viewing...won't know for about a month so keep your fingers crossed!

Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Edward's Room

Edward naked in the candlelight....nearly as good as a wet naked Edward, I can live with that!

Don't know how I missed these storys, beautiful, sensitive writing.  I can really believe its them during the fade to black time of BD. 

Don't know how you could make these better for the purposes of the list.  Maybe make them longer by expanding on their thoughts and feelings more.  But honestly they are beautiful as one shots.

You are gifted woman! these are some first efforts!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Yes, these were my first forays into fanfic back when I was just starting to get my writing juices flowing before I started my novel.  Then I had to swear myself off of fanfic for a few months so I could concentrate on my own stuff...

Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

First of all, eating fruit salad will never be the same for me!!  You have given me oh so many naughty ideas for my upcoming trip to Hawaii! (And hubby is still reeling from "The List"!)  Second, I'm sorry to do this to you, but I believe I must plagiarize a sentence from you, "Now, fuck me before I die wanting you."   "Nuff said!  And lastly, thank you for spelling facade and risque correctly.  You rock, my dear! 



Author's Response:

Uh--you're going to Hawaii!?!  That's awesome.  I hope you and hubby ENJOY!  Glad you liked, and plagiarize away! 

Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Edward's Room

I decided I have now become a Laura Cullen whore...wheresoever you write, I shall review!!

 

Lovely, lovely take on first night, esp. Bella awakening and not knowing if it was real or a dream...thought you were going to turn it into a dream and be a little tease about it, but I got my release in there after all...nice.



Author's Response:

Never have I seen more enthralling words--my very own whore!  Couldn't ask for anything else!!!!

Reviewer: Bonafide Deviant (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Edward's Room

Wonderfully well written!  I am impressed by your style, creativity, and the incredibly sexy and yet beautiful encounters that occurred between Edward and Bella.  Ah, I so want to be Bella!  I appreciate a good randy story, but this was much more than that, a beautiful love story that was entoxicatingly erotic!  Thank you! 



Author's Response:

Awesome review--glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Edward's Room

This is a great story to read before going to bed :) Wonderful job with the details!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed!!!

Reviewer: redvampee (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

Nicely done...entertaining, fun, and sexy...yet true to the beloved characters.  Keep it up and keep it coming!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the great feedback and encouragement!

Reviewer: Arafinn (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Edward's Room

Iregistered with this site soley to give you feed back.  You are a wonderful author with exquisite despriptions of something that is both hot and beautiful all at the same time :)  Please dont stop writing!  You have a gift!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much--your words are kind and encouraging.  I have two other stories going right now but have been thinking about retooling this and making it into a broader story rather than the series of one shots it turned out to be.  These were my first effort at fan fiction....thanks again!

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 06:05 PM · On: Edward's Room

wonderful detail and insite into Edwards struggle for contol.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 05:18 PM · On: Edward's Room

wonderful detail and insite into Edwards struggle for contol.

Reviewer: Sumsums (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

i love this!!!!!!!!! you should do more!

Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2008 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

Very well written.  Keep up the great work,

Jace



Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement!

Reviewer: InnerAnomaly (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

good lord.

very smexxy.  



Author's Response: Smexxy is an excellent usage of the English language!  Thanks!

Reviewer: InnerAnomaly (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 01:49 PM · On: Edward's Room

uh...  HOLY HOTTNESS!!!

Wow.

Perhaps you should write some of these for the other Twilight couples... 

Seriously hot, well written. 



Author's Response: Thanks!  I appreciate the feedback!

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