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Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
whoo! shopping! lol
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
Whee! Bella accepts fashion? I like your Bella much better than SM's.
Reviewer: RomperStomper (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
You are so freaking funny, I'm constantly cracking up at the inner dialogues you have going.
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
you cant leave it there dammit moreplease
Reviewer: claire de lune (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
i actually want alice to do mu hair... but i'm still reviewing! :) please hurry with the nxt chapter!! i'm dying here!!
Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
Cute story, I can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: bubbadoghouse (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
Very cute! I like Verbal Vomit Bella!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
I JUST LOVE THEM AS HORMONAL TEENAGERS WITH FUNNY INTERNAL DIALOGUE!!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
"Should I accept panties from stangers?" FAB!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
I really like this version of Bella! And the dynamic between her and Alice is fantastic. I like her admiting to having "not so innocent" thoughts about Edward. Totally hot. More please.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
Cute-Bella's thoughts are hilarious! Love this Alice-she's less annoying. I actually might like if Alice did my hair!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
Cute-Bella's thoughts are hilarious! Love this Alice-she's less annoying. I actually might like if Alice did my hair!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
Oh! This story is sooo good! More please!
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
Actually, I think having Alice to something with my hair would be great. God knows I'm bored with it at this point.
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
How dare you stop there?! ;) Come on!!!!!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
Great chapter! Gotta love Alice! And I'm very curious of what's going on in Edward's mind when he sees Bella in that outfit!! Please update soon!
Reviewer: Julia-Joy (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Damsel in Distress
hey this is really good can't wait for you to write the next chapter :)
Reviewer: Julia-Joy (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 6 - That River in Egypt
hmmm yes i like it.
i think the way you wrote it was great :)
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
Yes, I do notice some changes between each point of view, but but it's just the repetition that got to me, but I don't want to hate Edward haahah...you can't say stuff like that to me, and not dish out lmao...
I soooo cannot wait for an update though....I love this!
Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Damsel in Distress
loved it
Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
This story is awesome! PLease Please Please write lots more chapters!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Damsel in Distress
Great chapter! I always love Edwards POV.
Reviewer: srgarner21 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Damsel in Distress
I absolutely Love your story. Please do the whole book. You are a wonderful writer!
Reviewer: RomperStomper (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Damsel in Distress
I love horny teen Eddie Muhuwahahahahahahahaa
Reviewer: robing77 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Nocturnal Emissions
love the playlists...adds a little tongue in cheek humor=)
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